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Denied for the following.

-Biography is to short.

-You didn't answer how long you have been roleplaying?

Otherwise good app.

Denied for the following:

-Biography too short and lacks effort.

-You didnt answer how long you have been roleplaying.

Otherwise good app.

Denied for the following:

-Bad formatting.

-Thats not an rp skin.

-Lack of punctuation.

-Failed to define rp.

-Bad spelling.

Denied for the following:

-Biography to short.

-Bad punctuation.

-You didn't define roleplay well enough.

-Expand your answers.

-Lack of effort.

I mean use punctuation..

Use better punctuation...

Hmm

Sounds interesting..

Here is another screenshot of skin.

MC Name:people884

RP name: Arion Orion

Age: 101

Race: elf

Gender: male

Time Zone: central usa

Brief Description of your characters personality: Arion is a skilled warrior and he is very loyal.

Biography:My character Arion was born into the wilderness. He grew up with his mother and father. As a child Arion mostly hunted, he was very skillfull with a bow until his arm was broken in a battle with some bandits. When it was recovered he couldnt shoot or aim well at all. Arion decided at that point he would have to use a new weapon. He then crafted a wooden sword with a very sharp point he killed many beast with it. Arion became and expert hunter by the age of 19. He now has killed over 100 animals. Arion is very skilled with his sword and has practiced with his father alot. One day he wishes to become a ranger and defeat the undead!

Why do you wish to join?: Because i am part of Aerials Templars and i would love to be allied with the rangers now.

Roleplaying skill(I don't want a bloody story!):I have been told my rp skill is very good.

What does your character prefer to fight with?(Include skill level too if possible):he prefers a sword

Can your character build?:he can very well

Any other special skills?:he loves to farm

Will you uphold every rule, and if necessary, enforce them?:Yes i will

Skin:

Biography and Answers need to be expanded

You being denied was for the Following reasons:

-Biography to short, way to short for a chance of being accepted.

-You need to expand a few of your answers.

You need to expand your biography and expand your answers.

Minecraft Account Name:people884

-How old are you?:[16]

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: [i am in the central time zone and i live in U.S.A]

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:[Yes, but i do make mistakes from time to time.]

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:[im a hardcore role player and have a Rp server of my own. I am a bit of a nerd. After school i would like to wind down by playing a bit of good rp.]

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:[less than 2hours a day]

-How long have you played minecraft?:[since 10-11-10]

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?[i know that role-playing is fun way to play a character or Assume a job/role or in this case a dwarf roleplaying is another way to act out something and or take the place of something your not.I have been roleplaying for a year give or take a few weeks. I have played on many rp servers not only minecraft but Gmod,WoW, and Swg.]

-What do you expect this server will be like?:[A fun rp server that i could possibly put alot of time into.]

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:[i have not played on any minecraft rp servers because there are no good ones out there. I have played on a perfect Gmod rp server called VentMob but yet it was shut down. ]

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:[Yes i have read all rules three times. I have read the lore and know alot about the server now. ]

-Name the 4 races on this server. Orc,Elf,Human, and Dwarf

-How did you hear about us?:[Minecraft Forums and Youtube. Great trailer by the way.]

-Did you vote?:[Yes all three]

-What was your favourite Law?:[My favorite was Have to Rp and i like them all.]

-What was your least favourite Law?:[They all seem reasonable. If i am denied or accepted can you please write what 1137 speak is, sorry. ]

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?[people884]

-In-Character:people884 or Thasher.

-Character Name:[Thasher]

-What is your Race?:[Dwarf halfling]

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:[people884]

-Biography:[His father a warrior and his mother a farmer. Thasher was to grow up to be a young squire but it all changed when the undead attacked. In an instant "BOOM" lightning hit and the farm was on fire. "BOOM" another flash of lightning hit the ground. Thasher's mother screamed HELP ME!. Darin Thasher's father ran through the fire and kicked the door open and said "Jessica hurry we will make it follow me". Thasher ran to his parents as they had made it out of the burning house. Darin then said "Thasher run to the cellar there you will find a sword and armour get it for me". When Thasher had reached the cellar he had heard a scream"NOOOOOO" in his mothers voice he immeideatley new something was wrong. Thasher then ran to where he heard the scream. Nobody was there not even his father and then lightning hit again "BOOM" Thasher then turned around and saw the undead. "BOOM" lightning struck beside Thasher who then fell down from the force of the strike. Thasher badly injured got up and ran not realizing he had a sprained ankle, he tripped. Then as the undead raised his hands to summon lightning Thasher saw a glimpse of white. Then undead was gone and a man was standing in front of him. Thasher thought to himself for a moment and then slowly said the word ascended. The ascended then was gone in an instant. Thasher got up and looked around his farm burned and his parents gone Thasher had one thing on his mind REVENGE. Thasher then stumbled back cellar and picked up the sword and then he said "This sword will vanquish all foes who stand in my way and it will rid the undead of this place". Thasher then decided he could travel. Thasher had a tough time walking but yet his anger fought off the pain in his ankle. He traveled to a near village that his parents sell their crops to. When he reached the village he fainted from the heat and exhaustion the undead caused him. A few hours later Thasher awoke in a bed with a man staring at him. Thasher recognized the man but could not remember his name and the man then spoke "Thasher what happend? Your bruised everywhere and i found you on the ground!" Thasher then blurted the word UNDEAD!

