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  1. Greetings Applicant! As of now your application has been:

    rk5cJoQ8HWLaO6afrHBEiFsXgXcUqQhqdUj_fw6-JTgaS-ykPIrCdwUm4RcK6xh-fBX-YY5B-hRZh-pJf54dvIJXzHl3RloD7bhg373MmRovNnKthg-EV5lBTVnWtVmKJBt7G84b

    On behalf of the server and the Application Team, welcome to Lord of the Craft! Upon posting this you should soon be whitelisted onto the server.  You can contact myself or other members of the application team through an /atreq.

     

    I’d recommend browsing the Wiki and joining our New Player Discord, where you can ask for advice from the AT members and talk to established members of our community the various nation leaders. Reap the benefits as it is an excellent and helpful environment for new players.

     

    If you have any further questions, PM me over discord: (Gilded#1905), message me on the forums or PM on the server: /msg GildedDuke. Once again, you can /atreq if you require assistance from the AT at any time.

     

    Enjoy your time on the server and have fun roleplaying!

     

  2. Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

    7ahXQbs2iIw3HfIR6Q_Drbpb_-EvZ3w8pV23PeX1wLpfdnlol5vZd-0VIn8URpZm8zl3nUMjJalqXez6aiqVUjG0S0fwpBci_ye7uxGjIwgYtUmGqhLNYkXkjmtPNgf8OzXwDA-S

    - Your definition for metagaming could be expanded upon. Please provide an example for how it might apply to a roleplay scenario. For reference, in your own words refer to the following source: Wiki-Metagaming.

     

    - Similarly, your definition for powergaming, whilst not wrong, could be worded better with greater reference to the server definition. Please refer to the following source and provide a new definition in your own words: Wiki-Powergaming.

     

    - Your character biography is well detailed, but if you wish to apply with a character that is affiliated with a family, you must provide the verification of the player for said persona and evidence said family exists. Otherwise, you cannot apply as the servant to a noble family. This could be done via messaging me over Discord.
     

    You have 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

     

    For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.

     

    You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

  3. This Application has since been:

    dSaQ-A6CQqOChzkuk-Smsh9m8khPFuBYUAn-jAfGtfEQX1eWvYh7LQD_sqRndKZeh4gIVorijlvUndYF9XoGVRwoPNdr0n-CczJcg17kERlNg3aYwc_BFKov-NWbQTFbis1x-vkc

    Reasons for verdict:

     

    - Plagiarism in biography. Original Source: Wiki-Humans. Please for your next application create a biography in your own words.

     

    - You must accept our rules in order to play on the server.

     

    - Your interesting facts did not list a single reasonable weakness. Please add this for next time.

     

    - Your definitions for Powergaming and Metagaming were wrong. Please refer to our Wiki for the correct definitions.

     

    - Your skin did was not appropriate for the server and didn’t fit into the boundaries of LotC’s medieval fantasy lore. For next time, if you have difficulty acquiring an alternate skin, please refer to either the Tailor’s Guild or the Skin Archive.

     


     

  4. This Application has since been:

    dSaQ-A6CQqOChzkuk-Smsh9m8khPFuBYUAn-jAfGtfEQX1eWvYh7LQD_sqRndKZeh4gIVorijlvUndYF9XoGVRwoPNdr0n-CczJcg17kERlNg3aYwc_BFKov-NWbQTFbis1x-vkc

    Reasons for verdict:

     

    - Your biographical reference to a particular goddess known as ‘Kali’ didn’t exist. High Elves are typically atheists or agnostic in their culture and worship no deity, nor follow a particular religion. In the future, please refer to the following: Wiki-HighElves.

     

    - You must reference at least one suitable piece of lore. Whilst you did name the continent of Atlas, you must go into greater detail on High Elf culture and society, e.g. name of the current High Elven city.

     

    - Please fix any grammatical errors in your biography for the application.

     

    - Your interesting fact, “incredibly agile and flexible” was somewhat powergaming and unclear.

     

    Your 24 Hour deadline wasn’t met. However, you may reapply immediately, provided you have done so no more than 5 times this month.


