lucaiskook

Could some one please look at this...

i Just posted a new one could someone look at it

Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: lucaiskook -How old are you?:16 -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: CET (Switzerland) -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes i can speak English very well and i can and will use correct grammar -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am 16 years old and i am in a writing club in school. I play mine craft after i am finished with my homework every day. I am in to role plays like this server. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 20-24 hours a week. -How long have you played Minecraft?: since the beginning of Beta 1.6 -What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: -What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to be a extremely good and i noticed it is exclusive. I also noticed this server vary well done and lost of nice people. -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i left the other servers because this one is the best one i have seen and just by being a [Wondering SC] i have all ready seen how much work was put into this server. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I have read and accepted all the rules -Name the 4 races on this server: Orc, Human, Dwarf, and Elf -How did you hear about us?: i watched a YouTube video on it and i knew it was one of the best server on minecraft if not then the best server. Then i watched the trailer on the the MineCraft Forum and knew i had to join. -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: lucaiskook In-Character: -Character Name: Artem (Named after the God of hunt Artemis but translated into a boy version) -What is your Race?: Elf -Biography: Artem grew up with every thing an Elf wanted. He had a family friends a home and food on the table. There was one thing in his life he hated, he hated that he was a dark elf and he had to kill to stay alive. When Aetem was graduating from training class he had to kill one of his class mates, or he would be killed. The class mate the teacher chose was Artem's best friend, Haleose, who tried to run away from the school. When the time came, the teacher gave Artem a glistening new diamond sword. Artem walked through two big, black gates, a bright light filling the room. Haleose was there is the bright room; too much light can harm dark elves. Haleose was there tied up with his arms tied behind a wooden pole and his ankles chained tightly together so that his ankles were red, raw from rubbing against the metal. The teacher counts down from "20..19..18.." Artem looked into Haleos's eyes, which were filled with tears. He was trying to say something but his moth was covered by a dirty cloth.."10..9..8". Artem just wanted to put down the sword and help Haleose, but he knew he would then be killed.."5...4...3". Haleose stopped talking and look directly into Artems eyes ...."2...1.....NOW!" yelled the teacher. Artem raised his sword and muttered something under his breath, so only Haleose could hear him. With a flash of diamond, the blade had pierced Haleos's chest down to the hilt. At that moment, Artem gasped he thinks to himself "What did I just do.....?" (5 days after) Artem packed up his things that he had brought to training. Instead of going home to his family to tell them how he graduated, he ran off to live on his own. He was a 107-year-old elf with nothing but a spare change of cloth and a diamond carved swan that his mother gave him before passing away. He had heard of one place were he would be accepted in society...it was called Lord of the Craft. He set off for this journey... -Character Age: 108 years old (but still vary young for an Elf) -Character Appearance: Artem has Gray and black skin with white long hair and pointy grayish black ears and a black bow in his hair given to him by his first love. He has 1 small gold earring on each ear. On his hair in the front he has 2 black beads. He has a red belt that holds up his black pants. He wares a black bracelet on each hand and a black Shirt and finally he has dark red eyes like fire. -Character Personality: Artem is vary shy and does not like to use a sword but will if needed. He has a soft spot for elven girls. He is only mean if some one messes with his farm because he spends most of his time farming. He is nice to all species elf's dwarfs and Humans. -Your ambitions: Artem wants to become on of the best farmers and have great adventures with a friend. He also wants to travel to his home city to meat people of his kind. -Can your character read or write?: Yes he can read and write vary well. He spends most of his free time writing in his journal. -Can your character mine?: He is not to good at mining mostly because he does not like to be under ground. -Are you a capable builder?: He is a capable builder with more practice. -Can you wield a sword?: He can wield a sword vary well and has a degree in it. -Enjoy Farming?: Farming is Artems favorite thing to do is farming it helps him forget about life and brings him to a peaceful place. -Does your character have any special skills?: He has a green thumb and can grow any thing fast. -A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskins.com/preview/both/9/182886 -Other Information: Im sorry if the biography is like a story. If there is any other information you need me to add ask me.

all right the second one

right now i am testing witch skin link works http://minecraftskins.com/view/182886 http://minecraftskins.com/preview/both/9/182886 http://minecraftskins.com/preview/both/1/182886 http://minecraftskins.com/skin/182886

ok thanks for the information about the [] and [x]. English is my first language but i have a big case of dyslexia but i can do proper grammar.

incorrect skin format? why i had a skin you just had to copy and past it in to the search? and can i post my new one tomorrow

Ok i under stand, i guess ill start a new character like elf. and whats Unlorful Skin []

-Minecraft Account Name: lucaiskook -How old are you?: 16 -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: i duno but i live in Swizerland -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: i am american but i like to use (u)you ®are and stuf like that -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am good with Mac Computers if you need a question on Macs you can ask me. I im calm about 95% of the time but i can get Mad cuz well im only Human. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: i can play about 10-20 hours -How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft since 1.6 -What do you know about roleplaying?: I know things from fantasy to real life RP. For this server, I can tell it's fantasy. I know many of the terms, and races used. I know how to react to other characters, both negatively and positively. A RP on a server is a Character you play (example Yogscast) -What do you expect this server will be like?: An epic server i saw the vid and knew i hade to join. It looks like the best server i had ever seen. i have all reday noticed the nice GM's -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I left the other servers because this one puts the rest of the servers in like rank 10000 and this server is rank 1. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes i have and i respect them all. -Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves,not including the subraces, Undead and Ascended. -How did you hear about us?: I was watching a YouTube Vid about the server and then i wached the trailer -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: lucaiskook In-Character: -Character Name: Therous -What is your Race?: Orc (the best class there is) -Biography: Therous lived a relatively peaceful life with his father in a small village. Therous was always a bit smarter then others his age, but never showed it, always hiding his face and keeping silent. His whole life had changed when the humans has invaded, taking many Orcs', including his father, away. Therous never saw his father after that, and he became enraged, vowing to take revenge for what had happened to him. After his father was taken, Therous set off into the wilderness to train himself both mentally and physically, testing himself. He learned how to control his own anger, and use that anger for defense. Since Therous vowed to avenge his father, he had been running plans through his mind. Now Therous is older and wiser, feeling stronger in mind, body and heart. Preparing for the day he avenges his father. -Character Age: 26 a strong Orc that will fight for his Honor -Character Appearance: Therous is a tall, 6'8" Orc, rugged in appearance. He had long, shaggy hair that was mostly tattered, though he then got it shaved, leaving a short pony tail. His face is not the prettiest, and his eyes are blood red. His teeth stick out from his mouth, two sticking above his upper lip. He has a choppy beard, and like most Orcs, green skin. Therous mainly wears his tattered cloths, including his baggy, worn out pants, his tattered shirt, and a scarf that he wears, worn out from the years. Most of the shirt has ripped, bearing his skin and scars that line his sides. Under the ragged clothes he wears light armor, and chains crossing his chest, covering a scar on his chest. Therous bears a scar running across his face, from one cheek bone, over his nose, to the other side, the scar he was given when the humans invaded. He sees it as a sign of his vow. -Character Personality: Therous is neither noble nor a brute. Since he has been training for a while, Therous is not used to company. Therous is still polite when it comes to non suspicious characters, and ones that show kindness. Therous is not afraid to fight, so he will do so when provoked or threatened. Therous, despite his size, has a small voice, but speaks out when he sees needed. He is also willing to fight for his friends and would never hurt a fellow Orc. -Your ambitions: To avenge his father. And make the humans who kidnapped his father Pay for what they did. -Can your character read or write?: He can Read and write perfectly. -Can your character mine?: He can Mine vary well -Are you a capable builder?: He is not a bad builder but does not like to build. -Can you wield a sword?: He could wield a sword since he was a kid and he has gotten better every day. -Enjoy Farming?: He Farms for food and sells it for money. -Does your character have any special skills?: He has red eyes that can stun any pray he wares glasses to hold in the power but when he takes them off he is practically unstoppable -A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskins.com/preview/both/9/235255 -Other Information: LOL you would not Believe my younger brother took my computer and was messing with it and deleted my Character description and Biography and stuff lol i got it back here is the real version.

-Minecraft Account Name: lucaiskook -How old are you?: 16 -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: i duno but i live in Swizerland -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: i am american but i like to use (u)you ®are and stuf like that -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i help with computer Mac tec stuf. I play minecraft 6-8 hours a day -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: i can play about 10-20 hours -How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft since 1.6 -What do you know about roleplaying?: i know that its like you play a character and you make your lines as you go along but still stay in character -What do you expect this server will be like?: an epic server i saw the vid and knew i hade to join -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i play on 1 other server and i have not left it but this one looks totaly more epic -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes i have and i respect them all -Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves.not including the subraces, Undead and Ascended. -How did you hear about us?: lol i was waching a minecraft vid and i saw this ip in the persons ip list but it is epic -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: lucaiskook In-Character: -Character Name: lucaiskook -What is your Race?: Orc (the best class there is) -Biography: I grew up in Woodstock,CT spent 11 yeasr there and now live in swisserland -Character Age: 26 a strong Orc that will fight for his Honor -Character Appearance: Wearing tattered cloths with blood stains and rips in it fighting all who dont listen -Character Personality: Mean, fierce, and strong he is nice to woman. But not nice to men who think little of him -Your ambitions: to avenge his father -Can your character read or write?: He can read and write barly -Can your character mine?: Yes -Are you a capable builder?: not to well -Can you wield a sword?: He sees him self as the best Sword fighter there is. -Enjoy Farming?: He Farms for food and sells it for money -Does your character have any special skills?: he has red eyes that stun prey -A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4e ... 5471347168 -Other Information: I hope i get accepted i love the Vid But i dont have a skin :( and i have a Mac so i cant make one.....what do i do...

IGM:lucaiskook class: Orc Gender: Male i saw the Vid and it was Epic so i hade to join :)