Star

Here are a couple issues I have with your bio:

1) Your character is too tall. Its unrealistic for a 7 foot tall woman in Medieval times.

2) "Engineers" don't really exist to a broad degree in Aegis' lore. It is more of a fantasy server, not a steampunk one.

3) Just because your char doesn't know what happened to her parents, doesn't mean you don't.

Hello, uhm, can you check out my new an improved app? I've left a link in my earlier comment, thanks. I still can't personal message you because of the Array glitch so sorry for posting here again.

An in game GM just said to post my improved app here, so here it is. :)

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/18589-stars-application/#entry79084

I've looked up the 'Array' problem everyone seems to be having, some people might not be able to send you a message because your inbox is full?

I can't send you my revised app either.