     

  5. Greetings Applicant! As of now your application has been:

    rk5cJoQ8HWLaO6afrHBEiFsXgXcUqQhqdUj_fw6-JTgaS-ykPIrCdwUm4RcK6xh-fBX-YY5B-hRZh-pJf54dvIJXzHl3RloD7bhg373MmRovNnKthg-EV5lBTVnWtVmKJBt7G84b

    On behalf of the server and the Application Team, welcome to Lord of the Craft! Upon posting this you should soon be whitelisted onto the server.  You can contact myself or other members of the application team through an /atreq.

     

    I’d recommend browsing the Wiki and joining our New Player Discord, where you can ask for advice from the AT members and talk to established members of our community the various nation leaders. Reap the benefits as it is an excellent and helpful environment for new players.

     

    If you have any further questions, PM me over discord: (Gilded#1905), message me on the forums or PM on the server: /msg GildedDuke. Once again, you can /atreq if you require assistance from the AT at any time.

     

    Enjoy your time on the server and have fun roleplaying!

     

  6. Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

    7ahXQbs2iIw3HfIR6Q_Drbpb_-EvZ3w8pV23PeX1wLpfdnlol5vZd-0VIn8URpZm8zl3nUMjJalqXez6aiqVUjG0S0fwpBci_ye7uxGjIwgYtUmGqhLNYkXkjmtPNgf8OzXwDA-S

    - Your definitions for metagaming and powergaming, whilst not wrong, require more expansion. Please refer to the following sources in your own words: Wiki-Metagaming and Wiki-Powergaming.

     

    - Your interesting facts require at least one reasonable weakness. Stubbornness alone doesn’t suffice as a sufficient fault.

     

    You have 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

     

    For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.

     

    You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

     

  7. Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

    7ahXQbs2iIw3HfIR6Q_Drbpb_-EvZ3w8pV23PeX1wLpfdnlol5vZd-0VIn8URpZm8zl3nUMjJalqXez6aiqVUjG0S0fwpBci_ye7uxGjIwgYtUmGqhLNYkXkjmtPNgf8OzXwDA-S

    - Your biographical reference to a particular goddess known as ‘Kali’ doesn’t exist. High Elves are typically atheists or agnostic in their culture and worship no deity, nor follow a particular religion. To correct your biography, please refer to the following: Wiki-HighElves.

     

    - You must reference at least one suitable piece of lore. Whilst you have named the continent of Atlas, I would like you to go into greater detail on High Elf culture and society, e.g. name of the current High Elven city.

     

    - Please fix any grammatical errors in your biography for the next review, so that it is easier for myself to read and pass a verdict on.

     

    - Your interesting fact, “incredibly agile and flexible” is somewhat powergaming and unclear. Please word this differently or change it to something else.

     

    You have 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

     

    For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.

     

    You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

     

  8. Greetings Applicant! As of now your application has been:

    rk5cJoQ8HWLaO6afrHBEiFsXgXcUqQhqdUj_fw6-JTgaS-ykPIrCdwUm4RcK6xh-fBX-YY5B-hRZh-pJf54dvIJXzHl3RloD7bhg373MmRovNnKthg-EV5lBTVnWtVmKJBt7G84b

    On behalf of the server and the Application Team, welcome to Lord of the Craft! Upon posting this you should soon be whitelisted onto the server.  You can contact myself or other members of the application team through an /atreq.

     

    I’d recommend browsing the Wiki and joining our New Player Discord, where you can ask for advice from the AT members and talk to established members of our community the various nation leaders. Reap the benefits as it is an excellent and helpful environment for new players.

     

    If you have any further questions, PM me over discord: (Gilded#1905), message me on the forums or PM on the server: /msg GildedDuke. Once again, you can /atreq if you require assistance from the AT at any time.

     

    Enjoy your time on the server and have fun roleplaying!

     

  9. Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

    7ahXQbs2iIw3HfIR6Q_Drbpb_-EvZ3w8pV23PeX1wLpfdnlol5vZd-0VIn8URpZm8zl3nUMjJalqXez6aiqVUjG0S0fwpBci_ye7uxGjIwgYtUmGqhLNYkXkjmtPNgf8OzXwDA-S

    - Salvus no longer exists on LotC, and your character is not an age where she could have previously lived within the nation. Please reference another piece of lore that is more accurate.

