Quavinir_Twiceborn

-You plagiarized on your application.

-Plagiarizing again in any form will result in being banned from applying for a duration of time.

-Your character's biography includes no server lore. Try including next time information such as where your character xane from or any important events.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

-I would like to note that given this application was not made on a guest account it would have been put on pending, yet due t a guest account not being able to edit their application pending would not be viable in the least.

-Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are a /bit/ to close to the definitions provided on the wiki.  Try differentiating the wording a good bit.

-The minimum age for a character you apply as is 18.

-Your character's biography includes no server lore, or information tieing them into the world. take a look on the wiki (Accessable via the wiki tab above) for some basic information, such as what city your character is from.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

Accepted.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

-I would like to start off and note that your application would have been put on pending, though given you posted your application with a guest account you're unable to edit your application, and such putting you on pending would grant you no benefit.

-Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are switched around- and are a fair bit off. Take  some time to read the definitions linked ont he top of the 'add new application' page as to orient yourself better with them.

-Your application is strewn with typos and errors. Take some time to proofread your next application in the future.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

-You need to expand upon your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions.

-Your character's biography is a fair bit too short. try expanding upon your character's ife? How'd he grow up? What specific happenings brought him to the current place he is now?

-Your minecraft skin is an uruk-hai from Peter Jackson's film adaption of Lord of The Rings. While such would usually be suitable, the uruk hai is depicted rather explicity with the white hand of sauron upon his chest, and his helmet. This is a concept and symbol that while simple, is not present in uruk culture on Lord of the Craft, and hence bears no basis in roleplay yet only bears connotation from outside sources. 

(Theres no sauron to put white hands on uruks, but everyone who has watched lord of the rings knows that that is Sauron's thing)

I'd ask you do one of 3 things.

1: Edit the minecraft skin to not have the white hand.

2: Change your minecraft skin entirely.

3: Give a reasonable explaination for why he has white paint of a hand on his chest and helmet.

-You have 24 hours to make the needed changes, failure to do so within 24 hours will result in being denied.

-Please send me a PM over the forums once you've made the needed changes, or if you have any questions,

-You're hereby banned from applying for 2 weeks. 

-You plagiarized on your application a 2nd time, after being told specifically not to. Plagiarism is absolutely unacceptable, as stated in the application rules above.

-You may Re-apply on any date past March 14th. Posting a new application before March 14th will result in it being automatically denied, and possibly having your banned from applying status extended past March 14th, or having your IP blocked from the forums.

-Feel free to send me a personal message over the forums if you have any questions.

-You plagiarized on your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions.

-Plagiarism is absolutely unacceptable. Plagiarizing again in any form will result in being banned from applying.

-In the application, it asks you write a biography for your character. This is a definition of biography taken from google.

We ask that you take a moment to make a character, and make a story for them, integrating server 'lore' or information tieing them to this world, such as where he was born, or what important events happened during his life. What you wrote where it asks for a biography of your character is a description of them, not a biography.

-Please take time to proofread your application, as the lack of punctuation makes it exceptionally difficult to read.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a private message over the forums if you have any questions.

-Please wait patiently to be implemented ingame.

-Also, long time no see. If you dont remember me I reviewed one of your applications way back in 2015.

-Please wait patiently to be implemented ingame.

-You dont seem to know what meta-gaming or power-gaming are. Take a look at the links listed at the top of the 'add new application' page as to orient yourself with such, as your current definitions of meta-gaming and power-gaming are entirely incorrect.

-In the application, it asks you write a biography for your character. This is a definition of biography taken from google.

We ask that you take a moment to make a character, and make a story for them, integrating server 'lore' or information tieing them to this world, such as where he was born, or what important events happened during his life. Please actually write a biography for your character.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

-You plagiarized on your power-gaming definition. Plagiarism is absolutely unacceptable.

-Plagiarizing again in any form will result in being banned from applying for a duration of time.

-Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect. Take a look at the definitions linked in the 'add new application' page as to orient yourself with the definitions of such.

-Your character's biography is extremely poorly written, and is near incomprehensible. Please proofread your application.

-Your character's biography includes no server lore. take a look at the wiki, accessible via the wiki tab above, to orient yourself with such information.

