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  1. Out-Of-Character Information Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate. Minecraft Account Name:ratedrko25 How old are you?:13 Time-Zone:Eastern Time Zone Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:Fallout RP servers How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:A friend Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:Yes Definitions In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!: Role-playing:Acting like someone you are not and choosing the role of the person you are not Meta-gaming:Doing something that would need RP before hand doing it, EX:Knowing someones name because it is in the chat Power-emoting:Forcing the ones action on another without the others consent In-Character Information: Complete the following biography on your character: Full Name:Daneil "Niner" MacKenzie Current Age:22 Sub-race (if any): Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Daneil MacKenzie, a young ambitous man who is a little incompetent.At a young age Daneil grew a giant ego. He most likley took this from his father, John. John. They grew a strong bond together, and his father tought Daneil the ways of speechcraft, and bartering. John was not the best student and failed most of his classes. He was not that good at fighting either. If he ever got into one (Which was rare seeing how friendly he was) he would either try to fight or get out of it by having a friend fight for him, or trying to convince the person he is about to fight to think about their actions and stop. The town he grew up in had a good racial mix. There were atleast 20 of most races. Daneil slowly grew to be comfortable with each one of them, no matter how strange they may be. When Daneil was 10 him and his family moved away to the town of Ager. Daneil spent most of his time at a local Orphanage voulenterring to help the kids. The owner of the place rarely every showed up to see how Daneil was doing, he probaly just trusted him with the orphans. When Daneil was about 17 his father died while exploring local caves. Without paying any proper attention to the warning signs, John just walked in there and was killed by the undead. Daneil now fears what lurks in dark places, which is common but for a 17 year old boy? That is strange. One day the Old Man who ran the orphanage and a group of men who called themselvs "Sabbath" went on a rampage with the towns people. Sabeth is a group of bandits led by the man who owns the orphanage, they raid towns, stay in them for a good amount of time, then move on. 2 men (Who later met Deneil again) named Alexander Ciecil and Rafe Walker came on the towns people side. They took control of a weapon cache and fought back at the Sabbeth. Though the citizens were not combat ready there were many loses, any survivor was escorted by Alexander and Rafe to Ildicia to heal. Any civilian that did not fight fled the town with their stuff to towns that offered good protection. Daneil and one of the older Orphans named Delvin were out doing the laundry when they heard the screams, they rushed to town and grabbed Daneils mother, a guards sword, and fled. Daneil lacked combat like the rest of the town so there chances of survival were pretty low. After about a month of their departure they returned to Ager to find the city brunt to the ground and "Sabbath" men were guarding every way in and out of the city. The group was not that queit while they wacthed the town,This got the attention of the Sabbeth. About 10 soilders got their bows ready, and shot at Daneil, Delvin, and Daneils mother. They thought they were dead until Daneil and Delvin saw a man and Daneils mother shielding them from the arrows, the man survived with his shield, but Daneils mother, was not so lucky. The man took the 2 and his mother into his cottage not too far away. Daneil reconized him as the man he saw leading the counter-attack on Sabbeth. The man introduced himself as Alexander Ciecil. From another room in the cottage came another man who introduced himself as Rafe Walker. They took Daneil and Delvin to Ildicia where they could stay and get over the death of the Daneil's mother. Alexander and Rafe decided did their good deed and left Daneil. Delvin decided to stay in Ildicia and try to start a new life. Daneil set out, to be an expert on any ruin he could come across, once he learend how to properly read and write he would become a famous author about ruins and acient civilizations. Daneil and Alexander with Rafe still meet up with each other sometimes, they teach Daneil something in combat, he teaches them in speechcraft, and they have a good laugh. Alexander nicknamed Daneil "Niner" because he was the ninth person they have trained. Ambitions for the Future: To learn to read and write properly, to became a ruin expert Personality: Ambitous, incompetent, charismatic, egotistic, prefers to stay out of conflict. Skills:Speech craft to a certain degree, has high endurance; can run for long distances Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Whenever I try to post my skin my fire fox chrashes so: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/green-shirted-adventurer/ Any other details you wish to share about your character:I choose the nickname Niner due to the pronunciation of the number nine in the ICAO spelling