     

    - Your skin doesn’t match the description of your character, nor does it match the lore of wood elf appearances. Please amend this by acquiring another skin more appropriate for the lore. If you struggle with doing this, please refer to the Tailor’s Guild or the Skin Archive.

     

    You have 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

     

    For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.

     

    You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

     

  10. This Application has since been:

    dSaQ-A6CQqOChzkuk-Smsh9m8khPFuBYUAn-jAfGtfEQX1eWvYh7LQD_sqRndKZeh4gIVorijlvUndYF9XoGVRwoPNdr0n-CczJcg17kERlNg3aYwc_BFKov-NWbQTFbis1x-vkc

    Reasons for verdict:

    Your biography didn’t reference a single piece of lore relating to the server. Your character’s background was also rather cliché and unimaginative - you cannot establish your character as any kind of region leader. You also referenced a ruler who never existed and provided no name for the region in which this character came from.

     

    - Both your definitions for metagaming and powergaming were wrong.

     

    - Your character’s skin didn’t match the appearance of a highlander. Please change this and provide a skin appropriate for the race next time.

     

    - One of your interesting facts was powergaming. Please remove this and replace it with something reasonable.


    Your 24 Hour deadline wasn’t met. However, you may reapply immediately, provided you have done so no more than 5 times this month.

  11. Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

    7ahXQbs2iIw3HfIR6Q_Drbpb_-EvZ3w8pV23PeX1wLpfdnlol5vZd-0VIn8URpZm8zl3nUMjJalqXez6aiqVUjG0S0fwpBci_ye7uxGjIwgYtUmGqhLNYkXkjmtPNgf8OzXwDA-S

    - Your biography doesn’t reference a single piece of lore relating to the server. To amend this, please refer to the Wiki or forums for sufficient lore and information. Your character’s background is also rather cliché and unimaginative - you cannot establish your character as any kind of region leader. You’ve also referenced a ruler who never existed and provided no name for the region in which he came from. 

     

    - Both your definitions for metagaming and powergaming are wrong. To amend this, please refer to the following sources: Wiki-Metagaming and Wiki-Powergaming.

     

    - Your character’s skin doesn’t match the appearance of a highlander. Please change this and provide a skin appropriate for the race. If you experience any difficult with this, please refer to the Tailor’s Guild for assistance, or otherwise browse the Skin Archive.

     

    - One of your interesting facts is powergaming. I quote, “No matter what enemy you put in front of him he will take them out no matter what.” Please remove this and replace it with something reasonable.

     

     

    You have 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

     

    For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.

     

    You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

     

  12. Greetings Applicant! As of now your application has been:

    rk5cJoQ8HWLaO6afrHBEiFsXgXcUqQhqdUj_fw6-JTgaS-ykPIrCdwUm4RcK6xh-fBX-YY5B-hRZh-pJf54dvIJXzHl3RloD7bhg373MmRovNnKthg-EV5lBTVnWtVmKJBt7G84b

    On behalf of the server and the Application Team, welcome to Lord of the Craft! Upon posting this you should soon be whitelisted onto the server.  You can contact myself or other members of the application team through an /atreq.

     

    I’d recommend browsing the Wiki and joining our New Player Discord, where you can ask for advice from the AT members and talk to established members of our community the various nation leaders. Reap the benefits as it is an excellent and helpful environment for new players.

     

    If you have any further questions, PM me over discord: (Gilded#1905), message me on the forums or PM on the server: /msg GildedDuke. Once again, you can /atreq if you require assistance from the AT at any time.

     

    Enjoy your time on the server and have fun roleplaying!


     

     

  13. Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

    7ahXQbs2iIw3HfIR6Q_Drbpb_-EvZ3w8pV23PeX1wLpfdnlol5vZd-0VIn8URpZm8zl3nUMjJalqXez6aiqVUjG0S0fwpBci_ye7uxGjIwgYtUmGqhLNYkXkjmtPNgf8OzXwDA-S

    - There is no such magic that allows someone to extend their life. Please remove this from your biography and find another explanation for your character’s eye loss.

     

    You have 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

     

    For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.


