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    Alkheim

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    Thank you for your patience. You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. Please also read over our New Player Guide. Feel free to send me a PM if you need help. While in game, keep a look out for our monks who can help you in game with any problems you may have.

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    lucation

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    Unfortunately your application has been denied. You may reapply anytime after this post. Please make the following edits as well.

     

    Please just edit your prior application

     

    You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. 

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    MadHary

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    Thank you for your patience. You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. Please also read over our New Player Guide. Feel free to send me a PM if you need help. While in game, keep a look out for our monks who can help you in game with any problems you may have.

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    MadHary

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    ☾ ⇒ Your interesting facts require one fault. Please include one.

     

    You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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    arealniceguy

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    ☾ ⇒ Epand a little more on your definitions

    ☾ ⇒ Please make your bio at least a full paragraph. It is very short. Add events in your characters past.

    ☾ ⇒ I would suggest changing your skin, as that one is over used. We have a wonderful skin archive you can download skins from. SKIN ARCHIVE

     

    You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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    AdonisAeron

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    Unfortunately your application has been denied. You may reapply anytime after this post. Please make the following edits as well.

     

    ☾ ⇒ Your definitions are Plagerized. This is not accepted on our server. Make sure you are writing things in your own words.

    ☾ ⇒ Your Metagaming definition is not quite correct. Please see our Metagaming WIki to get the definition and write it in your own words. Add examples
    ☾ ⇒ Your Powergaming definition is not quite correct. Please see our Powergaming Wiki to get the definition and write it in your own words. Add examples

    ☾ ⇒ Your application is missing server lore. Make sure you are including at least 2 pieces of lore. This includes places, people, and events.

    ☾ ⇒ Your interesting facts do not fit the server.

    ☾ ⇒ Your interesting facts are missing a fault, please adjust.

    ☾ ⇒ Your skin is not lore appropriate to the server. Please refer to our Skin Archive for lore appropriate skins.

     

    You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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    Dim_of_the_yard

    in Denied

    Posted · Edited by MamaBearJade

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    Unfortunately your application has been denied. You may reapply 24 hours after this post. Please make the following edits as well.

     

    ☾ ⇒ Your Powergaming definition is not quite correct. Please see our Powergaming Wiki to get the definition and write it in your own words. Add examples

    ☾ ⇒ Cannot be from Aegis as a Human. Your character is too young, please refer to the Human Wiki to learn more about their age restrictions and what lands you can be from.

    ☾ ⇒ Your “qualifications” list contains lore-breaking elements, non-lore appropriate titles, non-lore items. This includes but not limited to:

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    Automotive Parts Interpreter Specialist
    Automotive Brake Mechanic
    Automotive Electrical Technology
    Automotive Engine Reconditioning
    Automotive (Heavy Vehicle - Mechanical) (Agricultural)
    Automotive (Heavy Vehicle - Mechanical) (Industrial)
    Automotive (Heavy Vehicle - Mechanical) (Road Transport)
    Automotive (Light Vehicle - Mechanical)
    Automotive Manufacturing (Bus/Truck/Trailer)
    Automotive (Marine Mechanical)
    Automotive Mechanical (Forklift Maintenance)
    Automotive (Motor Cycle - Mechanical)
    Automotive (Panel Beating)
    Automotive (Transport Trimming)
    Automotive (Vehicle Body Building)
    Automotive (Vehicle Painting)

    Automotive (Vehicle Glazing)

    Pioneer of The New Age

    Dungeon master
    Void Wanderer

    Graham the Nefarious
    Missionary of Odin
    Archbishop
    Faith-Bringer
    Carpentry and Joinery
    Civil Construction
    Paragon of the Millennium
    Civil Construction - Design
    Batman
    Civil Construction - Management
    Civil Construction - Operations
    Commander of the New Age
    Bill the Executed
    Civil Construction - Supervision
    Construction Carpentry
    Fire Protection
    Joinery
    Lecturer
    Joinery (Stairs)
    Battle Monk
    Roof Plumbing
    Foah the Faceless

