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Avery_Aatani
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Full Name: Avery Aa'tani Cyladhras
Race of Elf: High Elf
Occupation: Second daughter of Kaleis Aa’tani and Auriel Cyladhras 
Age: 20
Residency: The Aa’tani Estate (Outside Haelunor)

 

The second and only child of Elven Lord Kaleis and Lady (deceased) Auriel Cyladhras. She is 20 years old. Her home where her family has lived for only a century, is just right outside the rolling hills of Haelnuor and is a beautiful estate. She is now a only-child due to the unfortunate loss of her older sister before Avery was born. She has brownish-golden hair and brown eyes and is around 5’10.

 

Family Lineage…

 

(Grand Father~High Elf) Arvallon Aa’tani+(Grand Mother~ High Elf) Arvanion Aegis—> (Father~ High Elf) Kaleis Aa’tani, (Uncle~ High Elf) Urom’e Aa’tani, (Uncle~ High Elf) Idres Aa’tani.

(Father~ High Elf) Kaleis Aa’tani+ (Mother~ High Elf) Auriel Cylhardras—> Avery Aa’tani Cyladhras, (Sister~Deceased) Aaliyah Ill’udoor Aa'tani

 

At the age of 18 Avery changed her name to honor her Mother’ sacrifice for her. Her original name of Avery I’lludoor Aa’tani.

Not much else is known before Arvallon, he is a famous recluse and even to his family he is not one to tell much of anything. He seems broken and haunted by his past and is not interested in allowing anyone to know. There are rumors that he was a mage once of the Ascended magic type in the Silver Sect, traveling the world defeating great evils. He is said to be an excellent fighter and it seems his skills have almost been passed down through him to his sons and daughters throughout the many ages. 

 

Family…

 

Grand-Father Arvallon Aa’tani~ Alive {400 years old}

Grand-Mother Arvanion Aa’tani~ Alive {389 years old}

Father Kaleis Aa’tani~ Alive {243 years old}

Second Eldest Uncle Urom’e Aa’tani~ Alive {244 years old}

Eldest Uncle Idres Aa’tani~ Alive {244 years old}

Mother Auriel Cylhardras~ Deceased

Sister Aaliyah Aa’tani~ Deceased 

 

Character Personality… 

Avery has a unique personality. She is and almost radiates a positive and good, light exterior. She displays a constant level of respect, kindness, as well as authority wherever she goes due to her upbringing of being well poised and disciplined from a young age. She is very much organized, she loves being on the planning side of this as much as the creative, she is articulate and detailed and uses this to keep herself in check when it comes to her darker counter part. *Which seems to be something that is passed down through the family* 

 

Character Bio… 

Avery Born/Captured Orcs (Mother came in and sacrificed herself)

Avery Darkness of the “shadow” of ilblees that haunts her at Tier 0 constantly

Personal Tutor takes up responsibility 

Uncles come and stay with Father as he’s depressed

Avery is trained by Uncles and tutors and grows up in house

At 18th birthday changes her name to honor her mother and decides to finish her schooling to “travel” and be more worldly

She goes to the Academy at Holm and graduates third in her class and returns home (Here she gets 

 

Character Description…

 

Avery is well built, not too slim but not extremely muscular. She takes after her mother in body weight and size and her father in height. She is 5’10 and weights around 130llbs. Her skin is fair and most times when in direct sunlight it sparkles and is warm to the touch. Her hair is a golden brown color that she mostly wears down, it is wavy and reaches a few inches past her bust. Her hair is thick and smooth and she can mostly be seen wearing an ear crown of a gold and green structure around her right ear that encircles her temples and comes up like a Flower crown on her forehead. Her ears are bigger than most but most of her facial features remain just as a normal High Elf. 

 

Socio-Economic Status…

 

Her family isn’t of any known nobility or regality but they are considered quite wealthy. Her family, for only the generation before her fathers has proud themselves on upholding great values of class and sophistication. Her Grand-Father Arvallon, a true natural born leader, was once a General in the High Elven Army. Very respected yet also secretive was liked and followed by many. Arvallon become infatuated with an Elf maiden from a powerful family in Haelunor. Though her family forbid her to marry him she did as such although being completely cut off from their family the girl, Arvanion, was secretly being given money by a sibling that Arvanion had saved for the future. When their money was large enough, they built an estate just outside Haelunor to start their lives together. It is suggested the money that their family derives from is “stolen” by Arvanion’s family’s wealth and is what propelled them to have a noble-like statue in the first place. 

 

Quite a beautiful estate, lush with many flowers, animals and scenic views all around the house. Her Father, Kaleis, though fighting depression at the loss of his wife, is an entrepreneur and inventor and most of all a business man. Whilst learning his trade from his own Father, he invented the Elytra and later, once developed, was sold to the High Elven Armies. All the women in the house has taken up the floral and decor business across many lands, started initially by Arvanion Cylhadras. Arvanion would hope it would be passed down as a tradition to teach her children about expressing their feminism, strength and even so, good family value and work ethic and being an excellent hostess. The family is somewhat separated from most of the political debate about socio-economic power within the Elven community but they are also not as looked down upon as “weak” either. Though they hold no real nobility it is their personality of high sophistication and stature of living is what makes them a strong family. 

