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Evonpire

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  1. Changed Status to Under Review

    Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

    For reasons such as:

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    Ø Hi there! Please contact my Discord on help with your Lore References, as your Halfling is too Old to be born in Brambleberry! And I'm afraid our Wikipedia doesn't have much on the Halflings

    Ø Your appearance does not match up with our skin standards, we require this. If you’re having trouble with this check out the skin archive found here!

    Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

    The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide here will also help you

     You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

  2. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application has been

     

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    Due to:  Hi there! Unfortunately your application missed got quite a few things wrong, and doesn't the follow the Guidelines. Please re-review the Guidelines and the requirement for applications if you decide to make another Application.

     

    If you believe this was denied by mistake contact me through the information below. You may make a new application whenever.

      

    You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Evonpire#0044), my forum account, or on the server (Evonpire). You can join our Discord.  You can also check out our New Player Guide.

  3. Changed Status to Under Review

    Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

    For reasons such as:

     1FVCy35azMQyaDaFY2Hsx8KIzqU1NreZC38aW0fzcV3ZwBYfUHmRusyHIuGrMGqozF-zCG6UpbHeXJIYRvFysJFUPEXPAcMotU8VcI7H1uF8SxbM1744GsCnUNdaT5xlNaY4Hadv

    Ø Your powergaming definition and your metagaming definition are incorrect, please fix this. You can review our wiki page about them here

    Ø Your biography lacked two sufficient lore references (Settlement names, creature names (creatures that are unique to LOTC not your generic dragon or trolls), other major events that are explained in depth), however races, and continents, nations names and vaguely conveyed facts are not sufficient lore reasons. Make sure these match up with your age and the current server year of 1813. Some places you can look for references are, you can also PM on disc and I can help find more than the listed here:

    • Renelia  (This is a dissolved Dark-Elven state, but is the latest one In existence, you will need to up your age to match this fact)

    • Aegrothond

    • Elven Sub-Forum (You can find events here that are part of LOTC and contains a alot of info when you click into the post)

    • Dominion of Malin (Do know the Dominion was dissolved over 90+ years ago).

    • Dark Elves


    Ø There were no recent Undead incursion that have been prominent, please change this in your biography. 

    Ø 
    There are some grammar mistakes, please fix these.

    Ø Your RP scenario response must be four sentences long and include an action. Please fix this in your next revision, thank you.

    Ø Your appearance does not match up with our skin standards, we require this. If you’re having trouble with this check out the skin archive found here!

    Ø If you have problems with speaking English, please consider that LOTC may not be for you, as its primarily all in English.

    Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

    The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide here will also help you

     You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

  4. Changed Status to Under Review

    Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

    For reasons such as:

     1FVCy35azMQyaDaFY2Hsx8KIzqU1NreZC38aW0fzcV3ZwBYfUHmRusyHIuGrMGqozF-zCG6UpbHeXJIYRvFysJFUPEXPAcMotU8VcI7H1uF8SxbM1744GsCnUNdaT5xlNaY4Hadv

    Ø Could you expand on your biography a bit more? You're almost there, but it just looks a tad short!

    Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

    The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide here will also help you

     You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

  5. Changed Status to Under Review

    Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

    For reasons such as:

     1FVCy35azMQyaDaFY2Hsx8KIzqU1NreZC38aW0fzcV3ZwBYfUHmRusyHIuGrMGqozF-zCG6UpbHeXJIYRvFysJFUPEXPAcMotU8VcI7H1uF8SxbM1744GsCnUNdaT5xlNaY4Hadv

    Ø Your powergaming definition is very vague, expand them in your own words to properly show you know what you’re talking about. You can review our wiki page about it here

    Ø Your biography lacked two sufficient lore references (Settlement names, creature names (creatures that are unique to LOTC not your generic dragon or trolls), other major events that are explained in depth), however races, and continents, nations names and vaguely conveyed facts are not sufficient lore reasons. Make sure these match up with your age and the current server year of 1813. Some places you can look for references are, you can also PM on disc and I can help find more than the listed here (Which I recommend you do, as I'll be able to help you better there):


    Ø Your appearance does not match up with our skin standards, we require this. If you’re having trouble with this check out the skin archive found here

    Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

    The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide here will also help you

     You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

  6. Your application has been

     

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    Due to:  24 hours is up.

     

    If you believe this was denied by mistake contact me through the information below. You may make a new application whenever.

      

    You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Evonpire#0044), my forum account, or on the server (Evonpire). You can join our Discord.  You can also check out our New Player Guide.

  7. Your application has been:

     

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    On behalf of the server and Community Team members, I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /creq if there’s any issues with whitelisting or something similar.

     

    Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our Discord, which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our various staff teams, meet other server players, and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The new player discord is a great help in getting you situated into our server, Ask me on discord for a invite (Evonpire#0044) or the one in the message above. Check out our New Player Guide!

      

    I hope you enjoy your time on the server, and if you ever have any questions or need help please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044), or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game. Feel free to also contact me on discord (Evonpire#0044) if you need any sort of starter help.