-Your entire application is strewn with typos and errors, making it very difficult to read. Please proofread your application.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

-Your power-gaming definition is entirely incorrect. Take some time to take a look at the definition of power-gaming on the top of the 'add new application' page as to orient yourself with the definition of such, and than adjust your definition accordingly.

 

-You have 24 hours to make the needed changes, failure to do so within 24 hours will result in being denied.

 

-Please send me a Pm once you've made the needed changes, or if you have any questions.

-You failed to make the needed changes asked of you.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

-You need to expand upon your power-gaming definition, maybe use an example?

 

-You have 24 hours to fix the needed definition, failure to do so within 24 hours will result in being denied.

 

-Please send me a private forum message once you've made the needed changes, or if you have any questions.

-Please wait patiently to be implemented ingame.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

-I would like to note that this application would've been put on pending given you were a registered forum user. Pending is when an application is put into a state that requires a few changes, and the applicant is able to change such, and be accepted. Yet, due to the nature of guest accounts not being able to edit application posts this application has to be denied.

-You failed to include any server lore in your character's biography as required. Server lore can be found on the server wiki, which is accessible from the wiki tab above. Please take a look on such as to orient yourself with some of the basic in-character information of the server.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a personal message over the forums if you have any questions.

-You failed to even try to answer the question regarding why Meta-gaming and Power-gaming are bad for roleplay. Take a look at the links for Metagaming and Powergaming in the top of the 'add new application' page as to orient yourself with the definitions of such.

-In the application, it asks you write a biography for your character. This is a definition of biography taken from google.

We ask that you take a moment to make a character, and make a story for them, integrating server 'lore' or information tieing them to this world, such as where he was born, or what important events happened during his life. Simply saying 'sik m9' for your character's biography is far too lacking.

-You actually need to answer the questions. Simply saying 'not sure' is unacceptable.

-Your linked minecraft skin is not suitable for a dark elf, or the fantasy medieval setting of Lord of The Craft.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

-You were told to wait 6 hours before re-apply only one hour ago.  

-You plagiarized on your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions. 

-Plagiarism is absolutely unacceptable, and doing so again will result in being banned from applying for a duration of time.

-The minimum age for a character you can apply as is 18.

-Your character's biography is extremely short, and doesnt explain your character's life. There is quite literally more describing your character's unnamed stabbed thief friend than there is explaining the life of your character.

-Your character's biography includes no server lore. Please take some time to take a look on the server wiki, accessable via the wiki tab above, to orient yourself with the basic information and places of the world Lord of the Craft takes place in, and integrate a bit into your character's biorgraphy, such as where your character was from, or any important events that happened in your character's life.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours from the denial of this application.

-Feel free to send me a private message over the forums if you have any questions.

-Your meta-gaming definition is very very off, and it doesnt seem like you understand what meta-gaming is. Take some time to take a look at the meta-gaming definition linked at the top of the 'add new application' page, as to orient yourself with the definition of such.

-Your power-gaming definition is entirely incorrect.  Take a look at the power-gaming definition linked at the top of the 'add new application' page, as to orient yourself with the definition of such.

-Your character's biography is 100% unchanged from last time and you seem to've ignored the issues I listed previously. 

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-You failed to include any server lore into your character's biography, and refer to significant events that never happened in the world Lord of The Craft takes place in. Take a look at the wiki, accessable through the wiki tab above, as to orient yourself with some of the basic in-character information of the server.

-You likewise entirely ignored the issue of you not being allowed to apply with a character with any form of magical qualities. This includes the ability to cast or practice magic.

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-One is not allowed to apply with any form of magical abilities or qualities. One needs to be taught magic ingame and make a magic application to practice magic.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a private message over the forums if you have any questions.

-One is only allowed to have one whitelist application submitted at a time. Please do not submit another application if you still have one under review or pending review.

-Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are entirely incorrect. Take a look at the links for meta-gaming and power-gaming at the top of the 'add new application' page as to orient yourself with the defintions of such.

-In the application, it asks you write a biography for your character. This is a definition of biography taken from google.

We ask that you take a moment to make a character, and make a story for them, integrating server 'lore' or information tieing them to this world, such as where he was born, or what important events happened during his life. Simply saying 'he is a ''brawler''' for your character's biography is far too lacking.

