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  1.  Hiro saw the poster and stood still

    “I've done so many evil things and I keep doing them, even if I have a few years of life left… and I cannot forget ...”

    Hiro chuckled and then with a sad face started to walk away

    ”I'm delirious ... now I start to talk with the posters too!”

     Hiro walked away from the poster, still thinking what she did and what she would do.

  2. MC Name: Gioia24

    Character's Name: Magnus

    Character's Age: 5

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             N/A

     

    Transformed form:

             Golem

     

    Creator's MC Name:

    dtrik

     

    Creator's RP Name:

    Dangren Starbreaker

     

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

             

    Golems are beings crafted from the magical art of golemancy. Golems can be built from many types of stone, they are unable to be build from items extremely dense like metals as the runes cannot work then. Golems learn as they age from experiencing the world, their intelligence extremely limited to the word 'I-M-P-E-R-A' after they are created before adopting a more organic less robotic set of reactions and speech.
     There are 5 types of golem Norma, Swift, Brawn, Soul and Multi core. Normal golems and act as stated above. Swift golems, but they are smaller and more delicate but can move as fast as a descendant. Brawn golems are massive stone constructs, trading their already limited intelligence for more strength. These golems have double the strength of an enemy but they are generally stupid to understand how to combat injuries. Soulbound golems with a soul descendant bound to their core, these retainers have some of their former personality but they are in a constant state of mental torture as they lose their freewill and most senses. Multi core golems are golems crafted with multiple cores, each having subset functions to a command core. Because of the higher capacity of intel processing, a multi core golem can attain higher cognitive and motor skills though multi core golems are most often used as a computer library storage than any other tasks.

    Also...Golems do not revive like Descendants, But a PK is not forced as a new body can be constructed for the golem in case of death(unless their core is broken).

     

     

     

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

            nop

     

    Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the status of your magic app by using the Magic List Errors topic?:

           Yep yep

     

    Are you aware that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

             Yes

     

    Do you consent to accepting what may happen to this character?:

             Yes

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             Nop nop

  3. Hiro makes a fist with her hand and puts it on her chest (near the heart!), And with tears coming out of her eyes, she starts talking with a sad  tone of voice

    "It was an honor to fight against you and fight by your side, see you soon ... Wulf, we'll meet again soon"

    Hiro raises her fist to the sky and looks with a smile  at wulf's body.

    "Be safe... in your new adventure!"

     

  4. it's a great idea, but you should be more detailed, for the heights, and you should put that time of transformation is for example: 2-3 emote, and as against putting a 'rage' like that of the orcs, but at the sight of the blood or when the character is hungry, things like that.

    and sincerely to avoid the druid thing for avoid 'problems', and guys ... if someone does 'powergaming', there is the modreq,
    I remind you that there are still so many things that still do powergaming.
    (anyway 1+)

  5. Name: Maya Noirette(Hiro D'eril,Juliet)

    Race: Halfling 

    Do you live in Dunshire?: Yes with Soliel

    Who do you vote for Sheriff?: Me

    Who do you vote for Deputy?: Soliel(?)

    Anything else to add?: If I become sheriff, I will make Dunshire a safe place for everyone, it was born to be a happy place, and it will have to remain

    What is your favorite drink?: All types of alcoholic beverages

  6. On 8/3/2018 at 1:37 AM, Lizmun said:

    [There is nothing unusual about these entries.]

     

    Entries 92 - 98

     

    -92-

    I have been in Haense for two days now. The town is dull and uninteresting, and its people even worse. Colder and much more bitter than the winds. Though, I did meet three new fellows in the tavern I have taken to staying at. (The beds are firm at this tavern, they hurt my back.). Two highlanders and a halfling. The halfling's name is 'Hiro D'elril', the Male Highlander's name is Karyssmov, and the Woman has a name much long to remember (I suppose she was trying to impress me with the length of her name?). She told me to call her Sylvia.  I mentioned Fenn, they mentioned the undead. Apparently Fenn is known for the practitioners of dark magic in the area, as well as a few resident necromancers. I will head there next, perhaps I can further my quest there, perhaps even find a suitable mentor?

    -93-

    I met an interesting woman in the tavern, as well. She was highlander, yes, but she also looked to be a scholar. She had a lot of papers and books with her. We had a short conversation, and I learned that she takes interest in the Ash March ( or March Ash ) and saw the same banners I have. After talking some more, I also learned she studies history and faith primarily. She is a nice woman, though admits reluctance to leave Haense.

    -94-

    I have learned that casting magic in Haense can be punished by death on the stake. Perhaps I should not stay here much longer. The city is too bitter for my taste, and it seems very anti magical.

    -95-

    I have heard whispers of a mental mage in the city. Supposedly a dark-elf bard. I approached him today as he was in what he called a 'Musical duel' with another musician of some sort. I have agreed to wait and  judge the duel when it is finished. The music is lovely. I half consider declaring him the winner to gain favor. Maybe he can tell me who taught him if he truly is a mage.

    -96-

    The other musician was superior, I will admit, but I could not bring myself to admit a favorite. I declared the duel as a draw. I was not able to speak with the dark-elf musician, unfortunately, but I did meet Valdun once more. He brought two other farfolk with him; A man named Melesse Alem Zewedu. A tall, lean man who seemed very... Formal. And a woman by the name of Cadyna Zewedu. I did not get as good of a read on her. Valdun wanted me to come with him and his people to the square, so I followed. Truth be told, however, I was quite ready to get out of Haense. By that point I had already seen enough of the city.

