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    Advidd

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    Unfortunately your application has been denied for not editing you application in the time allotted. You may reapply anytime after this post. Please make the following edits as well.

     

    ☾ ⇒ Your application is great, but I really must ask that you remove references to magic. Specifically, Soul Tree. This would not be found in the same area as creator, and must be learned in game.

     

    You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. 

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    Muzthag

    in Accepted

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    Thank you for for getting that, I am glad to see you will be in good hands. You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. Please also read over our New Player Guide. I believe you will also find our Nations and Charter and the Settlement Guide Hub wiki pages helpful.Feel free to send me a PM if you need help. While in game, keep a look out for our monks who can help you in game with any problems you may have.

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    Advidd

    in Denied

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    ☾ ⇒ Your application is great, but I really must ask that you remove references to magic. Specifically, Soul Tree. This would not be found in the same area as creator, and must be learned in game.

     

    You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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    Muzthag

    in Accepted

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    ☾ ⇒ Your app is great, however, I need to have proof that you were given permission to play a Frostbeard.

     

    You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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    Authora17

    in Denied

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    Unfortunately your application has been denied. You may reapply anytime after this post. Please make the following edits as well.

     

    • Your Metagaming & Powergaming definitions are alright I suggest you use an example for each to show you understand the concepts.
    • Your biography is a bit short, I suggest you have at least 10 complete sentences and two lore mentions. You mention having a curse that makes you lose control of your body in exchange for killer instincts as there is no lore for this on the server, you also mention wanting to learn magic in your application, please be aware that as of now there is no way of learning magic with the loregames going on.
    • Your physical description mentions looking as pale as a dead or having a red eye, this is not something common for humans so please make sure you know this.
    • Your traits/quirks should be complete sentences and follow the following format.
      • At least one positive trait: (Strength, skill, achievement)
      • At least one neutral trait: (Hobby, lesser skill, interesting fact)
      • At least one negative trait: (Weakness, Fear, Flaw)
    • Your reply to the RP scenario is a bit simple, maybe add a bit more to it.

     

    You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. 

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