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Suicidium

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

     

    • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example for each to exemplify the definitions. 

    • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
       

    • Your Character Biography also mentions being from a 'prominent family', and that is not permissible for new characters as a new character application cannot include claims of being of royal, prominent, famous or important descend. 

    • Your Physical Description needs to be include more definitive high elven details! The skin, and description implies he has brown hair which is not possible for a full-blooded high elf. Here is the link to the high elven wiki page which you can consult.   

    • Your Roleplay Scenario is entirely missing! Please fill it in!

    • Your Skin is entirely erroneous to be up for LoTC's standards for a high elf. Please rectify by adhering more to the high elven description on LoTc. 

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