    -97-

    The visit to the square was a failure. There were closed doors, and we could not get inside. Valdun lead us back to the gate, where a local took to insulting us. Called us 'black ones'. I've suffered much worse, so I do not much mind name calling anymore. Instead of getting angry, I offered my wares to her, Much to my surprise, she agreed to take a look at them. She wasn't at all interested, but she was generous. She gifted me 100 mina, and her name. Hillith. We had a short discussion before we departed. She mentioned Xan, who apparently is the Aengul of guardianship. Valdun didn't seem to pleased with Hillith, I'll admit, nor my association with her.

    -98-

    I am leaving Haense. Finally. Though, in the company of Valdun. I am not sure where he is wanting to go, but I'll likely break off if he does not travel to Fenn.

    That's me(hiro d'eril) 

  7. it can  be read , and now I do not change everything.
    the format is precise and not messy, so I think everything is fine, I just have to wait for a confirmation from one of the staff.

  8. MC Name: Gioia24

    Character's Name: Alphonse D'eril

    Character's Age: ???

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             Human

     

    Transformed form:

             Graven

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             N/A

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             N/A

     

     

             

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature: Graven are created through the violent death of one who was devoted to their work. After many years of burial, the body is re-animated in a new form. A shadow of their former self. You'd expect a ghost to enact revenge against its past form's murderer, but no. They continue to aim for completion of their unfinished work. Once their work is finished, the shadow will fade away unless tasked once more. A Graven could be a grief torn man looking to enact revenge for the loss of a loved one. A Graven could be a Prince who has not yet fulfilled his quest to become leader. A Graven could be anyone as long as they have purpose. 

     

    Graven are spirits,  meaning their interaction is limited to the mission or task they cherished during their time as a living creature.  A mercenary is bound to hunt for bounties for eternity. A Prince, as mentioned above will continue to rule his kingdom until it collapses from either war, famine, or plague. 

     

    Graven sometimes seem to disappear from sight. This occurs because their spirit energy can not bind their soul to the physical world for long periods of time. Graven are literally meant to work for a living. A mercenary would soon fade away if there is a decline in bounties, putting him out of work. Unless, he can conjure up enough energy to continue their work. This process is automatic as Graven cannot choose when they are reborn. 

     

    Graven can still be harmed or killed though. Wounding Graven will deplete their spirit energy, thus causing them to fade away, but this does not mean they will return. Stabbing Graven through the heart will kill them like any other mortal man.

     

    Graven usually appear as Undead or Spectral creatures. They may take the form of a simple ghost, or even be enclosed in pitch black armor or even blue and green flames. Looking Graven in the eyes can cause the trapped spirit within to be released, sometimes causing mortals to be driven insane.

     

    Like mortal men, Graven have weaknesses. They are vulnerable to most phantom weaknesses, usually enchanted weapons, holy magic, shamanism, and even normal steel. They also have a sense of photophobia, making their eyes extra sensitive to sunlight, or bright lighting in general

     

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

    N/A         

     

    Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the status of your magic app by using the Magic List Errors topic?:

            Yes

    Are you aware that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

    Yes

     

     

    Do you consent to accepting what may happen to this character?:

    Yes

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

    Nope

  9. MC NAME: Gioia24

    CHARACTER'S NAME: Sun D. Kizuato

    CHARACTER'S AGE: 30

    CREATOR'S MC NAME: N/A

    CREATOR'S RP NAME: N/A

    RELIGION:

     

    Shenjiao - Worship of Hou-Shen the Godking, his sons, and the ancestral spirits

     

    Huajiao - Reverence of the Prophet Hualian, adherence of the eightfold path to enlightenment

     

    LORE:

     

    Hou-zi were created as a experiment by the deity metzli. They were made just for Metztli to experiment and test things out. Turning monkeys in the jungle to develop and evolve to look close to that of a kha. Becoming taller and more humanoid in shape. While being able think for themselves and even speak now.

     

    Because of this they've developed their own way of speaking on certain words that end up different paired to other descendents way of the common tongue.

     

    Hou-zi because of the development from metzli they've been able to grow and then even fall. Continue go back and forth to this day. There past just filled with wars and of the sort mainly when Malin himself was about and against his people till well the hou-zi fell the first time and ran. There was even a second time too. Just different types of wars and fights last that'd be noted had forced any loving hou-zi to hide in jungles and of the sort away from there enemies and slowly continue their development.

    HOU-ZI SUBRACES:

    The Hei-Zi are the hou-zi that mostly resemble gorillas, and are said to have come from the seed of Hou-Xiao, one of the sons of Hou-Shen. The Hei-Zi are mostly only have black of fur and there one of the biggest and buffed hou-zi there is being purely muscle. They usually stand around 6’5 to 7’ feet tall on average.

     

    The Laobai-Zi are what make up the mass of the  Hou-Zi race being very common.Laobai-zi were usually found all over there empire and making up most of the citizens there. There fur was usually only shades of browns while also there body are the most adaptable of their kind being of the hou-zi. Now the laobai-zi are said to directly related by blood to hou-wang, another son of the god-king.


     

    The Fei-Zi are the hou-zi that look a lot like baboons. Fei-zi are the most colorful of the Hou-Zi race and post have came from Hou-Da another one of hou-shen’s sons. Fei-Zi are the usually the most colorful hou-zi  there is. There fur usually ranging from blue, red, yellows, or gold. Fei-Zi are the smallest and usually most flexible and athletic of the hou-zi. There bodies skinny but having small but decent amount of muscles. When standing fully on their back legs they'll usually stand around 5’ to 6’ feet.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep the MT updated on the status of your magic app by using the Magic List Errors topic?:

             Yes

     

    Are you aware that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

             Yep, Ithat's fine with me

     

    Do you consent to accepting what may happen to this character?:

             Yes

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             Nope

     

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