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By Gzenil

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: A character that uses information that shouldn’t be accessible to them, or isn’t apart of the roleplay in order to progress or guide the story can be considered metagaming. Ex. Hearing someone’s plans on Discord and warning your allies.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming can be explained by controlling another person's character by using actions or emotes. Ex. "Anielle stabs the bandit and subdues them,' or "Anielle kills the troll with a quick swing to the back of the head."
    Status: Accepted

Anielle Astrange was born on the outskirts of Markev, Haense to Roland and Helena Astrange. The couple had initially hoped that they'd be blessed with a male heir to carry on the family's farming business, but were given a daughter instead. Helena unfortunately died during childbirth, and Roland Astrange was left with their only child. Choosing not to remarry another woman, Roland and his sister, Margot, raised Anielle alone on the farm. There, Anielle began to develop the appreciation and understanding of hardwork, a trait she values and hopes to see in people.

 

Though Roland loves his daughter, the thought of never having a son of his own made him ever so miserable. So, he tried to make Anielle into the son he always wanted. He trained her to use a sword, molding her personality and skills with the weapon around Hanseti culture. Unfortunately, due to her father's rusty swordsmanship, Anielle was injured and blinded when training with her father. Relearning how to operate without sight proved be to a challenge, and for a while, Anielle felt useless on the farm. Not wanting to be a burden, she convinced her father to continue learning how to fight with a sword. 

 

After several years, Anielle's skills in swordfighting grew better, and she learned to overcome her handicap for the most part. To this day, her blindness proves to be a sensitive subject for her. With this insecurity, she began to create an arrogant persona for herself in order to battle her feelings of self inadequacy. Often, she boasts of her ability to fight well despite being blind.

 

While living on her father's farm, she began to realize that she found the thrills of adventure and sword fighting to be more enjoyable than farm life. Anielle wanted to make a name for herself, she wanted to venture off into the world to master sword fighting; to reap the glory and fame she always desired. Her father was growing old, and she knew that he and his sister would not be able to labor on the farm for much longer. She wanted to give them the right to die in comfort rather than working themselves to death.

 

Finally, Anielle Astrange left the farm at age twenty in order to pursue her dreams. She refuses to return home until she can make a name for herself, and to earn a job that will allow her to make a respectable amount of wealth for her family. 

 

 

Character Name: Anielle Astrange
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Anielle Astrange is a human female with long brown hair and her stature is roughly 5'9. She is blind swords woman with lean, but muscular build.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

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  • Your metagaming is slightly off, please refer to the wiki page and take a shot at fixing it up! (Where would the player get this information from?) [Metagaming]

Impressive application, I love the backstory! If you need any help or have any questions please feel free to contact me through my Discord @ Hex#4689 or ask for help in the New Player Discord - https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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