Bluee

• An obvious troll application.

You may reapply after 24 hours if you wish to make a serious application.

Hello, my name is Bluee and I'll be the one handling your application. There are a few things wrong with it currently that you’ll need to correct within the next 24 Hours.

• First, your definition of powergaming is incorrect, but don’t fret. You may use this resource from our wiki to assist you in creating a better definition. Remember not to plagiarize.
• Your biography is great but it depicts an event that never occurred in the lore, please correct this. 
• Atop of that, your biography must contain two pieces of server lore, which can be found on our wiki. This could be something as simple as a town name, the Isle you were born on (which if you’re 18 would’ve been Atlas) or an actual event that defined your character.
• Your character description should describe how she looks (ex. her height, hair color, etc.) atop of her personality. Furthermore, you’ll need to expand it. It doesn’t have to be a paragraph but make it a sentence or two, make sure it serves as a good descriptor for your character.
• Lastly, your interesting facts have a couple discrepancies. The first being you cannot start with magic, please correct this. Secondly, you must have at least one negative trait. I might suggest replacing the magic fact with a negative one.

Well, that’s all. It may seem like a lot but I believe in you! When you’re finished you may contact me three different ways. These include: posting a comment on this application simply saying you are complete with the changes, sending me a private message on the forums, or contacting me on Discord (Talavok#3594). You may also use my Discord if you need help on your application or you are confused in any way. There is also a New Player Discord with individuals happy to assist you there. Best of luck, I hope to hear back from you soon!

Hello, Zwartwit! Thank you for working so closely with me. I’d like to be the first to say congratulations! This is just the first step to having a magical experience filled with roleplay!

If you need anything else, please do not hesitate to contact me on Discord.

I’d like to be the first one to say CONGRATULATIONS! This is just the first step to an amazing and magical journey. 

You have my Discord if you need me.

Hello! Your application is better but there is still one more thing you need to correct..

• Your biography must contain at least two pieces of server lore, you currently have one. Please correct this.

Please contact me once again on Discord when you have corrected this issue.

• Your definitions of Metagaming and Powergaming are both incorrect. Please correct these and make sure not to plagiarize.
• Your biography has a few issues with it – First of all, you need to include at least two pieces of lore. You can refer to the wiki for help on this. Secondly, you may not start off begin skilled in martial arts, swordfighting, etc. I would adjust this to rather say that you’re interested or have had small amounts of practice. Third, there’s no such thing as Wing Chung though you can still do martial arts. Fourth, specify which foreign nation, countries don’t exist rather they are referred to as nations. Lastly, which your character being the age of 26, you’ve always been on Atlas, atop of that, you cannot leave the Isles of Atlas. Correct these issues please, you may refer to the wiki for most of these issues.
• Your interesting facts must include one negative trait. 

If you need help or made the listed changes, please contact me on Discord (You already have it!)

You have failed to complete the required changes within the given 24 hours. You may reapply immediately.

• Your definition of metagaming is good but not quite up to our standards, please correct it. You may use this link for assistance but remember not to plagiarize. 
• Your biography has two discrepancies in it. The first of which is that your bio must contain at least two pieces of server lore, I only see one, you may refer to our wiki to get a second piece of lore. Secondly, your character may not posses any arcane abilities or knowledge at the start, you must learn this in role-play, please correct that as well. 
• Your interesting facts fall in line with the reason I listed above as well. Your persona may not have the ability to utilize arcane arts right off the bat. Please correct this.

There’s just a few things wrong but don’t fret, you have 24 hours to correct these mistakes, you can comment on this application after the corrections are made or contact me via a forum PM or Discord (Talavok#3594). You can use those contact methods as well if you need help completing your application though you can also use the New Player Discord for further help.

Hello! Thank you for submitting an application. I’d like to be the first one to say congratulations on being accepted, your application was absolutely lovely! This is just the first step to having a fantastic and magical roleplay experience! Woop woop!

If you need any further assistance, please - do not hesitate to contact me in-game (Bluee) on Discord (Talavok#3594) or via the forums.

You are also welcome to join our New Player Discord.

Hello thank you for working with me, I’d like to be the first one to say congratulations on being accepted, your application was superb! This is just the first step to having a fantastic and magical roleplay experience!

If you need any further assistance, please - do not hesitate to contact me in-game (Bluee) on Discord (Talavok#3594) or via the forums.

Hello thank you for working with me, I’d like to be the first one to say congratulations on being accepted, your application was superb! This is just the first step to having a fantastic and magical roleplay experience!

If you need any further assistance, please - do not hesitate to contact me in-game (Bluee) on Discord (Talavok#3594) or via the forums. You can also join the New Player Discord for extra help if you so desire it.