Keening

Hey, Trap! Your application has been set to...

There are a number of things that need to be elaborated upon or rewritten.

Successfully edit your application to conform with the following guidelines, then you'll be completely ready for being accepted to Lord of the Craft!

To start things off...

You seem to be lacking the Two Lore References that're required in your backstory.

• Lore references can include a nation or city name, a renowned event, mentioning a previous realm, any of our various races, and so on. The two you decide to include are ultimately up to you!
• Our Wiki is a great source for finding events, city names, nations, etc.

Your Backstory is also far too short. It must be a minimum of five solid lines, if not a couple paragraphs.

• Including lore references and detailing your character's life from birth until the present day would work best.

Your definitions for Metagaming and Powergaming are wrong. Please rewrite them to have more detail and in your own words.

• The Wiki has a page on powergaming and metagaming that you can reference for help, just make sure you don't copy it word-for-word.

The Interesting Facts portion of your application is lacking a proper negative trait. Please change this to show one of your character's flaws before you continue.

• Having more than just one character flaw is fine, too.

Your Character Description is lacking; including various tidbits like hair color, eye color, their clothing, height, weight, and overall build would work splendidly.

• Remember, you should be able to visualize the character when you close your eyes. If you can't, I likely won't be able to either!

You have 24 hours to make the above changes. Once you've managed to accomplish this, comment here or contact me as soon as possible. If you have any questions about my requests, send me a message here on the forums or send Keening#2991 a friend-request via Discord and we can talk!

• If you log onto the server, you'll be able to message me as well by doing '/msg Keening' followed by your question or talking in the Wandering Soul channel.
• You do not have to make a new application to make these changes. Edit this one, please!
• Failing to make these changes will result in an application denial, however, you can request additional time to work on the changes if you know you'll find yourself busy with something else.

If you'd like to see about getting help with anything else, related to your application or not, please join the New Player Discord!

To simplify the process of joining LotC's community, here's a link to our New Player Guide. It elaborates on everything you could ever need for writing an application, doing commands ingame, understanding the chat channels, etc.

Hello! I'm Keening and I'll be going over your application!

If you have any questions whilst you wait for me to finish, you're free to contact me here via the forums or by sending me a friend request over Discord; Keening#2991

Congratulations!

I'm glad that I finally get the chance to welcome you to Lord of the Craft's community! It may take a few minutes to have you whitelisted in-game -- if you have any issues, be sure to contact me or another Community Team member and let us know. It's strongly suggested that you join our New Player Discord so you have an easier time contacting other server players and staff alike. If you have any questions, that's also the perfect place to ask them!

• Doing /creq ingame once you're whitelisted will also let you get into contact with a Community Team staff member if you've got any questions right off the bat.

If you want to brief yourself on the rules again before finally logging on, you're free to do so whilst you wait.

Enjoy!

Hey, SirJubin! Your application has been set to...

Your application is very well-done and I'm glad to see the effort you've put into it.

There are a couple things that need a little bit of tweaking though, and then you'll be completely ready for being accepted to Lord of the Craft!

To start things off...

Your definition for Powergaming appears to be half-correct. Please rewrite it with a couple more details, in your own words.

• The Wiki has a page on Powergaming that you can reference for help, just make sure you don't copy it word-for-word.

That aside, the only thing I can suggest otherwise is a mild name-change. This isn’t mandatory – you can keep it as-is if you’d like!

You have 24 hours to make the above changes. Once you've managed to accomplish this, contact me as soon as possible. If you have any questions about my requests, send me a message here on the forums or send Keening#2991 a friend-request via Discord and we can talk!

• If you log onto the server, you'll be able to message me as well by doing '/msg Keening' followed by your question.
• You do not have to make a new application to make these changes. Edit this one, please!
• Failing to make these changes will result in an application denial, however, you can request additional time to work on the changes if you know you'll find yourself busy with something else.

If you'd like to see about getting help with anything else, related to your application or not, please join the New Player Discord!

To simplify the process of joining LotC's community, here's a link to our New Player Guide. It elaborates on everything you could ever need for writing an application, doing commands ingame, understanding the chat channels, etc.

Hello! I'm Keening and I'll be going over your application!

If you have any questions whilst you wait for me to finish, you're free to contact me here via the forums or by sending me a friend request over Discord; Keening#2991