Undeadflayme

it should be at least 2 paragraphs. it seems to work for most people.

Personally I think the bio is too short. Most people get denide for a one paragraph bio. The rest looks pretty good though, but you should also make all the answers notbold and make the questions bold.

You should probably revise this application. The biography should at least be 2 paragraphs and the app looks kind of messy. You should make the questions bold and the answers normal. I got denined my first time for having all bold so you shouldn't get your hopes high on getting accepted with this application.

Wow, 18 is really young for an Elf. Don't they live to be 1000 years old?

Please ignore this application

WHOOO THANK YOU SOO MUCH ur previous comments on my first app really helped :D

u cant talk to him like that. LOTC is looking for good roleplayers so they have to be tough, but u should never turn down any advise he gives u. ive sent in 3 apps and havn't got accepted yet but eacj time my app gets better so u should do the same.

Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: Undeadflayme -How old are you?: 13 years of age -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific time zone/California, USA -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, I have been in the USA all my life and I have never gotten less than an A in English. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I like RP servers on minecraft as well as freebuild servers. I get good grades in school and play sports as well as video games. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I will try to come on the server at least 1-2 hours each day. -How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft since November 2010. -What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Roleplaying refers to the changing of one's behaviour to assume a role, either unconsciously to fill a social role, or consciously to act out an adopted role. I have been doing RPs for about 5 months now. I like the RPs that have some sort of base storyline in the experience. -What do you expect this server will be like?: I am expecting a lot from this server because I have seen lots of trailers and have heard many recommendations from friends. -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I don't really remember the names of the servers, but I left them because they were not the right size and/or did not have enough plugins to make it into a real RP experience. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I have read, understood, and agreed to both the rules and the lore. -Name the 4 races on this server: Humans, Dwarves, Elves, and Orks are the four races on Lord of the Craft. -How did you hear about us?: A video trailer by Reckreations on youtube. -Did you vote?: Yes, I have voted for Lord of the Craft twice and will do it a third time in a few minutes. Once i become a member I will go leave a comment. -What was your favorite Law?: In Minecraft my favorite law is no hacked clients! Everyone should be an equal player. -What was your least favorite Law?: None of the laws are my least favorite. They are well thought out and put there for a reason. -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Undeadflayme In-Character: -Character Name: Sharooke -What is your Race?: Orks -Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Yes i have one: Undeadflayme -Biography: Sharooke was born into a very poor family and usually was hungry for food. His family was at the bottom of the social class as most orks were. He began to walk at an early age and when he could he caught any pig he could find and ate it raw. At an early age he was very smart and always ahead of his friends. His family was killed by an army of dwarves and he seeked revenge ever since. He trained and trained and began to separate from his carefree life with friends and fun. He gained knowledge every day and got stronger with every breath. He was about 26 and a group of orks were going after the dwarves underground mine. The orks were recruiting any other orks who wanted to kill the dwarves and Sharooke knew now was his chance. Now was the time to avenge his family and he wasn't going to let the chance go by. About a year had past and only about 7 orks were left in the snowy environment. The others had died or too tired to carry on. Sharooke was 27 years old now and got stronger the closer he got to the dwarven mine. He could almost taste their blood and could smell the liquor on their beards as he took a deep breath. The others thought they should turn back; They had lost too many orks and would be outnumbered. So when they went to sleep, Sharooke woke the one other ork who wanted to fight to the death. His name was Canondorf, an ork warrior almost as feirce as him. Together they went in the dwarven mine and wiped out all the dwarves without a sweat. Sharooke, however, didn't feel satisfied. Those were not the dwarves that killed his family. Until they are dead, Sharooke will not rest and will continue to train along side his friend, Canondorf. -Character Age: 27 years of age -Character Appearance: Sharooke looks and smells like most orks, but always with a devious look in his eyes. He carries a thick, silver broadsword on his back that he took as a trophy from a dwarf. He has never used it as he thinks that dwarf weaponry is pathetic and sloppy. -Character Personality: Sharooke is very smart and never forgets. He will hold a grudge against you forever and there is no way you can make it up to him. -Your ambitions: Sharooke wants to take the heads of the dwarves that killed his family. -Can your character read or write?: Yes, he is smarter than most orks. -Can your character mine?: Sharooke is a very efficient miner as he mined a lot to get stronger at a young age. -Are you a capable builder?: Sharooke is an average builder, but he prefers to use most of his time to train. -Can you wield a sword?: Sharooke is the best swordsman within 100 miles from his home. -Enjoy Farming?: Sharooke despises farming very much. He thinks it is a waste of time and a job for weak humans. -Does your character have any special skills?: Yes, he can use almost any weapon against almost any foe and brutally slaughter them in a matter of seconds with no mercy. -A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskins.com/view/126051 -Other Information:

Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: Undeadflayme -How old are you?: 13 years of age -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific time zone/California, USA -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, I have been in the USA all my life and I have never gotten less than an A in English. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I like RP servers on minecraft as well as freebuild servers. I get good grades in school and play sports as well as video games. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I will try to come on the server at least 1-2 hours each day. -How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft since November 2010. -What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Roleplaying refers to the changing of one's behaviour to assume a role, either unconsciously to fill a social role, or consciously to act out an adopted role. I have been doing RPs for about 5 months now. I like the RPs that have some sort of base storyline in the experience. -What do you expect this server will be like?: I am expecting a lot from this server because I have seen lots of trailers and have heard many recommendations from friends. -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I don't really remember the names of the servers, but I left them because they were not the right size and/or did not have enough plugins to make it into a real RP experience. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I have read, understood, and agreed to both the rules and the lore. -Name the 4 races on this server: Humans, Dwarves, Elves, and Orks are the four races on Lord of the Craft. -How did you hear about us?: A video trailer by Reckreations on youtube. -Did you vote?: Yes, I have voted for Lord of the Craft. -What was your favorite Law?: In Minecraft my favorite law is no hacked clients! Everyone should be an equal player. -What was your least favorite Law?: None of the laws are my least favorite. They are well thought out and put there for a reason. -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Undeadflayme In-Character: -Character Name: Sharooke -What is your Race?: Orks -Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Yes i have one: Undeadflayme -Biography: Sharooke was born into a very poor family and usually was hungry for food. His family was at the bottom of the social class as most orks were. He began to walk at an early age and when he could he caught any pig he could find and ate it raw. At an early age he was very smart and always ahead of his friends. His family was killed by an army of dwarves and he seeked revenge ever since. He trained and trained and began to separate from his carefree life with friends and fun. He gained knowledge every day and got stronger with every breath. He was about 26 and a group of orks were going after the dwarves underground mine. The orks were recruiting any other orks who wanted to kill the dwarves and Sharooke knew now was his chance. Now was the time to avenge his family and he wasn't going to let the chance go by. About a year had past and only about 7 orks were left in the snowy environment. The others had died or too tired to carry on. Sharooke was 27 years old now and got stronger the closer he got to the dwarven mine. He could almost taste their blood and could smell the liquor on their beards as he took a deep breath. The others thought they should turn back; They had lost too many orks and would be outnumbered. So when they went to sleep, Sharooke woke the one other ork who wanted to fight to the death. His name was Canondorf, an ork warrior almost as feirce as him. Together they went in the dwarven mine and wiped out all the dwarves without a sweat. Sharooke, however, didn't feel satisfied. Those were not the dwarves that killed his family. Until they are dead, Sharooke will not rest and will continue to train along side his friend, Canondorf. -Character Age: 27 years of age -Character Appearance: Sharooke looks and smells like most orks, but always with a devious look in his eyes. He carries a thick, silver broadsword on his back that he took as a trophy from a dwarf. He has never used it as he thinks that dwarf weaponry is pathetic and sloppy. -Character Personality: Sharooke is very smart and never forgets. He will hold a grudge against you forever and there is no way you can make it up to him. -Your ambitions: Sharooke wants to take the heads of the dwarves that killed his family. -Can your character read or write?: Yes, he is smarter than most orks. -Can your character mine?: Sharooke is a very efficient miner as he mined a lot to get stronger at a young age. -Are you a capable builder?: Sharooke is an average builder, but he prefers to use most of his time to train. -Can you wield a sword?: Sharooke is the best swordsman within 100 miles from his home. -Enjoy Farming?: Sharooke despises farming very much. He thinks it is a waste of time and a job for weak humans. -Does your character have any special skills?: Yes, he can use almost any weapon against almost any foe and brutally slaughter them in a matter of seconds with no mercy. -A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskins.com/view/126051 -Other Information: This is my third attempt. I hope I did a little bit better than my last attempt and will be hoping to be a member of the server soon. :D

Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: Undeadflayme -How old are you?: 13 years of age -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific time zone/California, USA -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, I have been in the USA all my life and I have never gotten less than an A in English. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I like RP servers on minecraft as well as freebuild servers. I get good grades in school and play sports as well as video games. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I will try to come on the server at least 1-2 hours each day. -How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft since November 2010. -What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Well most RPs I have played have some sort of quest system. I have been doing RPs for about 5 months now. I like the RPs that have some sort of base storyline in the experience. -What do you expect this server will be like?: I am expecting a lot from this server because I have seen lots of trailers and have heard many recommendations from friends. -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I don't really remember the names of the servers, but I left them because they were not the right size and/or did not have enough plugins to make it into a real RP experience. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I have read, understood, and agreed to both the rules and the lore. -Name the 4 races on this server: Humans, Dwarves, Elves, and Orks are the four races on Lord of the Craft. -How did you hear about us?: A video trailer by Reckreations on youtube. -Did you vote?: Yes, I have voted for Lord of the Craft. -What was your favorite Law?: In Minecraft my favorite law is no hacked clients! Everyone should be an equal player. -What was your least favorite Law?: None of the laws are my least favorite. They are well thought out and put there for a reason. -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Undeadflayme In-Character: -Character Name: Sharooke -What is your Race?: Orks -Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Yes i have one: Undeadflayme -Biography: Sharooke was born into a very poor family and usually was hungry for food. His family was at the bottom of the social class as most orks were. He began to walk at an early age and when he could he caught any pig he could find and ate it raw. At an early age he was very smart and always ahead of his friends. His family was killed by an army of dwarves and he seeked revenge ever since. He trained and trained and began to separate from his carefree life with friends and fun. He gained knowledge every day and got stronger with every breath. Now was the time to avenge his family and he wasn't going to let the chance go by. -Character Age: 27 years of age -Character Appearance: Sharooke looks and smells like most orks, but always with a devious look in his eyes. He carries a thick, silver broadsword on his back that he took as a trophy from a dwarf. He has never used it as he thinks that dwarf weaponry is pathetic and sloppy. -Character Personality: Sharooke is very smart and never forgets. He will hold a grudge against you forever and there is no way you can make it up to him. -Your ambitions: Sharooke wants to take the heads of the dwarves that killed his family. -Can your character read or write?: Yes, he is smarter than most orks. -Can your character mine?: Sharooke is a very efficient miner as he mined a lot to get stronger at a young age. -Are you a capable builder?: Sharooke is an average builder, but he prefers to use most of his time to train. -Can you wield a sword?: Sharooke is the best swordsman within 100 miles from his home. -Enjoy Farming?: Sharooke despises farming very much. He thinks it is a waste of time and a job for weak humans. -Does your character have any special skills?: Yes, he can use almost any weapon against almost any foe and brutally slaughter them in a matter of seconds with no mercy. -A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskins.com/view/126051 -Other Information: This is my second attempt. I hope I did a little bit better than my last attempt and will be hoping to be a member of the server soon. :D

Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: Undeadflayme -How old are you?: 13 years of age -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific time zone/USA -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, I have been in the USA all my life. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I like RP servers on minecraft as well as freebuild servers. I get good grades in school and play sports as well as video games. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: At least an hour each day -How long have you played minecraft?: Since November 2010 -What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Well most RPs ive played have some sort of quest system. ive been doing RPs for about 5 months now. I like RPs that have some sort of base storyline in the experience. -What do you expect this server will be like?: I am expecting a lot from this server because ive seen lots of trailers and have heard many recommendations from friends. -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I don't really remember the names of the servers, i left them because they were not the right size and/or did not have enough plugins to make it into a real RP experience. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I have read, understood, and agreed to both the rules and the lore. -Name the 4 races on this server: Humans, Dwarves, Elves, and Orks -How did you hear about us?: A video trailer by Reckreations(i think that's how you spell it) on youtube -Did you vote?: Yes i have voted for Lord of the Craft. -What was your favourite Law?: I don't really have a favorite law. -What was your least favourite Law?: None really -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Undeadflayme In-Character: -Character Name: Sharooke -What is your Race?: Orks but later when im more trusted i would like to become an Undead. -Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Undeadflayme -Biography: Born into a very poor family and usually was hungry for food. He began to walk at an early age and when he could he caught any pig he could find and ate it raw. At an early age he was very smart and always ahead of his friends. His family was killed by an army of dwarves and he seeked revenge ever since. He gained knowledge every day and got stronger with every breath. Now was the time to avenge his family and he wasn't going to let the chance go by. -Character Age: 27 -Character Appearance: Looks and smells like most orks but always with a devious look in his eyes. -Character Personality: Power hungry and very smart -Your ambitions: To be the strongest ork in the army -Can your character read or write?: Yes he is smarter than most orks -Can your character mine?: Yes at top speed -Are you a capable builder?: Yes -Can you wield a sword?: Yes top of his class -Enjoy Farming?: No -Does your character have any special skills?: Yes he can use almost any weapon against almost any foe and brutally slaughter them in a matter of seconds with no mercy.] -A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskins.com/view/126051 -Other Information: