Zeddicus Fyren
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Status Updates posted by Zeddicus Fyren
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Everyone add me as your forum buddy :
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Guys i'm going to sleep now, my insomnia has stopped temporarily and for once i'm feeling tired:)
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I've finished your sprites, please +1 the post and help convince the fms to pin the topic!
Thanks
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"Astorro says 'What a Fine Day it is Too!May i Browse your inventory?'The Shop keeper begins to show Astorro around, Showing him every shelf of every isle."
There are multiple points that you did wrong, i read through your app multiple times, and i felt that it could do with some improvements. Just check ALL the grammar, and you will probably be accepted tomorrow.
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I'm not going to argue with you. Grammar is important, we need to know if you can write, because if you can't, we can't accept you. Use this time to improve any grammar errors.