Aiden

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1. You did not wait a full 24-hours between your submissions.

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A hooded figure posts a note,

"Freedom is not having lying and deceptive con artists as leaders."

I do hope you really go through with removing the /ooc channel, :3

A cloaked and robed human approaches the board.

He laughs as he reads the original poster and all of the responses. Before walking off, he posts a note with big letters, reading,

"If you're going to make a reply, sign your name or don't reply at all."'

-Elven Sailor James

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Please wait 24-hours before reapplying. Failure to do so will result in a denial.

Reasons:

1. Your power-emoting definition is incorrect. You may use the forums or google to help you, but do not directly copy and paste anything!

2. While your biography was good, you need to add more server lore. The lore can be found on the wiki, here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage

3. Please expand on the ambitions for the future, skills, appearance, and personality questions.

4. Expand all three of your open response questions. Add more detail, add dialouge, etc.

5. There are bouts of power-emoting in your second O-R-Q. Perhaps expanding on the small fight between your dwarf and the shady dwarf would clarify this.

Message me if you have any questions or need any help!

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Your open response questions could have been a bit better, but this was a fine application.

Please wait for a moderator to Whitelist you, message me if you have any questions or need any help.

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Please wait a full 24-hours before reapplying or you will face an instant denial.

Reasons:

1. Your meta-gaming and power-emoting definitions are incorrect. You may use the forums or google for help, but don't directly copy and paste anything.

2.  Expand on the biography. What happened in those 150 years? Add more detail into it. Also, being an orphan is a cliche on LoTC. If you could think of something more original, it would be appriciated.

3. You have no server lore in your biography, please add some in. You can look on the wiki here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage 

4.  You are not permitted to be a mage via your application. (you must learn IG through RP). This is in response to being an 'enchanter'

5. You cannot go into the nether on LoTC nor are there sea elves, please read up on the lore. There are also no withers or herobrine.

6. In the first open response question you mention middle earth. Please read up on the lore, as this does not exist. There is also powergaming in this ORQ. You cannot be that skilled with a bow, nor can you deflect every attack and not feel pain to a punch. Please read up on the definition of power-emoting.

7. In the second open response question your character speaks a language that is not accepted lore on LoTC. Instead, you can use LoTC elvish. (Some of it is mentioned on my guide on elves, there is a link in my signature)

8. In the third open response question, as stated above, you cannot have enchanted items unless you obtain them in-game through roleplay. There also isn't magma cream, and as stated above you cannot go to the nether as it was RPly sealed.

Message me if you have any questions or need any help.

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Under review

Please wait 24-hours before reapplying or you will face an instant denial.

Reasons:

1. Make sure you know the difference better MMORPG/RPG and RP. Go here for a bit of help: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/83914-lotc-official-rp-vs-rpg-why-your-character-is-not-perfect/

2. Your meta-gaming definition could use a bit more.. clarification. You may use google or the forums for help, but do not directly copy & paste anything.

3. Please make your skin have a paler skin tone, as high elves are very pale.

4. Having your parents get killed by orcs is a cliche on LoTC. Please change this to something a bit more.. original.

5. There is a lore inconsistency  in your biography Please include something about going from Asulon to Anthos, as Arma'luna was in asulon and it is not in anthos. Also, as a side note, know that 26 is extremely young for an elf, still considered a child.

6. Please add a bit more detail to your open response questions, as well as dialouge.

7. In your first open response question, you use the word wow. Think a bit more medieval with your character's vocabulary. Also,  it seems that your character knocks one of the high elves out a bit too easily; you said something before hand and then your character being able to hit him in the head hard enough to knock him out seems unlikely.  Also note that it's a group of high elves, so they would probably react if you knocked out one of their friends.

As to those questions,

1. You could or you could try to find songs in-character to play. Remember to not meta-game!

2. Yes, but you could link it using control-V to paste in chat. (Using brackets to indicate l-ooc, (( ))

3. Yes.

Message me if you have any questions or need any help!

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I like this! Something interesting to have, but there's a drawback!

Good idea, Quav :)

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