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Unfortunately, your application has been denied for the following reasons:

>Despite the server being named “Lord of the Craft”, there is no elven settlement named Rivendell. Please see this guide here for a list of elven kingdoms/settlements.

>Please mention at least 2 lore references into your backstory. This could be the name of a city or kingdom, a religion, a war or major event.

>Please define the subrace of elf your character is: Snow elf, high elf, dark elf, or wood elf?

>Why does your character dislike orcs? Perhaps you could explore this character trait further in Ranir’s back story.

>Your roleplay scenario should mostly focus on what your character is saying, not an NPC. Be aware that on the server, you would emote Ranir making the attempt to punch the man, and the attempt to break his arm. Otherwise, it’s considered power-gaming (which you did define very well, in truth).

>Generally, be aware of proper spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Since it’s a text-based Roleplay server, it’s important that your fellow roleplayers understand what you’re trying to say.

You’re more than welcome to re-submit a new application and try again with these things in mind. If you have any further questions, feel free to check out our new player discord, or you can send me a message at #dream9012

Unfortunately your application to the server has been denied, due to the reasons listed below:

>Your descriptions of metagaming and powergaming are impressively vague, and I would recommend re-reading the rules and looking further into their definitions.

>Your character’s backstory is only a sentence long. Try to lengthen it to better understand your persona.

>Your character cannot start with magic: using water and talking to animals would be something she cannot do, off the bat.

>Your character cannot start by being incredibly powerful: perhaps being an assassin was something she aspired to one day be, but did not become.

>”Shadow Rose” is not exactly an elven name. See this guide on ancient elven for a better understanding of the language.

> Snow elves, in appearance, do not have brown hair, but instead typically pale/white hair. Please read this guide on snow elves for a better understanding of their appearance and culture. For more information on Fenn, the ‘snow kingdom’, please view this guide here.

>Your character’s personality traits are very brief- try listing more, and think about what would be realistic given her backstory.

>Your roleplay scenario is too short. Please have a minimum of four sentences, including at least one line of dialogue and one action.

You’re more than welcome to try again and resubmit a new application. If you have any further questions, we do have a new player discord!, or you can contact me personally at #dream9012.

Yahoo! Congratulations buddy, welcome to the server! Now that you’ve been accepted, you’ll be able to run around and interact (and RP, of course)! If you have any questions, feel free to message me in discord at #dream9012, or pm me in-game with /msg DreamInSpace. If I’m not around, another cutie Community team member can assist you, easy-peasy with a /creq discussing your problem.

After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:

/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

I’d also suggest for you to go ahead and join the New Player Discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!
https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide
 

Because of your character’s backstory and race, here are some helpful guides to the relevant settlements that might help you out!

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Human_Settlement_Guides

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Oren_Settlement_Guide

(In the event none of those catch your eye, the general list of settlements is here for your convenience!)

Yahoo! Welcome to LoTC! Now that your application has been accepted, you’ll spawn in at the Cloud Temple and begin your adventure! If you need anything at all, feel free to find me in-game via /msg DreamInSpace or in Discord via dream#9012. In the event you need help while I’m away or offline, feel free to type up /creq along with a message with you need, and another Community Team Member will lend a hand!

If you need any more help along the way, you also have the option to type up /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

To further help to get you started, we have a snazzy jazzy discord and a guide for new players. 

And last but not least, I recommend taking a gander at our settlement guides! Given Grender’s backstory, I’d personally recommend takin’ a peak at the ones listed here below:

• https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Human_Settlement_Guides
• https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Oren_Settlement_Guide

(In the event none of those catch your eye, the general list of settlements is here for your convenience!)