Karon

Thanks alot. I will try to have as much as possible.

What about just beeing patient?? I posted my app 3 days ago and it didnt got watched so far, but if you check the apps that get accepted you will notice that these are from like 12 to 14 september. So just wait and dont get to nerdy about it. I can't wait too, but I keep the patience. And I guess patience is the key to win. I only would consider to repost after like 4-5 days.

I would try to fix the "all bold" thing ;). Otherwise its hard to read, and afaik "all bold" is a possible deny reason. But looks promising to me.

Just wait, I waited two days now and didnt got a rep from a admin/fm/gm/dev. So just be patient.

Take a look at my app. It may take much room but has a lot of depth. The lenght doenst matter it just should make sense and shouldnt be to short.

I can tell just by reading your charackters bio and the "what do you know about rp" part that you will get denied. Just telling, if I would be you, I would redo the whole app.

You should add some paragraphs and rework your layout. Hard to read because you dont see where one text ends and the other starts.

And besides the fact that you allready got banned, what the hell is up with your charackters bio. One sentence? The F' dude, are you kidding me? : D. Dude you made my day :)

You know you that can edit your post??

Bumping doesnt help. Tried it allready. Just wait and be patient. Patience = Key to win.

He is denied anyways for flyhacking, why borthering around with his app anymore?

Isn't right as far as I know, I've read an post on a ban of a player who got banned for griefing in the wilds. It only says that you are not protected by the guards of the citys - so you could possibly run into some outlaws or undeads. Also I would recommend putting some bold headlines in it as well as paragraphs because your text is very hard to read, though its understandable.

Dammn allready an answer, and I thaught I could get through it without answers. Nah I wont repost it another time, that would look dumb. But thanks for your optimism, I appreciat that. Hope to see you soon in the lands of aegis. Greetings Karon.

