GoodGuyMatt

Hey man, look I'm not a part of the staff, but from what I've seen they say to people is that they have to include at least one lore like a place or event or something like that... just wanted to let you know before a staff member reviews it

6 minutes ago, countessem (Sakura) said:

When you made the changes, did you press save? Because they are not showing up for me. 

Yea I totally did, but just in case I saved it again right now

43 minutes ago, countessem (Sakura) said:

Hello! I see you have made changes to your application. Unfortunately you still need to change a few things!

 

A)  Your character cannot start out as a person of the noble houses or as royalty on LotC unless you have explicit permission from one of the heads of that seed or royal house. If you have permission, please provide screenshots.

 

B) Your character cannot know about magic starting out - therefore the mentions of Aspectism and "the father"  and "the loyal beast" would need to be removed from your biography. 

C) Please try to include a weakness and a strength in your character's interesting facts! That makes for a well-rounded character!

 

You have 24 hours to complete these changes. I wish you the best!

 

After changing my application a couple of times according to your helpful feedback, I think I might have fixed all the mistakes you told me to improve.

9 minutes ago, countessem (Sakura) said:

Hello! Your application has been placed under…

 

A)  Your character cannot start out as a person of the noble houses or as royalty on LotC unless you have explicit permission from one of the heads of that seed.

B) Your character cannot know about magic starting out - therefore the mentions of Aspectism and "the father" would need to be removed from your biography. 

C) Please try to include a weakness and a strength in your character's interesting facts! That makes for a well-rounded character!

 

If any of the reasons you have been denied involve the Wiki, you may use this link to go straight to the home page. The home page has links to the power-emoting and meta-gaming definitions, as well as links to find the server lore you are looking for. Click here to go to the Wiki!

 

Fear not! Being placed under pending does not mean you have been denied. Your application is solid, but could use a few tweaks to help get your application stablized. You have 24 hours to implement the tweaks using the [Edit] feature on the forum. When you have made the changes, contact me (on the forums or on Discord) and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your application will be either Accepted or Denied. In the case of Denial, you will need to wait 3 hours before making another application.

 

I recommend joining the New Player Discord for assistance in finding answers. It is a helpful tool that will not only help during your application process but also help as a tool once you are implemented on the server.

 

If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, on Discord (Sakura#8726) or on the server with /msg countessem command. You may also use /atreq to place a ticket for assistance with myself or any of the other Application Team staff!

 

I wish you the best!

 

 

Thank you for responding to my application. I reviewed it and made the changes you told me too, yet I'm not sure if I've totally improved them, but it's up to you to decide. Thank you for your time!

I'm sorry if my Definitions of Meta and Powergaming aren't too clear, that's cause of the word limit