MC Name: Greekbro33

Character's Name: Gray Kellian the Third

Character's Age: 60

Character's Race:

         Human

What magic(s) will you be learning?

         Naztherak

Teacher's MC Name:

         Kholidiv

Teacher's RP Name:

         Iltarian

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         Was a Cleric but auto shelved.

Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the status of your magic app by using the Magic List Errors topic?:

         Yes

Are you aware that if this magic is undergoing an activity trial and fails said trial, that you will lose the magic?:

         Yes

Have you applied for this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         Nope

*An Olden Cleric watches his old friend, daftly stealing a warm baguette and replacing it with a moist one.* "he  he, the ugly one returns, my bread factory lives." before he returns to his own hiding hole somewhere in someplace, stalking like he always did since he went there.

Gray Merely Sips his AJ, And Polishes his Armor reading the parchment "Beside our Queen? We don't Have a Queen, Stupid People, At least get your facts straight before Saying who you stand by." Before he throws the paper in the fire going back to his work

Yes,

Oh no. three Cleric teacher,s three Cleric students. this is going so so WELL

[!] The grumbles of the Metal Cleric echo around the sutican Cave

"Stupid Sea serpents! do you know how hard it is to fix Wyvern scale? its nearly impossible!"

more grumbles as he tries his best to reshape the scales. to fix the many small puncture wounds

"Keto.. Keto.. I will take your scales to make my own, to repair this armor you damaged."

even more grumbles are heard as the scared tourists run from the cave, fearing it to be a lurking monster

** Mongo Action figures ready to sell

1644, 14th of the Snows Maiden

As the Sutican prepared to test their oil trap to see if it worked, they loaded in the cold oil, a brave halfling named Mongo Foxburr donned his WHMIS ISSUED, safety Helmet, and vest, ready to see if the oil flow was good.

How ever, a technical failure happened, a foolish engineer forgot to turn off the oil heaters, and the oil quickly heated up to 1000 degrees celsius, and as they pressed the button to release the thought to be cold oil, poor mongo started to feel the burn, the oil starting to melt down his small legs, and feet, the poor guy never once screaming, as he simply saluted his suticans, and gave a thumb up, the look of

“This is ok”

Covering his face. Soon the oil reached his hips, the lil legend still unwavering in the pain as the halfling turned to a quarterman.

Finally, he fell backwards into the oil, sticking his thumb up from the oil like terminator in that one movie, before finally being dissolved. His bones turned to dust, and his flesh to ooze.

We will forever remember Mongo as a hero.

As a legend

And as a Friend.

May he rest in many pieces.

However from this failed test, we learned something.

Nothing can survive burning oil.

If WHMIS issued safety gear cannot?

How could plate?

** Call today as the new issue of Mongo action figure as seen above hits shelves all around. Sutica will take anything from Mina, to Resources to Children.

Prices start at 20 mina per figure.**

*scratches chin debating whether to listen to @Rella101 or not and apply*

Removed the use of Transfiguration, seems that dosent actually work anymore since the time i originally wrote this :P

Changes are Purple in Colour. some have been made,

Name of Artifact: Aenguls Defence

MC Name of person(s) currently in possession of Artifact: Greekbro33

RP Name of person(s) currently in possession of Artifact: Ser Gray Kellian the Third

MC Name of creator(s) of Artifact (N/A if not applicable): Greekbro33, PurpleCola (Helped design, needs credit)

RP Name of creator(s) of Artifact (N/A if not applicable): Ser Gray Kellian the Third,

Effect(s) of Artifact: Through the use of Two Aengul Eyes blessed with Holy Light, (Attached to a Plate vest,) When a pulse of Light is forced through them, two shields begin to form from the wearer's shoulder blades. Each one in the shape of feathery wings, (to keep it symmetrical). The use of these wings are not for flight however, and in fact have no aerodynamic use. However they are to shield the user's body from harm. They are created with the ‘Manifest shield’ Spell known to Clerics. Only those who know the spell are able to form the shields, though for each Cleric they may manifest differently.

(For example, in the explanation they are called feathery wings, but another Cleric may have bat wings manifest, or just disk shaped panels. It is completely up to whoever charges the vest. It's a representation of the Cleric’s Light after all.

These shields work mostly like the normal spell except they do not cause exhaustion to the user to summon them, and they don't require focus to maintain them. Instead, once formed they only need to be moved with will like normal manifested shields, able to wrap around the user's body to protect them from whatever harm that comes there way.