alphabet. Open-Response-Questions Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point. ____ 1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do? Answer: *Daneil casually walks up the cloaked figure* Daneil:"So...what are you doing exactly?" Suspicous figure:"Umm....just....sending the Emperor a message. Now get out of my way kid, or I will make you!" Daneil:"Now there is no need for any need to get Violent. Now just look at the sheer amount of guards! I suspect you are not the courier you say you are. Now, what you are doing?" *The Suspicous Figure puts his hand on a blood stained dagger* Daneil:"You know what? I think I am coincidently devolp amniesa and pretend that this never happend, ok? Suspicous Figure:"Just the way I like it." *Daneil walks away in shame thinking "I hope I did not just cause the end of another persons life"* 2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react? *Daneils sits down next to a tree and takes his armor off and puts his sword away hiding it from sight* Running up to the cottage Daneil sneaks up behind the men giving the old man some sort of signal to throw his blade to Daneil *Daneil receives the blade just barely managing not to cut himself and using the training he learned from Rafe and Alexander he puts the blade aganist the neck of on the men and slowly make movements to slit his throat* Daneil:*in intimidating voice* "I believe you should leave about now.....but first, drop your weapons and I will forget about this, you do not want to know what kind of friends I have." *The men seem unaffected and not frightened at all* *Man 1 takes out a large sword* Man 1:"I would suggest you run, this affair with us and this old man means nothing....now leave before you see what kind of friends we have! *Daneil makes movements to slit Man 2's throat and slowly tries but fails to walk away with him* Daneil:"Fine, but you feel my real wrath later." *In head* "I am a god damn coward." *Daneil walks away with a feeling of failure lurking through him* 3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens). Answer: *Daneil takes out an assortment of coins that range from gold to silver to bronze and says* Daneil:"How many copies of "The Adventures of Grourge in Salvus" can I get with this? *The man just stares at Daneil like a confused child* Man:"How about I give you one copy for 1 gold coin?" *Daneil looks at the man in as if he just insulted his entire life* Daneil:"How about I take this dagger and shove it up your....." *In mind* "Get it together Daneil!" Daneil:"Well sure why not?!" *Daneil takes his copy of the book and spits at the man, and runs away wondering why he even bought the book knowing he cannot even read*
  2. Out-Of-Character Information Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate. Minecraft Account Name:ratedrko25 How old are you?:13 Time-Zone:Eastern Time Zone Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:Fallout RP servers How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:A friend Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:Yes Definitions In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!: Role-playing:Acting like someone you are not and choosing the role of the person you are not Meta-gaming:Doing something that would need RP before hand doing it, EX:Knowing someones name because it is in the chat Power-emoting:Forcing the ones action on another without the others consent In-Character Information: Complete the following biography on your character: Full Name:Daneil "Niner" MacKenzie Current Age:22 Sub-race (if any): Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Daneil MacKenzie, a young ambitous man who is a little incompetent.At a young age Daneil grew a giant ego. He most likley took this from his father, John. John. They grew a strong bond together, and his father tought Daneil the ways of speechcraft, and bartering. John was not the best student and failed most of his classes. He was not that good at fighting either. If he ever got into one (Which was rare seeing how friendly he was) he would either try to fight or get out of it by having a friend fight for him, or trying to convince the person he is about to fight to think about their actions and stop. The town he grew up in had a good racial mix. There were atleast 20 of most races. Daneil slowly grew to be comfortable with each one of them, no matter how strange they may be. When Daneil was 10 him and his family moved away to a town named Darintena. Daneil spent most of his time at a local Orphanage voulenterring to help the kids. The owner of the place rarely every showed up to see how Daneil was doing, he probaly just trusted him with the orphans. When Daneil was about 17 his father died while exploring local caves. Without paying any proper attention to the warning signs, John just walked in there and was killed by the undead. Daneil now fears what lurks in dark places, which is common but for a 17 year old boy? That is strange. One day the Old Man who ran the orphanage and a group of men who called themselvs "Sabbath" went on a rampage with the towns people. Darintena is a pretty rural town so no one is really trained in combat that much, only the small amount of guards stood much of a chance. Most of the civilians fled to Salvus or other cities that they heal in and that offered good protection. Daneil and one of the older Orphans named Delvin were out doing the laundry when they heard the