NotAPan

Ofcs it's nick

https://gyazo.com/62564252aad2c2d7f1956b48c1efd946

i definitely drew this

MC Name:

ChocolatePan

Character's Name:

Liu Zao Hong

Character's Age:

56

Character's Race:

Hou-Zi

What magic(s) will you be learning?:

Air Evocation

Teacher's MC Name:

jyecarson

Teacher's RP Name:

Samuel (Steffen)

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

Nope

Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the status of your magic app by using the Magic List Errors topic?:

Yes!

Have you applied for this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

Nope!

yey wolfs! +1

I'M NOT GAY *pouts*

greek do you love me too?

+1 Papi is great

MC Name:

NotAPan

Character's Name:

Liu Zao Hong

Character's Age:

13

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

N/A

Transformed form:

Hou-Zi (Laobai-Zhu)

Creator's MC Name:

N/A

Creator's RP Name:

Metztli

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

Hou-Zi were created by Daemon Metztli, it was created even before Kha. The first Hou-Zi was Hou-Shen, what also became the leader of the Hou-Zi. The Hou-Zi had two wars with the elves,they won the first wars but was defeated in the second war,win one Hou-Shen was killed but he was brought back to life by Metztli, and he went missing once he saw his people fighting. Hou-Zi was divided into three sub-races, Hei-Zhu, are Fei-Zhu, and LaoBai-Zhu, Hou-Zi usually are six feet tall and uses martial art to fight. Hou-Zi speaks in a language of Mandarin mixing up with English. Their city was destroyed by the people known as the 'poison', they say that the Hou-Zhi prayed that Hou-Shen will return and reclaim their city which was taken and destroyed by the 'poison'.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

Nope

Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the status of your magic app by using the Magic List Errors topic?:

Yes!

Do you consent to accepting what may happen to this character?:

Yes!

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

Nope!

MC Name:

NotAPan

Character's Name:

Erwin Gerold

Character's Age:

175

Character's Race:

Dark Elf

What magic(s) will you be learning?:

Clericism

Teacher's MC Name:

SquirtGun

Teacher's RP Name:

Lilyana

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

No

Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the status of your magic app by using the Magic List Errors topic?:

Yes

Have you applied for this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

Nope

+1 he smells like butter

+1

Oren equals all meta

Aye, William was killed by me

Yep, Cerilos did killed him

10 hours ago, Toodles78 said:

Pending. Please further elaborate on a Gravens' abilities, specifically their stare. Also, kindly further explain how Gravens behave towards the living. You have 24 hours to implement these changes.

 

Finished it! Tried as hard to understand it, if there's any wrong please tell me, Thank you very much.

MC Name: 

NotAPan

Character's Name: 

Cerilos

Character's Age:

48

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

Human

Transformed form:

Graven

Creator's MC Name:

N/A

Creator's RP Name:

N/A

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

A Graven is like someone who has died in a horrible death but still hasn't finished their task, which also means they're bound to their task.

A Graven is semi-corporeal which means they have a body, but instead of having flesh they have spectral flame that can be harmed like any other mortal. A Graven can't be harmed by a punch or anything without weapon, it can be harmed by gold, Holy magic, Shamanism, Alteration magic, Fi', some kinds of enchanted weapons,bright light (just like ghost), or even normal weapons such as iron sword.

They are also bound to the task that they most do in their life also their curse or weakness (their task can be anything!), example like Graven blacksmith will make weapons forever,a Graven guard will guard its city as his task, as if a prisoner were to escape, the Graven will do what a guard should do. They are also bound to a place unless it is destroyed. Anyway, Graven can only do what they are supposed to do that are related to their task which means they can't to anything else in their life instead of their task, example if a man asked a Graven guard to sell him a sword which doesn't relate to his task,a Graven would not respond to it, but if they threaten it with weapons or magic (just an example), and it being threatened is against the task like protecting a city or basically anything it would attack them. The more they do their task, the more energy they will gain. Since they are connected to a task, when the graven perform it, they will gain energy,and if they stray from it, they lose energy. If they stray from it for too long enough they will fade away until they can gain enough energy to be able to perform their task again. If anyone were to stare straight into a Graven's eye, it would reveal they're trapped soul turning them temporarily insane. As mentioned the Graven is a phantom which means it can be killed or destroyed  normal weapons like steel sword, Holy magic, Shamanism, gold, or Fi’.  After they completed their task they will disappear to the afterlife. 

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it: 

Nope!

Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the status of your magic app by using the Magic List Errors topic?:

Of course!

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/152209-gravenca-cerilos/ https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/151063-gravenca-garn-witheryale/#comment-1427157

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/152234-gravenca-cerilos/

@Toodles78 I've finished changing the application. Hopefully it's good enough.

MC Name: 

NotAPan

Character's Name: 

Cerilos

Character's Age:

23

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

Human

Transformed form:

Graven

Creator's MC Name:

N/A

Creator's RP Name:

N/A

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

A Graven is like someone who has died in a horrible death but still hasn't finished their task, which also means they're bound to their task.

