Elfen_

MC Name:

         _Elven

Character's Name:

         Xiu Li

Character's Age:

         10

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

         Hou-zi (Laobai-zi)

Transformed form:

         N/A

Creator's MC Name:

         N/A

Creator's RP Name:

         N/A

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

Houzi were created by Metztli, a now deceased Daemon on the land of Axios. Metztli aimed to create a race comparable to the Descendants. Using beast as a guide, she came upon primates and noticed how they acted and were already humanoid.
The Hou-zi are split into three sub-races.
The Laobai-Zhu or Laobai-zi(singular). This subrace generally is more akin to like a chimp or a common monkey. They aren't very tall or big, infact they are rather on the smaller side. However, they are more able to adapt to their environment compared to the others. They also love being social and prone to being energetic and childish.
The Fei-zhu or Fei-zi(singular) tend to have the bigger population amongst the Hou-zi. Their general appearance is akin to Baboons or Mandrills. They have elegant looking fur coats and large fangs that don't actually aid them and are more for show. Often they are stoic but can be prone to fits of violence. Due to the fact they were in the warrior caste they take pride in hobbies of sports, martial faire or activities involving their culture and history.
The Zhihui-Zhu or Zhuihui-Zi(singular) are probably the more rare of the subraces. They super big and resemble that of an Orangutan. Easily be identified by their wide and flat faces, fur colors with the hues of oranges and reds. They like to have bright orange breads and large guts. They are the most passive of the bunch and may seem generally slower. However despite this they are actually the most intelligent of the bunch!

Hou-zi have strength comparable to a human's thus their grip cannot do more anymore harm and is more so more akin to like a vice/clamp.
While their have a better sense of balance which means something that may knock someone else down may not knock down a Hou-zi however, they're still prone to tackling and will take damage from anything concussive.
Their ability to move stuff with their tail/feet isn't something that can be used in combat.
Hou-zi also have lesser souls thus limiting what they can learn.
Unable to create legacy hou-zi with legacy hou-zi.
 

If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

A darker brown hou-zii with a medium tannish skin. They have a rather small build look to them.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         N/A

Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

         Yes

Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

         I understand

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         Have not.

MC Name: _Elfen

RP Name: Aerith

Persona ID: 79586

This could be a very neat change. So long as it ends up allowing for customizability like everyone else ask for. 

Shields are iconic imo

MC Name:

         _Elfen

Character's Name:

         Epronne

Character's Age:

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

         N/A

Transformed form:

         Homunculi

Creator's MC Name:

         Bubbleseventalt

Creator's RP Name:

         Hesperia

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

Homunculi are born from alchemy means that bear the form of a humanoid based on descendants. They do not age, they do not have a soul and thus struggle to feel any sort of raw emotion and generally will only mimic/feign feelings. They have better healing capabilities in which they can even healed after being killed except if they drink a Juliet's potion in which they turn to stone and PK.

They cannot take any magics. These magics can include spiritual, arcane, dark and deific. They are very weak to voidal magic and will avoid it at all cost no matter how small or benign it may be.  They do have innate gravitation towards learning. Due to their nature they tend to understand the material alphabet and derive Alchemic Signs from materials if they were to inspect them up close. Despite this, if they were to pursue alchemy they would need to be taught by a teacher. 

If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

This particular homunculi would resemble that of a female high elf with blue eyes and platinum blonde hair. However, they would only stand at about three and half feet tall.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         N/A

Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

         Yes

Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

         I understand

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         N/A

Neat concept, do hope mapdevs look at this and draw some inspiration. 

Also, from what I found in a recent your view thread is Alamaris is 7.5k by 7.5k and they had a 4k x 4k swuare in the middle is pretty much half the size so, I think a map size around 5-6k(Give or take) would be best.

 

I read A'daragon as "A Dragon" then stop myself and pronounce the second a.
Was thinking of getting a new character. I'll think on this and come back if the spots havent been filled yet. 
Would it be fine if I join the discord to learn more?

Road need to be easy to follow and understand. A lot of the times, I start to have issues with roads when they branch off at weird places or end up going up large hills/mountains. 