screams, they rushed to town and grabbed Daneils mother, a guards sword, and fled. Daneil lacked combat like the rest of the town so there chances of survival were pretty low. After about a month of their departure they returned to Darintena to find the city brunt to the ground and "Sabbath" men were guarding every way in and out of the city. That is when Delvin did it. He punched Daneil right in the eye right outside of Darintena. This got the attention of the Sabbeth. About 10 soilders got their bows ready, and shot at Daneil, Delvin, and Daneils mother. They thought they were dead until Daneil and Delvin saw a man and Daneils mother shielding them from the arrows, the man survived with his shield, but Daneils mother, was not so lucky. Delvin did not care. Delvin continued to fight Daneil untill the man snapped his neck about 41 seconds later. The man introduced himself as Alexander Ciecil. From a bush came another man who introduced himself as Rafe Walker. They took Daneil to the next town where he was treated for his minor injures from Delvin. Alexander and Rafe did their good deed and left Daneil. They still meet up with each other sometimes, they teach Daneil something in combat, he teaches them in speechcraft, and they have a good laugh. Alexander nicknamed Daneil "Niner" because he was the ninth person they have trained. Daneil turned insane after, thinking that Delvin is alive, after him, trying to kill him. If someone goes in his general dierection for more then a minute he will go in some sort of rage and run away as fast as he can to escape what he thinks is Delvin. Daneil has a very limited reading skill and has to pick out words that he knows to complete a sentance. Ambitions for the Future: To learn to read properly, to became a ruin expert, to Personality: Ambitous, insane, incompetent, charismatic, egotistic, prefers to stay out of conflict. Skills:Speech craft to a certain degree, has high endurance; can run for long distances Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Whenever I try to post an image of my skin Firefox chrashes so: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/travelerpeasant/ Any other details you wish to share about your character:I choose the nickname Niner due to the pronunciation of the number nine in the ICAO spelling alphabet. Open-Response-Questions Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point. ____ 1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do? Answer: *Daneil casually walks up the cloaked figure* Daneil:"So...what are you doing exactly?" Suspicous figure:"Umm....just....sending the Emperor a message. Now get out of my way kid, or I will make you!" Daneil:"Now there is no need for any need to get Violent. Now just look at the sheer amount of guards! I suspect you are not the courier you say you are. Now, what you are doing?" *The Suspicous Figure puts his hand on a blood stained dagger* Daneil:"You know what? I think I am coincidently devolp amniesa and pretend that this never happend, ok? Suspicous Figure:"Just the way I like it." *Daneil walks away in shame thinking "I hope I did not just cause the end of another persons life"* 2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react? *Daneils sits down next to a tree and takes his armor off and puts his sword away hiding it from sight* Running up to the cottage Daneil sneaks up behind the men giving the old man some sort of signal to throw his blade to Daneil *Daneil receives the blade just barely managing not to cut himself and using the training he learned from Rafe and Alexander he puts the blade aganist the neck of on the men and slowly make movements to slit his throat* Daneil:*in intimidating voice* "I believe you should leave about now.....but first, drop your weapons and I will forget about this, you do not want to know what kind of friends I have." *The men seem unaffected and not frightened at all* *Man 1 takes out a large sword* Man 1:"I would suggest you run, this affair with us and this old man means nothing....now leave before you see what kind of friends we have! *Daneil makes movements to slit Man 2's throat and slowly tries but fails to walk away with him* Daneil:"Fine, but you feel my real wrath later." *In head* "I am a god damn coward." *Daneil walks away with a feeling of failure lurking through him* 3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens). Answer: *Daneil takes out an assortment of coins that range from gold to silver to bronze and says* Daneil:"How many copies of "The Adventures of Grourge in Salvus" can I get with this? *The man just stares at Daneil like a confused child* Man:"How about I give you one copy for 1 gold coin?" *Daneil looks at the man in as if he just insulted his entire life* Daneil:"How about I take this dagger and shove it up your....." *In mind* "Get it together Daneil!" Daneil:"Well sure why not?!" *Daneil takes his copy of the book and spits at the man, and runs away wondering why he even bought the book knowing he cannot even read* -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Fixes:Changed the ORQ so that there is actual dialouge and actions, changed most of thebio so that his parents haven no longer been killed by orcs, instead of an orphan he now volunteers at the orphanage, he is no longer ophan to retarded He-Man
