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Eleatic

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  1. Jae, noticing the sign, makes a twitch of his eyebrow. He goes, pinning a note under the one closest to the temple.
    "Those who go to this settlement are guaranteed death, no matter fortification. If you sincerely have found signs of the Undead, in earnest, in this world, than going anywhere near them, and provoking them, might very well lead to a repeat of past events. Bad for buisness.

     

    All the best, and luck to your settlement,

    Elder Monk Jae, of the Monks of Wilven Adonan."

  2. DENIED.

     

    A few issues are here regarding your app, which, for your age, is rather well made. Your definitions are correct, and so on, but you have one major flaw, or, rather, three.

     

    The biography, which does include many lore locations, is rather short. A more detailed(you don't have to do it by much, another paragraph would make it perfectly acceptable so long as it fit lore). Your appearance does not fit wood elves. If anything, it would fi a more 'generic' elven race, as it does have fair skin and green eyes. The skin itself, too, is a link skin. Using a generic skin is fine, but you do need to edit it moreso than preexisting(though you were not at all judged/denied for that).

     

    Your weaknesses area is, large by large, 'fine'. You list minecraft mechanics(with our plugins, that you do show a knowledge of) and a single RP example. What I want you to do in your next application is add more detail, and RP nature to your weaknesses. Your personality section is fine, if a little short, and your ambitions are nice and short.

     

    Please re-apply in 24 hours, and please put this post(not mine, your app) in the 'Previous apps section) of your next app. Thank you for applying.

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