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Smmer

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  1. Changed Status to Pending

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    Hello! As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server. So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Smmer

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Smmer#7932

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

     


     

    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

     

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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    Hello! As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server. So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Smmer 

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Smmer#7932

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

     

     

     



     

    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

  3. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!


     

     


    Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or on discord.

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Smmer#7932

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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    As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

     

    Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

     

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     


     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums 

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Smmer#7932

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

  5. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hello! As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server. So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message  Smmer 

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Smmer#7932

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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    As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

     

    Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

     

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     


     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or on discord

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Smmer#7932

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

  7. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    Hiya! I just have a few edit's I need to ask you to make before we can accept you onto lotc :)!

     

    - Your powergaming definition isn't quite there, I'm going to ask if you can make an attempt and rewrite it.

    You can use this link HERE to see an example/definition.

     

    - Unfortunately after review, I have to ask you to find a more suitable skin to use on lotc. I will provide you with a link to a Free to Use skin database where you can find a temporary skin to use until you can find a skinner to commission.

    https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home 

     

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or on discord

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Smmer#7932

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    Hiya! Your app is looking great but there are a few things you need to change for me.

     

    - Both your Powergaming & Metagaming definitions need to be re-written and filled out correctly, you can find the definition and some examples

    Here to help you write.

     

    - Unfortunately you cannot be written into the lore as a princess through your whitelist application unless someone else has invited you to be one, I would suggest trying to write a new story for your character one that maybe involves her wishing to become one as such things as titles and nobility are earnt through progression in game. 

     

    - I am going to ask that you re-write what your character fears, and what your character wants to achieve as you need a few more sentences and added detail.

     

    Overall I want you to take some time to re-work your application, I want you to try by adding some more sentences to each of your answers so we can understand your character better.

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or on discord

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @Smmer#7932

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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    As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

     

    Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

     

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     


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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    Hi there, your application is looking awesome!

    However, a few things that need changing before we can accept you is:

    - Unfortunately characters cannot have magic nor wings right off of the bat. These are things that can be taught or given in roleplay. All I need from you is to make edits in your character description and re-write your backstory, only the parts where you have written your character has learnt magic and grew wings need to be removed. 

     

    - If you're able to please try to add a few more sentences (doesn't have to be a paragraph don't worry) to your;

    What does your character want to achieve?

    What does your character fear? 

     

    - Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

    Metagaming & Powergaming - Lord of the Craft

     

     

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!


     

     



     

    Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums.

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ Smmer#7932

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. 

    Unfortunately we do not have anthropomorphic deer creatures as of present, however I can suggest that maybe you could have your wood elf wear horns and a deer mask in place of being an actual deer. I would also suggest adding some more detail to the characteristics and personality of Loki after you've made adjustments to the physical description and edited the parts where you've referenced them as a deer rather than an elf. The beginning introduction of your characters story will also need to be changed as it mentions deer folk.

     

    I would also recommend looking at planet minecraft for some FTU woodelf skins that you can use temporarily on the server until you can get a proper one to fit Loki. As we cannot accept the skin chosen by you due to the lore/race limitations. 

    Races - Lord of the Craft

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!


     

     



     

    Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? 

     message or add me on discord @ Smmer#7932

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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