  3. Out-Of-Character Information Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate. Minecraft Account Name:ratedrko25 How old are you?:13 Time-Zone:Eastern Time Zone Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:Fallout RP servers How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:A friend Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:Yes Definitions In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!: Role-playing:Acting like someone you are not and choosing the role of the person you are not Meta-gaming:Doing something that would need RP before hand doing it, EX:Knowing someones name because it is in the chat Power-emoting:Forcing the ones action on another without the others consent In-Character Information: Complete the following biography on your character: Full Name:Daneil "Niner" MacKenzie Current Age:22 Sub-race (if any): Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Daneil MacKenzie, a young ambitous man who is a little incompetent.At a young age Daneil's father was sent out to a war with Orcs. About 7 seconds after his father started fighting, he was killed. Being toldabout this left a scar on Daneil. He grew a hate for Orcs, even though one of his best friends was an Orc. She'rk, the Orc, along with almost everyone else in his town died in a raid.The Orcs that came left no mercy, luckily Daneil and his mother had some knowadlge of Orc attacks. The surviving soilders told themall the storys and that gave them the edge when they first saw the Orcs coming over the horizon ready to burn the town to the ground. Daneil and his mother, Julia, got out of there alive. Shortly after that they encountered an old man who owned an orphanage for people who survived Orc raids. Daneil was the ninth orphan adopted to get in,thus the nick name Niner. His only real friend was a human named Delvin. They spent all day together playing, training their combat skills, and doing brotherly things. One day the old man went insane. He burned the orphanage down and only Daneil and Delvin managed to survive that fire. They were the only ones out side of the orphanage when the fire started. Currently Daneil is unaware of what happend to his mother, he asumes she is dead. Daneil and Delvin stayed roaming the lands until they were both 21. At that age Delvin grew insane, he started ranting about random things and occasinly trying to kill random people for no said reason. One day he went too far. He came at Daneil with a knife, Daneil luckily ducked down to pick something up and Delvin went right over him, landing on his back, falling from a 10 foot drop. Daneil checked on him but Delvin had suffered brutal injures to his back and spine and, shortly after died. Daneil turned insane after, thinking that Delvin is alive, after him, trying to kill him. If someone goes in his general dierection for more then a minute he will go in some sort of rage and run away as fast as he can to escape what he thinks is Delvin. Daneil has a very limited reading skill and has to pick out words that he knows to complete a sentance. Ambitions for the Future: To learn to read properly, to find out his mothers true fate. Personality: Ambitous, insane, incompetent, charismatic, egotistic. Skills:Sword fighting, speech craft to a certain degree, has high endurance; can run for long distances Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Any other details you wish to share about your character:I choose the nickname Niner due to the pronunciation of the number nine in the ICAO spelling alphabet. Open-Response-Questions Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point. ____ 1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do? Answer: I walk up to him and try to stop him from getting into the palace. I talk to him a little bit and get out of him what he is doing. Seeing how Daneil is a charismatic man, I act as if I want what he may want. After getting what I need out of him (What he is doing) I go up to the guards and tell them about my finding. The man would then most likely then be arrested, giving me a possible reward, just adding to my ego. 2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react? Answer: I hide in the deep oak forest around the clearing and wacth what happens. As soon as I see the bandits make any moition to their weapons I come out my hiding and run at the bandits and grab one, not hurting the one I grab too much (To see what they were doing). After getting it out of them I either attack them or shoo them away, and threaten them. Either way I do it, I help the old man and get his story. After protecting him for the next day(by staying at his home), I decide it is safe and leave, giving him some of my supplies. 3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens). Answer:I walk up to him and take a good look at his items for sale. After taking my pick on what I want, I start by haggling. Being a charismatic young man, I have some ability of batering. I can do my best at trying to get that iron sword he has for sale, giving about 75 minas. Then getting to the food items he has on him. On me I have spider eyes, and 10 minas. I use this to get myself some porkchop. Which should last me about 5 days. I then take my final pick, a iron chestplate. This, being hardest for me takes the longest. I have to get a good 10 minutes of 200-500 minas for the chestplate. Finnaly i manage to get it for 300, and as an extra, a loaf of bread.
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