I think that CT being center of map is the best and avoid the need for additional hubs since all roads led to Rome.

I do wonder rather than a circle, its more a spiderweb type of design.(Dunno just a random thought).

I  think circles have great potential if done right. From what I heard the issue with the circle was no one could build in the circle so anyone to far out from it, was out of luck. Perhaps work on that kink and see what can be done.

I think best road is Aegis though.
 

Do you ever find yourself feeling old because someone in ooc said something about having to go t school or something school related to just straight up their parents telling them to do something?

What do you think the ratio of old to young people is?

When will Glee and Pandora finally reunit after 9 or years?

Good to see you around buddy and caring about the community. I find that myself, still care which is why even after a breaks even if they exist multiple years, I end up back to check stuff out. LOTC has definitely been a huge part of my childhood.

 

Wow, this must taken sometime to do(Something I was gonna do myself but never share because I am evil like that). While slightly outdated due to the fact the map and builds progress a lot, it's pretty much all there. All roads and areas you can go to. Good work.

I say remove them but offer people who wish to keep to keep a topic they have posted in it to be moved to its appropriate forum section.

what if i have an orc that i havent really played yet. That's the real question.

1 hour ago, Freema said:

 

Something new to look forward to and break the mold, thank you.

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The minute I saw 300 boats in the CT Harbor, I knew we were trying to one up blizzard and beat them before their xpac comes out.

Glee idly rocks in some rocking chair thinking if this will somehow turn into another world war.

32 minutes ago, TankM1A2 said:

Yeah, take that Dumb Onions!

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Hey look its you in the background. No idea why you're there but, hey, whatever floats your boat.

also now im hungry

Vault tec is why the world becomes a wasteland.. smh

"Can I just sail a boat over? Nae sense in makin' a new one!"

Coolio, a shitpost about me.

4 hours ago, Blundermore said:

I wanted to ask, in instances for materials gathering such as the collection of gravel, sand, stone amongst other materials such as clay and the likes, materials that usually require heavy landscarring in order to gather enough material to be used in large building projects, will the mining worlds suffice in providing these materials instead so that we can keep our rivers sandy and full of clay and our world less stripped mined for stone to create cities and towns with? Or else the Orcs are going to have a rather rude awakening with half the desert mysteriously vanishing overnight at the same time a rather nice looking sandstone city shows up on the map.

 

 

In aegis for example The Ascended had a Sandstone/sand mine for the specific intent of trying to reduce landscarring. 

 

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i'd imagine(don't hold me to this) along with mining world, there probably will be a resource island(like we got now) in which have pits that can be requested to whatever material you wish to farm. Though, I suppose Sporadic would know more!

Alright most notable I want to be changed/added:

• Make chainmail armor craftable. Nice to have a 3rd option since now diamond armor is gone(Hooray)
• Add back custom foods. Often like many others enjoyed various name food instead of just having "bread" being rp'd as panckes even tho its name is bread.
• I don't know about force removing characters after 6months. Seems meh. Maybe get rid of that or change it to be higher(1yr+)

Uhhh

down with the rebels?!

Yhh down with the rebels.

Other than that, nice video.

9 hours ago, Ford said:

considering how linandria turned out, im a bit cynical about how this new city will turn out under your architectural direction, but at least dark elves and wood elves are living together

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If you look there is screenshots of some the building done. I personally think the layout and such is overall much better than Linandria. Plenty of space too and not just a small circle.

4 hours ago, Senda said:

 

Totally welcome.. hey wait a minute!

 

Looks intruiging - are the yellow and blue sections also housing?

Also - the black section (Barracks) seems quite large compare to the space reserved for housing. Is that intentional (or just a perspective thing that I am not seeing right) and if so, what is the story behind it - is it going to be a MEGA barracks or a building that combines other functions besides the barracks?

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While I cannot truly speak for whatever is on Twilight's mind regarding the matter, I still can give my thoughts. And really, I think what it is is just a combination of those things you have listed. 

Man, I am sad. My profile pic didn't show up in the screenshot. Like how does a picture miss being a picture!?!?

Is this trademarked?

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