A Graven is semi-corporeal which means they have a body, but instead of having flesh they have spectral flame that can be harmed like any other mortal. A Graven can't be harmed by a punch or anything without weapon, it can be harmed by gold, Holy magic, Shamanism, Alteration magic, Fi',or even normal weapons such as iron sword.

They are also bound to the task that they most do in their life (their task can be anything!), example like Graven blacksmith will make weapons forever,a Graven guard will guard its city as his task. They are also bound to a place unless it is destroyed. Anyway, Graven can only do what they are supposed to do that are related to their task, that means the Graven could not do anything else then its task,the more they to their task, the more energy they will gain. Since they are connected to a task, when the graven perform it, they will gain energy,and if they stray from it, they lose energy. If they stray from it for too long enough they will fade away until they can gain enough energy to be able to perform their task again. As mentioned the Graven is a phantom which means it can be killed or destroyed  normal weapons like steel sword, Holy magic, Shamanism, gold, or Fi’.  After they completed their task they will disappear to the afterlife. 

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it: 

Nope!

Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the status of your magic app by using the Magic List Errors topic?:

Of course!

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

MC Name: NotAPan
IC Name: Cerilos

Original Race (n/a if not applicable): Human

Transformed Form: Graven

Creator (MCname and RP name, n/a if not applicable): N/A

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature: A Graven is like someone who has died in a horrible death. Graven is much different from a ghost,they can be killed by normal weapons.

The weakness of Graven is steel,iron or aurum weapons and holy magics. Human flesh is unable to hurt Graven, only items can such as a stick or a rock.

The appearance of a Graven would have blueish flames with a face of a blackish skeleton,unlike a ghost,their weapon or clothing would appear to be real or with rotten and ethereal flesh. If anyone were to stare into the eyes of a Graven, they would turn temporarily insane.

They are also bound to the task that they most do in their life (their task can be anything!), example like Graven blacksmith will make weapons forever,a Graven guard will guard its city as his task. Anyway, Graven can only do what they are supposed to do that are related to their task, that means the Graven could not do anything else then its task,the more they to their task, the more energy they will gain. Since they are connected to a task, when the graven perform it, they will gain energy,and if they stray from it, they lose energy. If they stray from it for too long enough they will fade away until they can gain enough energy to be able to perform their task again.  After they completed their task they will disappear to the afterlife.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it: 

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app: 

"Two hundred..." would say with an angry face

Added it on the last sentence. Sorry... forgot to add it :<

Edited!

MC Name: ItsJustKaz

IC Name: Garn Witheryale

Original Race (n/a if not applicable): Human

Transformed Form: Ghost [Haunt]

Creator (MCname and RP name, n/a if not applicable): N/A

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature: Ghost are the souls of the shadows who has passed through the Soul Stream. They were created from unatural death such as murder.

The ghost have three stages, the haunt, revenant, and Poltergeist /Spectre.

The Haunt, they have a blank white eye with black and white clothing,skin, and hair. The Ghost doesn't know they are "dead" so they would live normally as they would. The haunt haven't unlocked their ghost power yet, so they can not float,shift appearance, and go through wall.

The Second stage is called the revenant. When a ghost turned to a revenant,they will start to become aware that they're dead. When they turn to a revenant,their eyes would have gray pupils on them. Since the revenant start to think they're dead. They would start to use ghost power such as, floating, shifting appearance, and turning invisible. However it is hard for them to master these power, in order for them to do that, they must know that if they fell from a cliff their body and float.

The third and last stage is the Poltergeist /Spectre. This stage would depend on what they react to their death. If the ghost gracefully accepted their death, they would turn into a spectre, they would give out a soft blue glow. If the ghost were angry and hated their death, the ghost would turn into a Poltergeist . The Poltergeist  would turn into appearance that frightening to scare all the people.

Anyway, if a person were to stay with a ghost for too long, they will get "bad luck" which cause them to have depression,thought of suicide, and coldness or itching. These "bad luck" would also be received when the person is being haunted.

The ghost are completely weak against bright light, holy magics, and aurum. Ghost also cannot learn or cast magic outside of their ghost abilities.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it: Nope!

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app: Unfortunally, I do: 

MC name: ItsJustKaz

Skype name: hewweebo

Character name and prefered character name when you become a DreadKnight: Kaz Duliur/Erwin

Character race and age: Dark Elf 162

Character’s martial skill (Sword, axes, etc): He is skilled in both longsword and dagger.

Do you understand Dread Knight lore?:  Yep

Do you understand that you are bound to the will of your Dreadlord?: Yes

Do you understand that the Dreadlord has the right to cut off your Dreadknight from its fuel and put it dormant/dismantle it?: YEP!

Why do you want to become a Dreadknight?: I want to try something new.