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  1. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application is now;

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    • Please include a reference to our servers lore in your characters backstory, this could be a place of birth, a culture she celebrates, a religion or a lore event that affected her.

    If you need any help with this change please feel free to contact me on Discord @ skeleton hex ?#4689, or join the New Player Discord and ask for help from our helpers and other AT.

    https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  2. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application is now;

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    • The screenshot of your skin needs to be a screenshot of the actual minecraft skin you're going to be using on LotC. If this is an issue, you may use something from our skin archive; [Skin Archive]

    If you need any help with this change, please contact me on Discord @ skeleton hex ?#4689, or join the New Player Discord through https://discord.gg/eySYjqw.

  3. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application is now;

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    Welcome to LotC, if you need any help please feel free to contact me on Discord @ skeleton hex ?#4689.

  4. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application is now;

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    Welcome to LotC, if you need any help or have any questions you'd like to ask, feel free to contact me @ Hex#4689 on Discord, or join the New Player Discord for help from our helpers & other AT. 

    Very impressive application but just so you know, Latin is known as 'Flexio' on our server.

    https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  5. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application is now;

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    • Your powergaming definition could use some work, it isn't exactly correct and misses some of its meaning. [Powergaming]
    • Your character's backstory could use some expanding and some more depth, it doesn't really make up a playable character just yet.

    If you need any help with these changes, please contact me on Discord @Hex#4689 or ask in the New Player Discord through https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  6. Your application remains;

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    • Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are still not good enough.
    • Please make your characters name Christopher Knight.
    • Your characters backstory still needs to include a reference to our servers lore, this could be a place of birth, an event that affected your character, a culture he celebrates or a religion he might worship. Any of these can be found on the wiki.
    • Your character cannot possess magical healing powers, this goes for all magic.

    If you need any help with these changes, please come and join our New Player Discord using the link below, or contact me personally @Hex#4689.

    https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  7. Your application is now;

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    • Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect, please take a look at our wiki pages and write a correct definition in your own words. [Powergaming] [Metagaming]
    • Your characters name is not suitable for our server, please change it to something more ordinary and fitting for our setting, example; Christopher Branson.
    • Super humans and superhuman strength does not exist in our lore, please remove it from your characters backstory. Alongside this, not to say that you have, you cannot apply with a character that possesses magic.
    • Your character's backstory does not create a playable character, you will perhaps have to go into things such as childhood, their parents, what the place they grew up in was like - Was it a village or bustling town? Did he have a rough time growing up in this place? Were his parents caring?
    • Your character's backstory must include a reference to our servers lore, this could be a place of birth, an event that affected your character, a culture he celebrates or a religion he might worship.
    • Your character's description must be a rough run down of what he looks like, things such as height, size and clothing are a good way to start. What would somebody see at first glance?
    • Your interesting facts need some expansion and you need to include a proper weakness. What makes him kind and caring, why is that? Why does he want to protect people?

    If you need any help with these changes, please come and join our New Player Discord using the link below, or contact me personally @Hex#4689.

    https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

    Also please notify somebody or even better, myself, when you complete these changes!

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