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The Hedge Knight

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    [Denied]Application To Join

    in Denied Applications

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    After reviewing your app I am sorry to say you have been...

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    Your metagaming and powergaming definitions were taken from wikipedia, and were wrong.

    Please refrain from using words not your own as this is plagiarism.  
    Skyrim is not the same type of roleplaying that this server holds, it would be good to look more into the lore of the server and perhaps some of the videos in the media forums.
    Your characters backstory is too vague and rather cliche in use of your parents being killed by raiders. Please try to be more creative.
    Please put better detail in your strengths and weaknesses, as your weakness seems useless compared to your strengths, elaborate on that please.

    If you have any questions, please PM me and I shall try my best to help you. Good luck! You may reapply in 24 hours.

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    [Denied]Application For Epic Server

    in Denied Applications

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    After reviewing your application I have come to the conclusion that you have been...

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    You lack the definitions to powergaming and metagaming, both are crucial to being able to play on the server correctly. You also include the idea that your character has no weaknesses which is strongly frowned upon. Your grammar could also use some improvements as it was difficult to keep up with the writing. It's also required that you have a skin shown, and an edited steve skin may not cut it very well. You may find various posts that will allow you to request a skin. 

    You may PM me any questions you encounter and I shall do my best to help!
    You may re-apply in 24 hours!~

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    [Denied]My Application

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    After reviewing your application I must say that you have been...

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    Your application lacks any lore of the server in it's current state. If you could read up some and get some locations within the dwarven lands that would help make your application very good. Also, if you could fix up some of your grammar a wee bit. Those are the only issues I see.

    If you have any questions or concerns you may PM me! I am here to help in anyway I can. You may reapply in 24 hours, good luck!

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    [Denied]Beb3437-Application-Cave Dwarf

    in Denied Applications

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    After reviewing your application I regret to inform you that you have been...

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    Your bio describes much too little. You also skipped an entire map, Asulon, and went straight into Elysium. Now, the time of Asulon was around eighty in game years, this could offer much filling to the bio and make it a bit more fleshed out. Your definitions are correct, though the spelling could be altered some to look a bit better. And if you could elaborate a bit on what you mean by playing as an owl, that would be appreciated. 

    If you have any questions or concerns send me a PM, I'm always around to help! You may reapply in 24 hours, good luck!

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    [Denied]Human Application

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    After looking over your application I regret to inform you that you have been...

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    I read over your previous application which seemed very good. But you did not heed the previous suggestions. You should add more lore from the server, names of factions and such. This is my only issue with the application as it stands. Your definitions are fine, and your character seems to check. Just look for locations names, perhaps from your friends on the server currently and mention those in, that way it gives your character more flesh.

    If you have any questions feel free to message me, and I assure you I will help in any way I can. You may reapply in 24 hours, have yourself a merry night good sir!

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    [Denied]Ewflamekings Application

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    After careful inspection of your application I regret to inform you that you are...

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    You had no usage of the format given, now this could have been an accident but all of the application had been changed. Your definitions are perfect, but your back story could use some expansion and more lore added to it. I'd suggest that you use the proper application format and expand on your back story a wee bit more.

    If you have any questions feel free to ask, I'm around all day and all night, and I'm always glad to help! You may reapply after 24 hours good sir, enjoy your night!

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    [Denied]Application Submission- Joshoran

    in Denied Applications

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    After reading your application over I regret to inform you it has been..

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    All your definitions came from wikipedia, and none of them are correct. Your quote towards your chosen rule is very vague and could disprove that you've really read the rules. Your back story is just at one paragraph, and you require, at minimum, two paragraphs. For your next application I strongly suggest you do not copy and past definitions from wikipedia and use them. Instead look around some, then put them in your own words. Probably add examples as well.

    If you have any questions or concerns feel free to message me! I'm here to help in any way I can! You are allowed to reapply in 24 hours, good luck and enjoy your night!   

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    [Denied]Application Submission- Dardanius

    in Denied Applications

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    After carefully looking over your application I regret to inform you that it is...

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    Some of your geographic details were off, and your definitions for meta gaming and power gaming were those found on wikipedia. They were not correct as well. Also, consider not using such sources as you have in your next application. It's best you use your own words when writing the definitions. Your back story also lacks a bit, and is only one paragraph. It should be at least two.

    If you have any questions or concerns feel free to shoot a message my way and I shall help in any way I can! You may reapply in 24 hours my good sir! Good luck!

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    ~*~ Royal Wedding Of Kamura And Horen ~*~

    in Anthos Roleplay Archive

    Posted

    Gavin gets his blob buddy stuck to his head, he takes notice in the invite and pulls it out. After reading he maintains a very stern cold face. He shakes his head slowly, his face now growing in disgust "Why didn't the invite include a location..." He pats his blob on the head, then grows a smile not knowing that he was invited along with every other Adunian "I didn't know I was that important!" He stomps off, blob on head with a small jump in each step, now a happier man.

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