Pliz
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DENIED Put more effort and detail into ALL areas. Biography is about your character, not you. Please wait 48 hours to submit a new application.
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Accepted! Thanks for expanding your bio so we know why your character wants to become a magician. Be patient, a GM will promote you soon.
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DENIED. First off, we cannot view your skin. Second, please do not copy-paste an answer for the "What is Role-play" Question. Wait 48 hours to re-apply.
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ACCEPTED You had your skin in another application.
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DENIED Lack of effort in all areas, no description of "What is role-play?" You just tell us you have done it. Please wait 48 hours to re-post.
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DENIED! YOU MUST WAIT 48 HOURS TO RE-POST. AKA: 2 DAYS! The app was good, but you did not wait long enough :(
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DENIED Expand on "What is Role-play?" You tell us you know how, but you don't tell us WHAT IT IS. You need more details in your bio as-well. Please wait 48 hours to re-post your application.
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DENIED, I think your application is VERY good, but your grammar (especially in the Bio) made it extremely hard to read. Please Re-post a new application in 48 hours, with corrected grammar.
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DENIED, Expand "What is Role-Play?"
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DENIED, Expand Bio.
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DENIED Put more effort into it, and your skin link doesn't work. Wait 48 hours to re-post.
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HAHA GOT HERE FIRST!
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DENIED Put more effort into all areas.
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ACCEPTED Be patient, a GM will promote you soon.
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DENIED. You need a line of space between each question, otherwise it is VERY hard to read. Expand What is Role-Play, as you only told us you HAVE role-played, not WHAT is role-play. Your bio needs to be expanded, and 19 for an elf would be a 2-3 year old human. 200 is full maturity in elven ages. PLEASE WAIT 48 HOURS TO RE-POST AN APPLICATION.
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ACCEPTED! Yes, you have it. Be patient, a GM will promote you soon.
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Still having a problem here... Research RP a bit and PM with some fixes... You didn't answer how I wanted...
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Not sure when.
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Ye.
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HOLD IT, Expand what is role-play, PM me when you are finished
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DENIED Denied for not waiting 48 hours to re-post. Listen to me next time.
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ACCEPTED! Please be patient, a GM will promote you soon. Welcome to Aegis! :D
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DENIED Expand on what role-play means, it isn't always just about defending your nation... How do you act? Your OOC questions were completely bold, which causes it to be hard to read. In your bio, you just talked about daily life, and you didn't name Aegis' Dwarven nation.(read the lore!) We also would like for you to take a screenshot of your skin in use(your inventory would work) not the layout of it. Please wait to re-post at least 48 hours.
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HOLD IT, I liked your app, but I would like you to expand on your bio. I want to know a bit more about him training his skills, where your bio ended. Please PM me once you have made the correct changes.
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DENIED Alright, I see potential, but you have a large amount of grammar mistakes EX: some of your answers were bold, which made it hard to read. Your bio needs to be a bit more descriptive, and I don't see how your ambition comes in. You never mentioned wanting to become a magician in your biography. Please wait a minimum of 48 hours to re-post an improved application.