Friendly Guy

Moved to Denied Forum

It was a good story to read, And not even a bad application sadly... you need to use server lore please look to our wiki for LOTC related back story and lore!

Please reapply in 24Hours

Moved to Denied Forum

I understand English is not your first language, so their is some leniency here but it does make it very hard to follow your characters story,

1. Your definitions are close, Im not sure if its the language barrier but please try and rephrase

2. Your story, I simply dont understand the timeline. You have aegis but that was 3 ((Real life)) years ago please try with some more modern lore

3. More ambitions what happens when the undead are gone

4. More weakness's Can your  character swim? Scared of heights?

Sorry but its impossible for the Staff to refund every persons things that were lost, I lost multiple hours in building and crafting time. 

Moved to Denied Forum

We expect better from players who have been on the server for some time now.

1. Breif description should have some server lore or at least names of towns.

2. You did not need to make a new forum account for your new MC account.

3. Please link your main forum account

4. More weakness's ((Can he swim? scared of heights? ect..))

Please reapply in 24 hours.

Moved to Denied Forum

1. Your character biography is short and contains no lore of the server aim for two paragraphs.

2. Add more strengths and weakness's.

3. Your definition of powergaming is not quite correct please fix this.

Please re apply in 24 hours.

Moved to Denied Forum

You have yet to change anything from the last time.

Mainly formatting it is a mess to even review.

Moved to Denied Forum

1. Powergaming is close but incorrect.

2. Your character can't be royal, an important character, come from lands other than those in the server lore or have any form of magical qualities.

((Why did this need to be Pinned?))

Moved to Denied Forum

Nub ash wunt tu bi lats mate. Eur hur hur

1. your biography contains no server lore. Please add names of towns maps ect,

2. Your weakness's aren't what we are looking for, but you have the right approach. we are looking for "unable to swim"

"Scared of heights". Weakness's that your character could provide role play with and overcome.

Please use lore from our Wiki!

You have 24Hours to makes the changes please edit the original post and not make a new one. Private message me when the changes have been made!

Why would krug bless an axe to a non orc? whut... Isnt it the same for the hammer of the dwarfs? Such confused.

Everything i know is wrong.... Why random orc not rex if he has axe...

Moved to Denied Forum

Note to other AT's: Reviewed as the application before this one posted by same user had formatting issues.

1: Definitions are incorrect. You give examples but not the actual definition

2. The bio needs to include Lore about the server ((Names of towns names of maps ect))

3. More weakness's add things like "Unable to swim" "Scare of heights"

Moved to Denied Forum

Your Bio lacks orcish lore, you have two city names. Please include something about orcish spirits or even Krug. Show you know something about the orcs back story!

please reapply in 24 Hours

Moved to Denied Forum