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    FilipRajder

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    Your application has unfortunately been DENIED at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

     

    • Your Powergaming Definition is PLAGIARIZED. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help  https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
    • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
    • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
    • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!
    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
    • Your Personal Dislike and likes are a bit lacking. Please fix this. Please elaborate on your fear as well. Also, not all elves hate dwarves, It's much more of a preference and depends on sub-race. 


    After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @latte#1608, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

     

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    GothyAly

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    Your application has been put on Denied as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

     

    • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 
    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
    • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
    • Your Character Biography states that your character was born on a forest near Anthos, which doesn't make sense because Anthos was a continent, not a city. Also, it states that your character was born in 1523, but is 22. Your character would have been born on Arcas if she is only 22.
    • Your Skin does not correlate with your character's race- you are WAY too light for a wood elf- who are actively not white. please fix this. 
    • Your Character's name is the same as your username? did you intend this?
    • Your Role-play response is in first person, it needs to be in third person. Also, it needs to have quotations and emotes, such as: Bob went up towards the man. "Hello," he said with a smile.
    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
    • You did not put a response at all to the question of what is roleplay.
    • Your whole character is unrealistically edgy. Please try to shape her to be more of a real person.

     

     

     

     

     

    After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @latte#1608

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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    Heart_Spam

    in Denied

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    Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

     

    • Your IP address has already been used twice before. AKA you have already been whitelisted, unless this is an error.


    After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @latte#1608, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

     

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    BerdugoMine

    in Denied

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied as you have not made the necessary changes within 24+ hours, as well as the following: 

     

    • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
    • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
    • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
    • Your Physical Traits say your character has purple hair. She cannot have this since it is an unnatural hair color.
    • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!
    • Your Roleplay Scenario is in first person, it must be in third person.
    • Your Self Likes and Dislikes need to be more in depth and explained more.
    • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
    • https://app.grammarly.com/

     

    After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @latte#1608 and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: 

     

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    BerdugoMine

    in Denied

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

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    Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

     

    • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
    • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
    • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
    • Your Physical Traits say your character has purple hair. She cannot have this since it is an unnatural hair color.
    • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!
    • Your Roleplay Scenario is in first person, it must be in third person.
    • Your Self Likes and Dislikes need to be more in depth and explained more.
    • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
    • https://app.grammarly.com/

     

    If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @latte#1608 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

     

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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    Logsken12345

    in Denied

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

     

    • You are already registered at your IP address. Please contact me at @latte#1608 if there is any further questions or mix ups about this.
    • Your character's skin must be darker toned since she is a wood elf. I like to refer to this picture and the skin archive, linked below.
    • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 
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    After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @latte#1608, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: 

     

     

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    Panjed_gaming

    in Denied

    Posted

    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

     


    After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @latte#1608, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: 

     

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    SheepThePainter

    in Denied

    Posted

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

    • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

      https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

    • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
    • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
    • Your Character biography says that your character is two souls merged into one sheepish- humanoid being. This is not LotC Lore viable. Change this.
    • Your Character Biography states that your character defeated the Orcs with a paintbrush that raged fire. You must learn magic in roleplay and cannot know it before hand.
    • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.  
    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
    • Your Self likes/dislikes need to be more in detail, also you cannot be a sheep.
    • There is no role-play scenario. Please change this accordingly
    • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
      https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

     

    After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @latte#1608

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/
    https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
    https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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