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    lil_dill_

    in Denied

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    Denied for failure to make necessary changes and to contact me within the 24 hour time limit.

    This isn't the end, though! You are invited to make a new application.

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    Larek1

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    Changed Status to Under Review

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    - Please read the definitions of Powergaming and Metagaming on our Wiki – Adjust your definitions so they match a summary of these. Your definitions are incorrect.

     

    - Please expand on your characters backstory. Read our lore on our Wiki and use one of our official towns to explain where he was born, where he lives now, etc.

     

    - Finally, please include a proper weakness in one of his interesting facts.


    Once you’ve made these changes, please contact me.

    Failure to contact me within 24 hours will result in an immediate denial of this application.
     


    If you need any help - The Application Team invites you to our New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/uYUJkT4

    Good luck!

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    lil_dill_

    in Denied

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

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    - Please look over the definitions of Powergaming and Metagaming on our Wiki and add a more detailed response to your definitions.

     

    - Please use some clarity in his backstory – Why are people scared of him? What pain did he feel for years? Your backstory is quite vague. Try adding official cities and events from our lore into your backstory. Where was he born? What was his childhood like? 

    - Please adjust your character description. Explain what he looks like and what his personality is like.

    - It appears you made your character quite magical in nature, please remember that new players are not allowed to start new characters with any knowledge or experience in magic. You must learn magic in the roleplay after you’ve been accepted.

    - Your skin does not fit the description of a Dark Elf, they do not have glowing eyes.


    Once you’ve made these changes, please contact me.

    Failure to contact me within 24 hours will result in an immediate denial of this application.

     

    If you need any help - The Application Team invites you to our New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/CzPeUH


    Good luck!

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    BobBobbieJoe2005

    in Accepted

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

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    - Please read over the definitions of Powergaming and Metagaming on our Wiki; Your definitions are almost there, but please elaborate with more detailed responses.
     

    - New players are not allowed to create a character starting with previous knowledge or experience in magic. Your character cannot start off with magic. Please adjust your backstory to more mundane, non-magical events.

    - Please include one proper weakness in your character’s interesting facts.

     

     

    If you need any help - The Application Team invites you to our New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/CzPeUH

    Once you've made these changes, please PM me on Discord or the forums saying you've done so! Good luck!

    My discord is sadboy #9413

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    Ceruchie

    in Accepted

    Posted


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    - Please read over the definitions of Powergaming and Metagaming on our Wiki. Your definitions were incorrect, please elaborate on them.


    - While you’re at our Wiki, read over our lore locations and include one in your character’s backstory, perhaps the town of birth, or where he would later move to. 
     

    If you need any help - The Application Team invites you to our New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/CzPeUH

    Once you've made these changes, please PM me saying you've done so! Good luck!

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