Bluee

Hello Knox213! My name is Bluee and I’ll be the one reviewing your application. To start off, your application looks great – and though it’s near perfection, there’s still a few things that need fixing:

• Your character cannot start in a pre-existing family, such as the Bell family unless given permission by the current head of the family as there currently is one. Please provide proper proof of the head of the family allowing you permission to be a Bell.
• You must provide two pieces of server lore from our wiki, listed here. This could be something simple like a city name or Isle name. Please adjust this, you currently have one – which is the mentioning of Atlas.
• There are a few things wrong with your Interesting Facts. First of all, there has to be at least one negative fact – all three seem to be either positive or neutral. Secondly, you cannot start off as ‘head’ of the Bell family as that name already exists. Please adjust this.

Well, that’s it. It may seem like a lot but I believe in you! If you need any help whatsoever please do not hesitate to contact me either by forum messages or via Discord at Talavok#3594. You can also join the New Player Discord to get further assistance. 

Please let me know when the application is correct by either leaving a comment or sending me a message with any of the above listed means of contact. 

I’m pleased to inform you that your application has been Accepted! Congratulations!

If you need any help getting situated, you know how to reach me. Other than that, welcome to Lord of the Craft, now go out and shape your legacy!

Hello, Elizabeth! My name is Bluee and I’ll be handling your application. After reviewing your application, I’ve noticed a few discrepancies you have to fix within a 24 hour time period, but don’t fret! I’m here to help you every step of the way.  Please correct the following changes:

• In your biography you mention you were raised in the High Elven city of Okarn’thilln on Atlas, however that is not possible if your character is a 125 years old. That means you would’ve been born on the start of Axios and in the High Elven city of Haelun’or. Please correct this so you were raised in the correct time period and city.
• You must also include at least two lore facts from our wiki in your biography. You currently have one.
• In your interesting facts you must have at least one negative trait, please correct this. Being picky about your love life isn’t necessarily negative.

Well that’s it! If you have any problems or questions whilst correcting your application you may contact me here on the forums or on my Discord at Talavok#3594. There’s also a handful of helpful folks in the New Player Discord whom are willing to help you. When you’re done you may contact me in the two previously mentioned methods or just leave a comment here. Best of luck!

• The letter t is great and all but it doesn’t make for a suitable metagaming and powergaming definition very well. It also doesn’t make for a very good biography, description, and facts.

You may reapply immediately.

• Failed to accept the rules. Marked ‘No’.

You may reapply in 24 hours after you have fully read and accepted our rules.

Hello, Mia! My name is Bluee and I’d like to be the first one to say Congratulations!

Your application was absolutely pristine and a pleasure to read! This is just the first step is having a magical role playing experience.

If you need any help at all, you may use the New Player Discord (in which you’re already in, I see). You may also contact me via the forums or contact me via Discord (Talavok#3594)

Now go out and create your legacy, have fun!

Hello, Geod02. I’d like to thank you greatly for working so promptly with me. I’m honored to be the first to say Congratulations!

This is just the first step to creating a legacy on Lord of the Craft! Please, have fun roaming the Isles of Arcas. 

If you ever need help in the future or want to get associated with a role-play group, you know where to find me.

p.s. yes your great-grandfather’s lands can be located on Atlas, in-fact, that’s preferred.

2 minutes ago, Geod02 said:

Hey Bluee,

 

thank you for all these wonderful tips on how to improve my application! It has helped a lot. 

I have changed my biography in such a way that Samü’s great-grandfather’s land is unnamed, and that Samü finds Arcas along the way and decides it’s where he wants to stay for the rest of his life. Will this suffice? 

Are your great-grandfather’s lands located on Atlas?

I’d like to thank you for working with me Ryia. I’m honored to be the first to say Congratulations!

You’ve made it past the application process and are ready to go in-game and create your legacy. Yay!

If you need any help getting situated with role-play, you know where to find me. Enjoy roaming the Isles of Arcas, have fun!

Hello, Geod02. Thank you for making such wonderful corrections. There is only one more you need to fix, yay!

• In your biography you mention going to the lands your great-grandfather roamed, if this is true then that would’ve been way past Atlas’ time, which as I stated before, you cannot roam another set of Isles (Such as Axios or Vailor). Though, if you meant early Atlas, please specify. 

That’s all! Your application is almost pristine. You may send me a message or comment here when it’s fixed.

Hello, Geod02. My name is Bluee and I’ll be the one handling your application. I’d like to start out by saying there are a few mistakes in your application, but don’t fret, I’ll be here to help you along the way.

• Starting off, your biography has a few mistakes. First, you may not be ‘very skilled’ in anything, you may be skilled in an art but not at a ‘mastered’ level, please correct this. Second, you depict yourself roaming to and through the Isles of Aegis but that isn’t possible. The way isles work is after a certain amount of time some event happens so the descendants are forced to move to the next isle. Aegis took place through the years 1305-1349 which is way before your time (As of you turning 21 the year is 1705). If your character is 21 then you would’ve been born on the Isles of Atlas (now residing in Arcas as you turned 21). Please correct this error as well. Third of all, your biography must contain at least two lore pieces from our wiki.
• Lastly, your interesting facts are good but it must contain at least one negative trait/fact.

Well, that’s all. When you’re finished you may contact me three different ways. These include: posting a comment on this application simply saying you are complete with the changes, sending me a private message on the forums, or contacting me on Discord (Talavok#3594). You may also use my Discord if you need help on your application or you are confused in any way. There is also a New Player Discord with individuals happy to assist you there. Best of luck, I hope to hear back from you soon!

You have 24 Hours to correct these changes.

Hello again, Ryia. You have fixed some mistakes on your application though there are still a few that remain.

• First, your biography depicts you moving from Atlas to Vailor but this isn’t possible. The way the Isles work is we move from them and cannot go back because some event has ruined the land. We were on Vailor from 1513-1570 and if you’re 18 that means you were born in 1687 which falls in the time period of Atlas (1643-1704), please correct this. Secondly, your biography still depicts an event that never occurred on Lord of the Craft. You must name an actual village and an actual war if you want such an event to occur in your biography. You may research the timeline of Atlas here, you may also view the names of actual cities/nations whilst you are there. The timeline may be a bit wonky as it only depicts the events of the dwarfs (for some reason). After removing Vailor from your biography I’d like to re-remind you that you still need two pieces of server lore.

You made a lot of wonderful corrections but you still have a bit of work to do! As usual, comment here once you are done. Thank you for working so hard, I can’t wait to hear back from you.

The timer has been reset back to 24 hours.