    Painting & Decorating
    High Priestess
    Plastering (Solid)
    Pestilence
    Plumbing
    Roof Tiling
    Shopfitting
    Abominable Snowman
    Scientist
    Sign crafting
    Pirate Captain
    Wall & Ceiling Lining
    Warmonger
    Master of Illusion
    Wall & Floor Tiling
    Graphic Pre-Press
    Professor
    Print Finishing
    Wizard
    Printing Machining
    Screen Printing
    Emperor
    Telecommunications Networks
    Master Spy
    Baking (Baking)
    Detective
    Deacon
    Baking (Breadmaking)
    Chef Lord
    Baking (Pastrycooking)
    Master Tactician
    Baking (Plant Baking)
    Administrator of Heaven
    Officer of acrobatics
    Flexibility Inspector
    Chef Lord
    Hospitality (Asian Cookery)
    Lord of Fear
    Hospitality (Commercial Cookery)
    Abyss Walker
    Sun Warlock
    Hospitality (Patisserie)
    Tree Whisperer
    Meat Processing (Meat Retailing)
    Saw Doctoring
    Emperor of the Quiet Race
    Speed-lord
    Cabinet Making (Furniture)
    Sandworm
    Cabinet Making (Kitchens & Bathrooms)
    Furnishing - Floor Technology
    Furniture Polishing
    Administrator of Hell
    Glass Cutting and Glazing
    Papermaker
    Textile Clothing and Footwear
    Upholstery
    Knight
    Wood Machining
    Priest
    Aircraft Avionics Maintenance Engineering 
    Aircraft Mechanical Maintenance Engineering 
    Daimyo
    Aircraft Maintenance Engineering (Structures)
    Aircraft Surface Finishing
    King
    Aircraft Surface Finishing (Higher)
    Boat Building
    Paladin
    Engineering (Electrical/Electronic)
    Samurai Lord
    Engineering (Fabrication)
    Mountain Troll
    Engineering (Mechanical)
    Farriery
    Arch-priest
    Higher Level Engineering
    Chief
    Jewellery
    Locksmithing
    Shipwright
    Sky-lord
    Bowling Greenkeeping
    Keeper of the Keys
    Golf Greenkeeping
    Cardinal
    Greenkeeping
    Sage
    Nursery - Retail
    Medical Expert
    Nursery - Wholesale
    Parks and Gardening
    Templar
    Viking King
    Polymer Technology Blow Moulding Technician
    Polymer Technology Composites Technician
    Executioner
    Polymer Technology Injection Moulding Technician
    Royal Courier
    Polymer Technology Extrusion Technician
    Jockey
    Beauty Therapy
    Hairdressing
    Valkyrie
    Time-lord
    Transport & Distribution (Marine Engineering - Engineer Watchkeeper)
    Diviner Accountant
    Transport & Distribution (Maritime Operations - Deckwatchkeeper)
    Arcane Summoner
    Electrical (Appliance Servicing)
    Electrical (Electrical Machine Repair)
    Dream Master
    Electrical (Electrician)
    Space-lord
    God of Thunder
    Scoutmaster
    Electrical (Instruments)
    Skeleton lord
    Electrical (Rail Signalling)
    Necromancer of the East
    Guardian of the Sand
    Blacksmith
    Earl of Relations
    Thief master
    Electrical (Switchgear and Control Gear)
    Spirit Master
    Electricity Supply Industry Cable Jointing
    Nightmare Lord
    Electricity Supply Industry Distribution
    Overlord
    Magic Man
    Man of Magic

    Rat Lord
    God of the Transcendental Pyramids
    Sister of Camelot
    Chief of Security
    The Wall
    Consul of Defence
    Royal Headsman
    Apostle of Creation
    Electricity Supply Industry Transmission
    Minute Man

    Electricity Supply Industry Substation

    Electricity Supply Industry Rail Traction

    Electricity Supply Industry Network Infrastructure
    Electricity Supply Industry Power Systems
    Electronic (Communications)
    Electronic (Computer Systems)
    Electronic (Data Communications)
    Electronic (Scanning & Detection)
    Electrotechnology (Industrial Electronics and Control)
    Electrotechnology (Instrumentation & Control)
    Lift Systems (Electrical)
    Refrigeration/Air Conditioning (Mechanic)

    Forest Madman

    Narration Chancellor

    Count Dracula

    Shaman

    ☾ ⇒ You cannot time travel, not lore appropriate

    ☾ ⇒ Your character is powergaming by being qualified to be anything

    ☾ ⇒ Your interesting facts are missing a fault, please adjust

    ☾ ⇒ Your skin is not lore appropriate to the server. Please refer to our Skin Archive for lore appropriate skins.

     

    You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. 

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    Adzos

    in Accepted

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    Thank you for your patience. You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. Please also read over our New Player Guide. Feel free to send me a PM if you need help. While in game, keep a look out for our monks who can help you in game with any problems you may have.

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    Adzos

    in Accepted

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    ☾ ⇒ Your character cannot have any knowledge of magic prior to joining the server, obtaining a teacher, and an accepted MA.

    ☾ ⇒ Your bio confuses me. “Strange artifact”. I do not know of any lore approved artifacts that will poison and kill someone from just picking it up randomly.

    ☾ ⇒ Your bio needs to contain at least 2 pieces of lore, not 1.

    ☾ ⇒ Your skin is not lore appropriate. While dying your hair is fine, it is not really lore appropriate. Please look at our Skin Archive for some lore appropriate skins.

     

    You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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    IzzyPie9

    in Accepted

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    Thank you for your patience. You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. Please also read over our New Player Guide. Feel free to send me a PM if you need help. While in game, keep a look out for our monks who can help you in game with any problems you may have.

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    IzzyPie9

    in Accepted

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    ☾ ⇒ Your Metagaming definition is not quite correct. Please see our Metagaming WIki to get the definition and write it in your own words. Add examples
    ☾ ⇒ Your Powergaming definition is not quite correct. Please see our Powergaming Wiki to get the definition and write it in your own words. Add examples

    ☾ ⇒ Your biography contains lore that does not match your character’s age. Your character would have been born in Atlas. Make sure to also look over our current map, Arcas, to find locations and events you can use in your biography. 

    ☾ ⇒ Your skin does not fit the lore of wood elves. Please look at our Skin Archive for skins you can use. Also look over the Wood elf skins to show you what to look for in skin color.

     

    You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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    lironking987

    in Denied

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    Unfortunately your application has been denied. You may reapply 24 hours after this post. Please make the following edits as well.

     

    ☾ ⇒ Your application contains plagerized definitions. You must write the definitions in your own words. If you provide plagerized material a second time, you will be banned from applying.

    ☾ ⇒ Please see our Metagaming WIki to get the definition and write it in your own words. Add examples
    ☾ ⇒ Please see our Powergaming Wiki to get the definition and write it in your own words. Add examples

    ☾ ⇒ Your biography contains no server lore. Please read through our wiki and forums to find server lore to add to your biography. This could be cities, events, people, ect.

    ☾ ⇒ Your character description should describe their appearance, not personality.

    ☾ ⇒ Your interesting facts contain no weaknesses. Please add either a mental, physical, or social fault.

    ☾ ⇒ Your skin is over used. I would suggest looking over our Skin Archive to help you find a more appropriate skin.

     

    You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. 

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