-Please take some time to proofread your application, as this one is strewn with typos and errors, and shows extremely little effort.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours from the denial of your previous application here.

-Feel free to send me a personal message over the forums if you have any questions.

-Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are entirely incorrect. Take a look at the links for meta-gaming and power-gaming at the top of the 'add new application' page as to orient yourself with the defintions of such.

-In the application, it asks you write a biography for your character. This is a definition of biography taken from google.

We ask that you take a moment to make a character, and make a story for them, integrating server 'lore' or information tieing them to this world, such as where he was born, or what important events happened during his life. Simply saying 'funny charismatic athletic good guy' and than an anime picture for your character's biography is far too lacking.

-Please take some time to proofread your application, as this one is strewn with typos and errors, and shows extremely little effort.

-Why is your character called "The Blade"? Surely that is not his full name his parents gave him? Can you imagine: "Hello, my first name is 'The' and my last name is 'Blade', but you can call me 'The Blade.'"

-You repeat charismatic  and athletic 3 separate times through your character's biography, description, and interesting facts. Though some overlap between the 3 is expected, simply repeating such 3 times for all 3 questions is extremely lazy.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a private message on the forums if you have any questions.

-Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are entirely incorrect. Take a look at the links provided at the top of the 'add new application' page, as to orient yourself with the definitions of meta-gaming and power-gaming.

-In the application, it asks you write a biography for your character. This is a definition of biography taken from google.

We ask that you take a moment to make a character, and make a story for them, integrating server 'lore' or information tieing them to this world, such as where he was born, or what important events happened during his life. Simply saying 'new at the server' for your character's biography is far too lacking.

-Your minecraft skin is of a modern day child in modern clothing, and is not suitable for the fantasy/medieval setting of Lord of The Craft.

-One is only allowed to play as a member of one of the main races, or included subraces. One is not allowed to apply as a nondescript shapeshifter.

-One is not allowed to apply with any form of magical qualities.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a private message over the forums if you have any questions.

-You plagiarized on your definitions of meta-gaming and power-gaming.

-Plagiarism is absolutely unacceptable, and plagiarizing again in any form again will result in being banned from applying for a duration of time.

-You failed to include any server lore into your character's biography, and refer to significant events that never happened in the world Lord of The Craft takes place in. Take a look at the wiki, accessable through the wiki tab above, as to orient yourself with some of the basic in-character information of the server.

-One is not allowed to apply with any form of magical abilities or qualities. One needs to be taught magic ingame and make a magic application to practice magic.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

-You actually need to answer the questions of 'what is meta-gaming' and 'what is powergaming'. Take a look at the links at the top of the 'add new application' page for meta-gaming and power-gaming, as to orient yourself with the definitions of such.

-In the application, it asks you write a biography for your character. This is a definition of biography taken from google.

We ask that you take a moment to make a character, and make a story for them, integrating server 'lore' or information tieing them to this world, such as where he was born, or what important events happened during his life. Simply saying 'I am a fierce warrior and you do not want to know whath I have seen' for your character's biography is far too lacking.

-Please take some time to proofread your application in the future, as your current application is strewn with typos and errors, and is difficult to understand in parts.

-'Sir Elven' is not a suitable name for your character. Is he an elf himself? If so you should make sure to set his race in the application form as 'elf'.

-We ask that you give 'interesting' facts as to define a character, to set them apart. A knight using a sword is... expected. Its assumed for the most part.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a private message over the forums if you have any questions.

-Your explaination of why meta-gaming and power-gaming are bad for roleplay doesnt explain how either are bad to roleplay. Take a look at the definitions linked on the top of the  the 'add new application' page as to orient yourself with what meta-gaming and power-gaming are, as to better answer the question.

-Your character's biography isnt really a biography, merely a single sentence. That is far too short. How did your character survive being abandoned in the woods at birth? Babies abandoned in the woods dont exactly fend for themselves.

-Your character's biography includes no server lore. Take a look at the server wiki (which is linked through the 'wiki' tab at the top of the page) as to orient yourself with some of the basic in-character information of the server, as to integrate it int your character's biography.

-Your character was abandoned in the woods at birth- yet... somehow had thier brother die in their arms? What? How?

-Your minecraft skin is incompatible with being a dark elf. As dark elves standardly have dark grey skin.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a private message over the forums if you have any questions.