Each wing would be 6’6 feet long, (15 foot wingspan), and ranges from 3-5 ft in height, depending on the area

Explanation of effect(s) (i.e. how it does what it does - slight bending of magic lore is allowed):  Each flawless Aengul eye has been infused with Holy Light and the ‘Manifest Shield’ spell through the use of Holy Alteration. To activate the enchantment,  the cleric wearing the vest must force Light into the gems to ‘awaken’ the light inside and form each shield.

As each shield is formed through the use of holy magic, only Clerics who know the ‘Manifest Shield’ spell can use the Artifact. Anyone else would find the vest to be useless.

As the shields are formed with a Cleric's Light, only the Cleric whose Light was infused in the eyes can use and manipulate shields to protect themselves. The shields when willed to can move freely to cover parts of the Cleric or can be used to completely surround him/her.

To break, each shield requires 5 blunt/physical attacks attacks of some sort. Be it a sword/hammer, or even a magic that is also physically hard (such as a Cleric Orb, Earth Evo, Rocks thrown with Telekenisis, that sort of thing) but Dark Magics would find little effect in attacking the shield as the holy light of the shield would burn it away. The shield is made stronger due to the fact that not only has it been imbued beforehand, but a Cleric can, at the cost of their own energy, supply more energy to the shield to make it last longer.

Red Lines of Artifact:

Only connected Clerics use the artifact.

Each wing counts as a single shield. To completely destroy / de-manifest, each shield requires 3-4 attacks. (So to break both requires 6-8 attacks).

Cannot Expand larger than the 15 foot wingspan.

Fi Magic breaks the shields instantly.

Wings can be used offensively, but do very little damage and have very little force, can only really push if someone allowed it.

Can be warded against.

Takes 4 emotes to form (once a Cleric is connected to Tahariare)

Pushing Light into gems -> Gems begin to glow -> Wings begin to expand out of the gems, -> Wings formed -> Use wings.

Cannot be used to fly/Glide, but can certainly be used for cool super hero poses.

Cannot move for the first 3 Emotes of Creation, only on the forth when the wings are actually complete.

Number of duplicates of this Artifact:

2 (three in total).

Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the whereabouts and ownership of this Artifact by using the Magic List Errors?: Yes.

Have you applied for this Artifact before, and had it denied? If so, link the app: Nope.

@Gathius di Silvari

I do see where you are coming from with the App, but i have seen plenty of times where someone has been targeted for disconnection due to OOC. hense why i made this, 

though an app may be annoying, i still stand by the fact that some form of proof needs to be shone to why someone should be removed, a single screenshot showing a slip up. ICly, not just by someone saying something in a skype or discord about how they are bad at the magic, or just because someone docent like someone else.

a way to limit this ability that can quite literally ruin a character, or someones experience on the server, ESPECIALLY if that person as put in countless hours to mastering their magic, followed all the rules, etc etc. but still got removed for it because of some OOC lie, or disagreement. 

yes an app may not be the RIGHT WAY, but by posting this, i am looking for the right way to do it, there are hundred, probably thousands of people in this community, im sure someone has a better idea than me. 

and im glad for any all all criticism.

thanks for you post :) will take into consideration in my attempt to make this better. 

Just now, Starfelt said:

It's not an orbital strike, they'll still need to catch and disconnect you, as they normally would, they'll just need an accept disconnection application.

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This is true, may not have worded this much properly. ^ everything still applys to how it works now, it just needs to be approved before you actually go into the act, 

Just now, The Templar said:

Is this a meme..? It just sounds like a new version of the orbital disconnection nuke my era had to put up with. As it stands now, disconnection is very easily undone, meaning so long as you have a group of teachers behind you, your disconnection can only be enforced by open war and the disconnection of all dissenters. More to the point, this is quite literally just a way to enforce visions from your patron by forcing the LT to rule on issues. You will lose /all/ gray areas this way.

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Not a Meme, and not forcing visions onto any other group, as stated i used Clericism for the obvious reason as its what I am personally Familiar with.

Though constructive criticism is most welcome as any idea is a flawed idea.

Disconnection Revamp? 

Or something like that. idk what to actually call this... :(

So, Basically I think the way Disconnection for Deity magic is dumb in its current form,

Anyone who knows the spell, can disconnect anyone, even if it's for no other reason then OOC resentment, or IC resentment. But there is one thing that makes no sense to me.

Why would a Deity let one of their follows be disconnected who has done nothing wrong, but offend someone else? Or follow his rules and guidelines differently.

For this I will be using clericism, as it is the deity magic I know the best,

Tahariae, his mission is that of Purity, and his followers are the Clerics, As it stands, once a Cleric knows the disconnection spell, they can use false information, and say

‘your bad, ima have to remove your magic’

But Tahariae has allowed that person to carry his light, to follow his mission, to bring purity into the world, those who know about our lore know he is basically hitler of Aenguls as we have strict rules, and he only really cares for purity.