     

    IF YOU NEED STARTER HELP (SUCH AS LEARNING COMMANDS) JUST /creq FOR MONK HELP

  8. Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

    For reasons such as:

     1FVCy35azMQyaDaFY2Hsx8KIzqU1NreZC38aW0fzcV3ZwBYfUHmRusyHIuGrMGqozF-zCG6UpbHeXJIYRvFysJFUPEXPAcMotU8VcI7H1uF8SxbM1744GsCnUNdaT5xlNaY4Hadv

    Ø Your parents cannot be Azdrazi/Nephilim, nor can be you be magical in anyway.

    Ø Your biography lacked two sufficient lore references (Settlement names, creature names (creatures that are unique to LOTC not your generic dragon or trolls), other major events that are explained in depth), however races, and continents, nations names and vaguely conveyed facts are not sufficient lore reasons. Make sure these match up with your age and the current server year of 1811. Some places you can look for references are, you can also PM on disc and I can help find more than the listed here: 

    • Renelia  (This is a dissolved Dark-Elven state, but is the latest one)

    • Aegrothond

    • Elven Sub-Forum (You can find events here that are part of LOTC and contains a alot of info when you click into the post)

    • Dominion of Malin (Do know the Dominion was dissolved over 90+ years ago).

    • Dark Elves

    Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

    The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide here will also help you

     You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

  9. Your application has been:

     

    32Y4H9W3131kRGFJnDJr_xB3w2REOREaKUsZUUHjQEb3wj8eEpQhNKsHtbklo6Azdr49-n0ZBrT9Yy2BzctUJyYAlmA1IKH_O489HgDDLHpancnyZt6bIwdurC7oltkOpbuLNf7V

    On behalf of the server and Community Team members, I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /creq if there’s any issues with whitelisting or something similar.

     

    Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our Discord, which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our various staff teams, meet other server players, and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The new player discord is a great help in getting you situated into our server, Ask me on discord for a invite (Evonpire#0044) or the one in the message above. Check out our New Player Guide!

      

    I hope you enjoy your time on the server, and if you ever have any questions or need help please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044), or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game. Feel free to also contact me on discord (Evonpire#0044) if you need any sort of starter help.

     

    IF YOU NEED STARTER HELP (SUCH AS LEARNING COMMANDS) JUST /creq FOR MONK HELP

  10. Your application has been:

     

    32Y4H9W3131kRGFJnDJr_xB3w2REOREaKUsZUUHjQEb3wj8eEpQhNKsHtbklo6Azdr49-n0ZBrT9Yy2BzctUJyYAlmA1IKH_O489HgDDLHpancnyZt6bIwdurC7oltkOpbuLNf7V

    On behalf of the server and Community Team members, I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /creq if there’s any issues with whitelisting or something similar.

     

    Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our Discord, which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our various staff teams, meet other server players, and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The new player discord is a great help in getting you situated into our server, Ask me on discord for a invite (Evonpire#0044) or the one in the message above. Check out our New Player Guide!

      

    I hope you enjoy your time on the server, and if you ever have any questions or need help please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044), or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game. Feel free to also contact me on discord (Evonpire#0044) if you need any sort of starter help.

     

    IF YOU NEED STARTER HELP (SUCH AS LEARNING COMMANDS) JUST /creq FOR MONK HELP

  11. Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

    For reasons such as:

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    Ø  Your appearance does not match up with your skin, we require this. If you’re having trouble with this check out the skin archive found here!                          

    Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

    The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide here will also help you

     You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

  12. Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

    For reasons such as:

     1FVCy35azMQyaDaFY2Hsx8KIzqU1NreZC38aW0fzcV3ZwBYfUHmRusyHIuGrMGqozF-zCG6UpbHeXJIYRvFysJFUPEXPAcMotU8VcI7H1uF8SxbM1744GsCnUNdaT5xlNaY4Hadv



    Ø Your biography lacked another sufficient lore reference (Settlement names, creature names (creatures that are unique to LOTC not your generic dragon or trolls), other major events that are explained in depth), however races, and continents, nations names and vaguely conveyed facts are not sufficient lore references. Make sure it matches up with your age and the current server year of 1811. Some places you can look for the reference are, you can also PM on disc and I can help find more than the listed here:

    Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

    The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide here will also help you

     You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

  13.  

    Your application has been

     

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    Due to:  24 hour period is up.

     

    If you believe this was denied by mistake contact me through the information below. You may make a new application whenever.

      

    You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Evonpire#0044), my forum account, or on the server (Evonpire). You can join our Discord.  You can also check out our New Player Guide.

  14. Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

    For reasons such as:

     1FVCy35azMQyaDaFY2Hsx8KIzqU1NreZC38aW0fzcV3ZwBYfUHmRusyHIuGrMGqozF-zCG6UpbHeXJIYRvFysJFUPEXPAcMotU8VcI7H1uF8SxbM1744GsCnUNdaT5xlNaY4Hadv

    Ø Please change your persona's name, as it is a direct rip-off of a well-known video game character.

    Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

    The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide here will also help you

     You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concer

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