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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is the using knowledge your character does not know.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: To powergame, or to power emote, is to make your character OP and to say things like *Kills first try, no dodge.*
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Ailyn Matiu
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Typical Tuvati from the Meranesian Islands. White tattoos cover her arms and back. About 5'7 and packing some muscle. Not so modest clothing.
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Hey there. For starters, I really love your app as a starting point, and had I read about the Tuvati before now, I’d have made a character from it.

  • That being said, while traditions from the tribe does technically count as lore, I’d ask you add a few more too. Something more direct, like names of the lands, or titles of its people.
  • Reversing a bit, your power gaming definition is, while not wrong, not entirely what we look for. I suggest taking a look at power-emoting, too.
  • Finally, your interesting facts are lacking a defining neutral and positive.
    • I suppose carrying a fishing rod all the time could be a neutral, if that’s what you intend to do.
  • By the way, I adore  your skin.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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