So if that Cleric, who has done nothing wrong but follow that path of purity, did what Tahariae wishes, why would he allow the one doing HIS MISSION, to just be removed from that path?

He wouldn't. He wouldn't let one of his followers be removed, and allow his path to be obstructed over petty rivalries, and false truths, He would want them to continue the mission,

So I have a proposal, one to make it so that people who have spent LITERAL months of their lives, learning, developing, and using magic, don't get disconnected for no reason other than

‘We don't agree. And i have the power to remove you’

And to explain this I am going to compare this to a divorce. And your Aengul is the wife because the wife is always right.

Etc

ETC

-=+=-

A Three step Guide to proper disconnection.

Step 1

Let's say someone feels someone else should be disconnected from the magic, because they believe they broke a rule of their Aengul, or Deity, and thus are not fit to continue. That person has no connection to the person they feel should be removed, but they have the power to remove them. In current lore, they can remove them with no real repercussion other than that person's friends hunting them down to disconnect them as well. Thus two people removed from magic, for nothing.

My proposal?

A disconnection App of Sorts.

For someone to disconnect another person from a magic, it needs to be approved like a ban report, or an MA, Proof must be given as to why they SHOULD be disconnected,

For example

RP Name:

MC Name:

Proof that they should be disconnected:

This way, if accepted it is like their deity saying ‘Yeah, I don't want them using my gifts.’

After the App is accepted however, the one who wishes to disconnect the person still must hunt them down, and do the ritual, so it is possible to hide and avoid it. but once caught you can be disconnected.

In this case of Divorce, Tahariae doesn't love you anymore, and thus wants to take back everything he has given you. The one disconnecting you would be his lawyer, trying to prove that this divorce needs to happen, and if successful. Tahariae takes his gift, plus half of your stuff. This being the shattered soul you are left with. just like that time your wife took the dog with her.

Step 2

Once upon a time there was a teacher who had a student, who when they got their magic, used it for evil instead of good. It is now that teacher's responsibility to either bring them to the right path, or remove them from the path,

So for a teacher, they wouldn't need to go through the lengthy process of an app. As that person originally brought them into the magic, they have the right to remove them, therefore they only need to inform MT/LT that a student will be removed. And thus disconnected.

This process would be simpler due to the relationship of student and teacher, and the fact the teacher already would know how they were connected, and in the case of clericism, and i assume most other deity magic, their soul.

After some time though, when they eventually master the magic, then this step would still be voided for step 1. As the person as spent significant amount of time with the magic, and well, relationships change. In this time a teacher may come to dislike a student (both IC and OOC count for this) and thus may just not want them to have the magic anymore, and this step could be easily abused.

Same as Step 1, the one to be disconnected must be hunted down in the way it works now.

In this case, Your parents  in Law no longer approves of your relationship with her daughter, and this wants to remove you from loving her. So they revoke the blessing they gave you in marrying her, and become their own lawyers to get rid of you. Depending on how long you have been with their lovely daughter, depends on how much they take, because parents in laws are be very cold hearted.

Step 3.

A person wants to be willingly disconnect. This step is the most simple and needs the least amount of explanation.

The person has consented to being disconnected. And thus only need to find someone willing to do it, and inform MT/LT that they are no longer apart of the magic.

Rather simple.

In this case, you no longer love Tahariae, and thus want to escape, but Taharaie is clingy, so instead of a divorce, you hire someone to bring you to Mexico to hide forever.

yes +1

Even though it is in review stage, id like to still cast my vote.

as a Cleric i dont want this, To only be good at one type of cleric magic while what we fight can have up to 5 OR MORE

And warclericism is so weak now. i vote no.

(Late because i was busy with life)

After reading through this, there are some points i enjoy, but many i dislike, and because im a lazy peice of ****, and most people already wrote them out, please direct your attention to squirtguns post,

bumping since its been half a month,

I must Agree with Saviour, dont most ET provide Events for cities and towns they are familar with?

Is good, give this person ET. Or I will find you. and hunt you. and hug you until you do

I wanted to say something thoughtful, something that is special between us both,

through out the time I have known you, all the laughs we had, insults that were thrown. there is only one word i can use to describe a person such as yourself. something that between me and you shows the bond we have forged.

K0llu, your a hoe.

11 hours ago, meg said:

Pending

 

Please add an additional 1-2 emotes for activation, and possibly clarify the downsides of using one hilt for multiple different types of weapons.

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Changed have been made :)

*Gray frowns* Oh.. Thats not where fire belongs..