-Character Age:[42]

-Character Appearance:[Thasher is a tough warrior and has scars from his battle with the undead when he was a boy. He wears a black tunic with a bit of rips in places.]

-Character Personality:[He is a fearsome warrior who has a unbound hatred for the undead.]

-Your ambitions:[To rise up and stop the undead and become a skilled warrior.]

-Can your character read or write?:[He can barely because of him having to raise himself.]

-Can your character mine?:[yes, he is very strong being a dwarf.]

-Are you a capable builder?[yes, he has the ability of building astonishing things.]

-Can you wield a sword?:[yes, his father being a warrior he had seen his father train and knowing he would be a squire he decided to get a head start by training with his father.]

-Enjoy Farming?:[no, but he did gain a bit of skill from helping his mother.]

-Does your character have any special skills?:[An expertise swordsmen and a Very skillful miner.]

-A screenshot of your skin:[in attachment.]

-Other Information:[]

Denied, please fix the following:

1) Expand on your answers.

2) Define what role-playing is in your own words.

ok, i have fixed it do i repost as new or let you see it again.

How old are you? 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:[Central time zone and i live in the USA]

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:[Yes]

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:[My name is Austin. I am a gamer and i love to Rp.]

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:[1hr30min or less each day.]

How long have you played minecraft?:[since 10-11-10]

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:[about a year and mostly on wow,rift, and Swg.]

What do you expect this server will be like?:[A fun rp server that i could probably spend alot of time on.]

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:[i haven't really spent any time on other servers only my own. ]

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:[yes i have twice.]

Name the 4 races on this server. Orc,Human,Dwarf, and Elf

How did you hear about us?:[i searched on the minecraft forums Role playing servers. ]

Did you vote?:[yes all 3]

What was your favourite Law?:[Have to Rp.]

What was your least favourite Law?:[Jump block ban.]

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?[people884]

In-Character:[people884]

Character Name:[if any name i would pick Thasher.]

What is your Race?:[Elf]

Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:[people884]

Biography:[At birth abandoned but now found. I have grown up for years alone in the forests of Aegis. I have lived off the animals and nature. But now i have finally been found and been excepted into the city of the elves as a elven guard! i respect my job and superiors as they are the only ones whom i have ever depended on. yet i was lonely but now after those horrible years of the cold depressing emptiness i have finally found my rightful place among society.]

Character Age:[23]

Character Appearance:[he wears a green tunic with a few rips and tares.]

Character Personality:[He is a energetic warrior and is a bit honorary at times. ]

Your ambitions:[to become an elven guard.]

Can your character read or write?:[He can do both.]

Can your character mine?:[A little.]

Are you a capable builder?[Yes.]

Can you wield a sword?:[Yes.]

Enjoy Farming?:[Yes.]

Does your character have any special skills?:[He is a very skilled warrior]

A screenshot of your skin:[in attachment.]

Other Information:[none really.]

How old are you? 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:[Central time zone and i live in the USA]

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:[Yes]

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:[My name is Austin. I am a gamer and i love to Rp.]

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:[1hr30min or less each day.]

How long have you played minecraft?:[since 10-11-10]

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:[about a year and mostly on wow,rift, and Swg.]

What do you expect this server will be like?:[A fun rp server that i could probably spend alot of time on.]

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:[i haven't really spent any time on other servers only my own. ]

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:[yes i have twice.]

Name the 4 races on this server. Orc,Human,Dwarf, and Elf

How did you hear about us?:[i searched on the minecraft forums Role playing servers. ]

Did you vote?:[yes all 3]

What was your favourite Law?:[Have to Rp.]

What was your least favourite Law?:[Jump block ban.]

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?[people884]

In-Character:[people884]

Character Name:[if any name i would pick Thasher.]

What is your Race?:[Elf]

Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:[people884]

Biography:[At birth abandoned but now found. I have grown up for years alone in the forests of Aegis. I have lived off the animals and nature. But now i have finally been found and been excepted into the city of the elves as a elven guard! i respect my job and superiors as they are the only ones whom i have ever depended on. yet i was lonely but now after those horrible years of the cold depressing emptiness i have finally found my rightful place among society.]

Character Age:[23]

Character Appearance:[he wears a green tunic with a few rips and tares.]

Character Personality:[He is a energetic warrior and is a bit honorary at times. ]

Your ambitions:[to become an elven guard.]

Can your character read or write?:[He can do both.]

Can your character mine?:[A little.]

Are you a capable builder?[Yes.]

Can you wield a sword?:[Yes.]

Enjoy Farming?:[Yes.]

Does your character have any special skills?:[He is a very skilled warrior]

A screenshot of your skin:[in attachment.]

Other Information:[none really.]