    You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

  14. Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

    7ahXQbs2iIw3HfIR6Q_Drbpb_-EvZ3w8pV23PeX1wLpfdnlol5vZd-0VIn8URpZm8zl3nUMjJalqXez6aiqVUjG0S0fwpBci_ye7uxGjIwgYtUmGqhLNYkXkjmtPNgf8OzXwDA-S

    - Your definition for metagaming, whilst not wrong, could be expanded upon and reworded. However, your definition for powergaming is wrong and requires correction. To amend these issues - using your own words - please refer to the following sources: Wiki-Metagaming and Wiki-Powergaming.

     

    - Your biography format is rather untidy. For presentation purposes, I would like you to fix any grammar mistakes and write in coherent sentences.

     

    - You have added a weakness to your character’s interesting fact, his missing eye. However, I would like you to shortly expand on how this effects him. As well, perhaps add in your biography why your character ‘hates elves’ so that it might have some context.

     

    You have 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

     

    For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.


    You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

  15. Greetings Applicant! As of now your application has been:

    rk5cJoQ8HWLaO6afrHBEiFsXgXcUqQhqdUj_fw6-JTgaS-ykPIrCdwUm4RcK6xh-fBX-YY5B-hRZh-pJf54dvIJXzHl3RloD7bhg373MmRovNnKthg-EV5lBTVnWtVmKJBt7G84b

    On behalf of the server and the Application Team, welcome to Lord of the Craft! Upon posting this you should soon be whitelisted onto the server.  You can contact myself or other members of the application team through an /atreq.

     

    I’d recommend browsing the Wiki and joining our New Player Discord, where you can ask for advice from the AT members and talk to established members of our community the various nation leaders. Reap the benefits as it is an excellent and helpful environment for new players.

     

    If you have any further questions, PM me over discord: (Gilded#1905), message me on the forums or PM on the server: /msg GildedDuke. Once again, you can /atreq if you require assistance from the AT at any time.

     

    Enjoy your time on the server and have fun roleplaying!

     

  16. Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

    7ahXQbs2iIw3HfIR6Q_Drbpb_-EvZ3w8pV23PeX1wLpfdnlol5vZd-0VIn8URpZm8zl3nUMjJalqXez6aiqVUjG0S0fwpBci_ye7uxGjIwgYtUmGqhLNYkXkjmtPNgf8OzXwDA-S

    - Your skin still doesn’t provide the typical physical features of a dark elf; your character’s hair colour is still unrealistic to the lore. To correct this, please refer to the proper sources: Wiki-DarkElves.

     

    You have 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

     

    For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.

     

    You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

     

  17. Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

    7ahXQbs2iIw3HfIR6Q_Drbpb_-EvZ3w8pV23PeX1wLpfdnlol5vZd-0VIn8URpZm8zl3nUMjJalqXez6aiqVUjG0S0fwpBci_ye7uxGjIwgYtUmGqhLNYkXkjmtPNgf8OzXwDA-S

    - The background of dark magic appears as quite an edgy quality and rather uncreative. Draakar’s Boon also no longer exists in LotC. Rather than really expanding on the aesthetic of your character, the biography appears rather choppy with little appealing detail. I recommend putting more depth in the character themselves and what truly drives them.

     

    - Dark Elves cannot have any purple shades to their hair. Please amend this.

     

    You have 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

     

    For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.

     

    You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

     

  18. This Application has since been:

    dSaQ-A6CQqOChzkuk-Smsh9m8khPFuBYUAn-jAfGtfEQX1eWvYh7LQD_sqRndKZeh4gIVorijlvUndYF9XoGVRwoPNdr0n-CczJcg17kERlNg3aYwc_BFKov-NWbQTFbis1x-vkc

    Reasons for verdict:

     

    - Your definition for powergaming, whilst not incorrect, could’ve be worded better. To amend this in the future, please refer to the following source in your own words: Wiki-Powergaming.

     

    - Whilst your character can come from Djiazecko, it is not an area of the map which he can explore; he is restricted to the land of Atlas. In the future, please amend your application to fit this.


    Your 24 Hour deadline wasn’t met. However, you may reapply immediately, provided you have done so no more than 5 times this month.

     

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