Ok second app here because someone told me that if and app allready got an answer you guys might dont check it. I hope you guys dont judge me for the little misstake of not beeing patient enough. Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: xyzasdf -How old are you?: 19 -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT +1, Germany -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, I think so. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Well, I am a 19 year old guy from germany who is highly interested in all sorts of fantasy/medival things. At the moment I am working at a local supermarket to earn some money while beating the time death till next year, when I finally can start with studying. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Approx. 10-50 hours -How long have you played minecraft?: Around one year now, I think. -What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I used to play RP on an german RP-Server as a Druid/Priest, spreading the will of my god among the population of the server and also helping those that searched religious help. Did it around 2-3 month, after that the project got closed and I stoped RP'ing, never the less I am still highly interested in RP'ing in MC because of the nearly endless opportunitys you have in the game. -edit- somehow I missed that "what is RP"-part RP in general means that you create a charackter with its own story and then start acting as that charackter as authenitcally as possible, not to entertain the crowds but yourself and the community you are RP'ing with. -What do you expect this server will be like?: Awesome with a very depth RP atmosphere, otherwise I wouldnt fill out that applciaton right now. -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Dont know the projects name anymore because everything related to it was taken down. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes I read the lore, and the rules, even though I dont really like how dwarfes are allways the retreated race, but guess thats a thing which will never get old. -Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Dwarfs, Orcs, Humans. -How did you hear about us?: In scuttles thread, about the TP he made. -Did you vote?: Yes, but one of the vote buttons leads me to a 404 error. -What was your favourite Law?: That there is no law in the wilds. Well at least there is noone who controlls it frequently. -What was your least favourite Law?: Paying for miningrights, but guess thats a thing which needs to be done, otherwise Aegis would be Wormland soon. -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Karon In-Character: Karon -Character Name: Karon -What is your Race?: Dwarf -Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Karon (Didnt you asked that four lines above?) -Biography: It all started 20 years ago, at the age of 15. I woke up that night, having a weird.. dream. Not sure though if it was a dream, felt different... felt like a I was in the head of someone else who lived decades ago. All I rememeber was that I..him..it climed up a mountain, a mountain out of pure ice, that seemed endless. "It" looked to the top of the Mountain countless times, just to see that the top was still far away. I dont know how long "it" climbed up that mountain but it felt like time itself stopped while I was in the head of that thing, I dont even know what it was - but everytime I looked through "it's" eyes into the ice of the mountain I was terrified and charmed at the same time. It looked terrifying but beautiful at the same time. Had the shape of a human with the beauty of an elve and in the same moment you could see into his darkest momemnts, feel and see so much pain in an unimaginable dimension that it would burst your heart and mind if you would need to carry the burden that lays on his soul. And while I was watching "it" through his head it seemed like "it" recognized me, and "it" stopped climbing. He just waited and watched into the ice till it seemed like "it" could see me, feel me..this nearly feeled like "it" was trying to control my mind, but right in the moment whent it seemed "it" could control me, while I was just doing nothing to stop "it", a shadow came from within the mountain - "it" recognized this to and stopped trying whatever it was trying. Now "it" was focused on the shadow that seemed like it was moving towards us - the shadow became darker and darker and I felt how "it" was getting.. excited?.. no it wasnt excitement it was more like joy. The least emotion I would have expected from that beeing, a beeing even darker in his soul then the death itself. But I wasnt allowed to figure out what happend next. As soon as the shadow was breaking through the ice of the mountain I woke up and recognized that everything was a dream.. at least I hoped so even though, that I knew this wasnt a dream. But this dream.. vision?.. wasnt the only thing that kept me awake now. I heard voices from the lower floor, it seemed like my dad was talkin to someone. I went downstairs to see who he was talkin to, but as I stepped down from the last step of the stair everything was quiet...dead. Noone was there, not even a tiny thing of life was left in the rooms, I checked all of them with the same result everytime: dead. All the wood was gone aswell as all the food. Nothing which ever had the "joy" of life was left, the only living beeing around was me. After I realized what was goin on I immediatley checked my dads bedroom, empty. Not even the bad was in there anymore, only the bare stone was left. Not knowing what was happening at all, I asked myself if I was dead, if I was just a haunted soul left alone in a world unknown to me. But right in that moment when I was thinking I could probably dead I noticed a little shining light outside the house. I forced myself not to give up on me and moved outside just to recognize that the light I've seen has just been a glowing insect. Beeing outside now, I looked around and I couldnt trust my eyes. The entire city (OOC: circle based city like in Gothic 1 at the blue faction camp) was dead nothing in this city was alive anymore but me and these strange glowing insects. I dont know how much time I've spent checking all the houses, too many I guess. From that day on, my fifteenth's birthday, I was alone. In a world I didnt know, a world that seemes just unreal to me. With the time I managed to survive in the wilds, I met wanderer and adventurers of foreign races, merchants and soldiers many of them teached me all kinds of useful stuff to survive alone out here, but not all of them did, once a theft tried to rob me, I thaught he was a wanderer who needed rest but he just started to fill his pockets with the few things I had the moment I left the cavern I was using as my shelter. I just went outside to get something to eat for us two, when I heared how he was trying to crack my tool-box, I went back into the cave immediatley, noticing that he tried to rob me I ran towards him to grab him but in my anger I cracked his shoulders just with my bare hands, I was afraid of myself, not knowing which powers were resting inside of me. He was just laying there and I just watched, not knowing what to do. He layed there for hours, till he died from the enourmous wounds I forced up on him. This theft changed my way of living, I now started offering my life the greater goods. I made an oath to myself that day, to grant those shelter that are with a pure heart and fight those that do harm to the pure. Also my "dreams" changed, now "it" didnt stopped at the point where the shadow appeared, "it" just climbs further towards the top, which still seems far far away... -Character Appearance: Blondehaired with a fenzy hermit beard. Clothed into cloth and leather. Below his clothing he isn't just a dwarf, he is 5 1/2 feet of purewillpower and muscles, hold together by a pure heart. From the outside he may look like a retreated hermit but in the inside he is what some may call a hero. -Character Personality: Friendly and unlike other dwarfes, hes open minded to all races. But dare to those that unleash his fury. Getting stomped by a giant would feel like getting tickled compared to his wrath. -Your ambitions: To achieve inner peace and solve the riddle of my dreams. -Can your character read or write?: Yes, I obtained the skills of writing and reading at the age of eight. My mother teached them to me because I was highly interested in reading, I didnt really liked doing nothing in the evening and so my mom thaught it would be a good idea to teach me how to read and write. Now after I've become what I've become, I really thank her alot for teaching me. Even though I dont know where she is now. -Can your character mine?: As a dwarf its my nature to mine. I learned all the basics of mining from my dad back in the days when he went mining... at least I think so. -Are you a capable builder? Yes I really think I am. After I managed to make a good shelter in a cave I started to obtain books from travelers and ruins, that I've found all over the wilds, collecting usefull informations all day long and improving my own skills with this new obtained knowledge. Some of these books were about the basics of structures others about living in the wilds and again some others were just cooking books or tales. But still they all held important knowledge for me in them - not least the basics about building simple structures and a very detailed guide on how to build efficent traps. I've read through all these books again and again till I finally started to use the knowledge I've obtained. My first buildings - simple storage rooms - and traps were awfull and I nearly died a few times because of my miserable working. But with the time I've managed to get along with the books and to imrpove my skills in building strucures as well as traps. I also think that beeing a dwarf helped me alot with this. -Can you wield a sword?: I've learned the basics of sword wielding at the age of 10 and from then on started to train them. But the real training was to survive in the wilds. I think this improved my wielding skills more then anything else. -Enjoy Farming?: Well, I dont really enjoy it, but it was easier then hunting in the beginning. Now I prefer hunting over farming, but you know, sometimes a good bread with butter and a mug full ale is all you need to be happy. -Does your character have any special skills?:] Yes, over the years I managed to obtain expert skills in trap building. Wild animals, foes and unwanted guests are no longer a problem for me while I am a sleep. No one managed ever to get to my house with out my permission. -A screenshot of your skin: http://s7.directupload.net/images/110912/oh4elto6.png -Other Information: Keep up the work on this server, loved all the stuff I've read on the forums so far. The YT Vids are good too. I enjoyed watching them. Also I like the skillsystem with the titles added to it, this will be a hell lot of fun to achieve titles. Dammn I love titles. Cheers

I am not a member of the staff nor do I got accepted/denied yet, but I would suggest doing the title of each sub-information in bold so you can read the text much better. You also should write what specific you know about RP'ing, I've read alot of apps that god denied because this specific part was not answered correctly. Left to you if you want to change this stuff or not, but I would recommend it.