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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I avoid powergaming as much as possible, whether its from someone else or myself. I am a person that thrives on how people would act and react to my actions so i dont like forcing actions onto people, nor do i like getting forced into actions. Of course tho there are exceptions to me, like if my character gets sent to prison for a law i did, thats fair forced roleplay.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I dont like it at all, usually when metagaming happens i either try to get out of the scene or point it out, i myself try my best not to, which is why i motivate people around me to point out if i do so i can change my dialogue before continuing on with it.
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Lucious Ebonheart
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Height - 5'8
Weight - 63kg
Hair - Dark Deep Red
Eyes - Red, his other eye is white due to a scar on that side of his face
Roleplay Scenario:

The entrance of the tent produced a soft rustling sound when he entered while the heavy flap closed behind him. The heavy mist from the swamp stuck to his cloak while it released damp earthy scents and decayed odors. The candlelight inside the tent glowed softly like trapped fireflies while the air held it suspended. The shadows from the patchwork cloth walls moved slowly while the old woman lifted her head from her bowl which was located at the far end of the tent.

Her eyes narrowed but a faint sign of recognition seemed to appear on her aged face.

She asked with a voice that was as dry as a dead leaf what reason you had to visit this run-down town. Then, after a pause, her tone shifted. “Ah… it’s you. I’ve been expecting you.” She motioned to a cushion before her. “Sit. Tell me your story.”

He hesitated only a moment before lowering himself onto the cushion. His steps were quiet, careful. The candles caught his face—the long scar that carved down his left cheek, and the pale, sightless eye that had long since gone dull.

Still, the other eye was warm, deep red, like that of a ruby, and full of quiet kindness.

He offered a faint, sheepish smile. “I don’t know if I have much of a story worth telling,” he said softly, his voice calm and gentle. “But if it gives you peace to hear it… then I’ll share what I can.”

The crone said nothing, only waited.

“I was a seamster,” he continued, folding his hands over his lap. “Not much of a title, I know. But I was good at it. Threads always listened to me. I liked quiet work, steady hands. Folk would come to me for cloaks, sleeves, patchwork… whatever needed mending. I found peace in it.”

His gaze dropped slightly.

“And when the sun set, I worked at a tavern. Cleaning tables, pouring drink. I didn’t mind. People talk more freely with ale in their bellies, and there’s always something to learn from listening.”

His hand lifted instinctively to the scar on his cheek.

“There was a fight, one night,” he murmured. “A pair of men throwing fists over a game of bones. I stepped between them—tried to calm them down. One of them lashed out. Broken glass caught me here,” he said, brushing the scar. “Took my eye. He didn’t mean it. I could tell by the way he ran.”
The old woman let out a throat sound which was between a scoff and a sigh but he continued speaking softly.
“I never held it against him. People make hasty decisions when alcohol affects their mental clarity.”

A silence passed, soft and long.

“The tavern burned not long after,” he added. “No one knows how. I barely made it out. Lost my work. My coin. My tools.” He gave a small laugh, low and fond. “Even my stitching needle—I'd carved it from bone when I was a boy. Had it nearly half my life.”

She watched him closely, her bony hands clasped over her knees.

“I wandered after that. Not in search of anything. Just... trying to find a place that felt still.” His good eye met hers. “And the road led me here. To your little town in the mire.”

The crone didn’t speak for a long time. She studied him, the scarred man with soft eyes and gentle speech, worn from years of small kindnesses and quiet losses.

“Stillness is a rare thing,” she finally said. “Especially here.”

He nodded.

"A single whisper of it would be enough for me,” he said with a faint smile. “I don’t need much. A place to rest. A needle and thread. Maybe a roof that doesn’t leak too much.”

The crone chuckled.

“You’re either a fool, or a soft-souled creature that doesn’t know his worth,” she muttered.

“Perhaps both,” he said kindly.

 

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