Beorn15

 

-Your application has been put on pending, a state by which you simply need to make some edits to your application to be accepted.

 

-Your character's biography includes no server information, such as where he came from, or any important world events that happebned during her life, referred to as 'lore'. Lore for Lord of The Craft can be found on the server wiki, which is accessible via the wiki tab above. 

 

-Orcs and goblins are not creatures of darkness, or inherently evil though steryotypicaly warlike,  they're just as normal people.

 

-Having one's parents randomly murdered by orcs, than getting/vowing revenge is unfathomably cliche and overused. If you wihws for your character's parents to be killed as part of their backstory, please supply a more reasonable cause for such.

 

-Having your character singlehandedly kill any amount of orcs, no less a group of orcs whom kill people, is unfathomably unrealistic. If you wish for your character to be a causer of bloodshed in their backstory, I'd suggest toning it down massively. Killing another person, especially an orc, is no easy feat.

 

-You have 24 hours to make the needed changes, failure to do so within 24 hours will result in being denied.

 

-Please send me a PM once you've made the needed changes, or if you have any questions.

 

-And if you so wish, we have a new player discord if you're looking for guidance. https://discord.gg/eySYjqw