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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is against the rules, it is using outside knowledge that your character doesn't know or shouldn't know using in game stuff as well as outisde roleplay information. This is punishable by weeks and even permanent ban if continues
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Having your own character do something they could not. It creates an unfair advantage for characters and other players. Characters are neede to stay within there own realistic roles.
    Status: Accepted

Her name is Ziera. Her father works for the ‘Pure’ Mali’aheral . Her family is not noble but are ‘pure’ blooded as well. She doesn’t believe that High elves are superior, because deep down she feels that all races are equal and offer their own values to Atlas. She is very studious. while studying, she secretly learns to fight from her friend Alleac who works for her father. They are forced to practice in secrecy because her father prohibits her to fight. Besides for learning how to fight she does as her father says, she is the youngest of three. 2 Older brothers, which both work with their father and the nobles. All she knows is the home in Okarn’thillin but plans on eventually leaving to travel this unknown world of hers. Hoping to make friends and go on countless adventures and live a life of adventure. Though Her parents or strict and unforgiving and plan on making her marrying a ‘pure’ as well. She isn’t afraid to fight if she needs to, she uses her books smarts and cleverness from her study’s of other races to her advantage during battle. she doesn’t know nay magic yet but plans on finding a teacher to help her. Ziera is brave and strong and smart but is also scared of failure and rejection not everything in her life is so positive and happy and she knows that, but chooses to hide it and pretend to be perfect even though she is inflicted with emotions she can’t comprehend yet.  

Character Name: Ziera
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 49
Physical Description: crystal white hair- braided- while hiding her ears underneath. Clouded Blue/ Gray eyes. Wears a white dress.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Cornivore

1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, you just need a little bit of help.

 

  1. The first thing I notice is, you say she is from this noble family pure bred, Im guessing. When you start on the server you cannot be noble until you are accepted and on the server, I request that you please change the wording for that since she cannot be noble.
  2. The second thing is the interesting facts I think you might be able to make them into sentences and they would be perfect.
  3. This is just a side note, but in elf lore the persona once above 50 they are considered adults, so I just wanted to make you aware because 19 is quite young and is considered a child.  

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.)

If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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