 

Fighting…


For fighting, she practices archery and sword fighting. She is taught by a trainer and is very skilled in the evasion and long range combat. Mainly “moving like wind” to be able to tire the opponent out of chasing her then strike from a safe and good vantage point. She trains her body just as much as her mind, she values intelligence and the ability to learn and grow in all things. She loves music and art, and gets her reputation from always looking like glowing ray of sunlight and quite the fashion-ista. 

 

Education...

 

Avery had no formal education, though she had little time what with being an apprentice to both her great-grandmothers work traditions and learning her fathers trade she was given a private tutor at the age of 5. It was clear from a young age Avery was very skilled in both the arts and sciences. She ranged well in maths and even excelled at literature and writing. Though, not a bookworm she prefers the arts and creative side of things in life. She is, alike her father an inspirator and aspirator and she soon hopes to be an inventor and heir to her fathers business. When she turned 18 she halted her schooling to take more time to learn more of the world and take after her great-grandmothers house-hold traditions. 

 

Discussing Weaknesses...

 

One of Avery’s problems, is of happiness, which is more so internal, being raised as a second child to a deceased sibling she was always compared to her sibling of whom she never met. Though, seen in many portraits the two looked very similar almost twins. This intertwines more so with her perfectionist issues to try to be the perfect child. On top of her perfect/body issues. Her capture at such a young age and the unfortunate trauma of loosing her mother to dark magic to save her never left her mind. And unfortunately the darkness never left her mind either, it constantly haunts her and fills her with rage and anger and pure dark energy. She is able to channel this into her hard work and determination to keep going at things she wants. Through her very organized and structured way of lifestyle that was ingrained in her head at such a young age she has her own system for dealing with her inner darkness.

 

Powers...

Not really all that imperative my character HAVE powers, but for later on I think my character having some sort of connection to a certain element… i.e. fire, ice, wind, earth would work out extremely well. 
I.e. if this said element of thing was light or sunlight that could/would help my character battle her inner darkness but leave danger to my characters self due to the inner rage and darkness she faces so there’s always an inner battle going on with her.
I’d be happy to talk about it more later on once I get acquainted with the server
But I’m just gonna put this… ELEMENT MAGIC—> LIGHT/SUNLIGHT/FIRE???

 

*** DISCLAIMER*** I AM CHANGING MY SKIN THE FILE I POST BELOW IS NOT THE FILE I AM CHOOSING TO USE FOR MY CHARACTER.


Character Name: Avery Aa'tani Cylhadhras
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Read Below... :D
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Just finished my new skin! Was able to add features to the eyes and hair and along with the supremely fashionable dress. The Ear Crowns have been added that go up the side of her temples on BOTH sides and elongate at her head. Her hair is all pulled to one side and she wears no shoes... well... at least with this dress she doesn't. 

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Applying with Magic

Your character can not have any form of training or understanding of basic concepts of magic. Your character must learn that once you are whitelisted on the server! Please make the proper revisions so that they follow under the guidelines of the request.

 

The whole section on elements can be removed, there's really no such thing in the server.

Iblees also hasn't been around for a long while, and it's not really something seen in the server to be personally haunted by him.

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You should not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

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I'd be happy to take out the entire part of the magic, but my character doesn't have any form of training or understanding of magic. I said it may be applicable for the future of my character. As for Iblees goes I can take it out no problem and reformat the situation with the death of my Mother to a simple raid and capture and gruesome death of my mother to save me. Should I repost or is that good enough? @Gaia_

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Character Bio… 

 

*Important Details of Avery's Childhood*

 

Avery Born/Captured by a pack of Orcs to do a Blood Sacrifice of an Elf (Mother came in and sacrificed herself)

 

They Raid the Aa'tani Estate and capture Avery as she sleeps, they are about to sacrifice her when her Mother comes in and kills them all but is then struck through the heart with an Orcish Blade. Her Mother is able to then place her down on a patch of grass before falling completely. Avery's Father steps in with an estate guard and they rescue Avery and clean the scene.

 

Avery experiences extreme and strong visual representations of the capture and of the killing of her Mother throughout her childhood and begins to suppress them

 

Avery continues to live on with her darkness of her trauma, though it only grows in the furthest parts of her mind giving her a "dark" counter part

 

She enlists in a Personal Tutor and takes up responsibility around the household finally being granted to take up her Grand-Mothers tradition in keeping house and being able to observe her Fathers business.

 

She is thrown a huge celebration for her 18th party where she changes her name to Cylhardhas

 

Uncles come and stay with Father as he’s very depressed

 

Avery is trained by Uncles and tutors and grows up in house

 

At 18th birthday changes her name to honor her mother and decides to finish her schooling to “travel” and be more worldly

 

She goes to the Academy at Holm and graduates third in her class and returns home (This is where she finds her pet)

 

@Gaia_

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