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    Discord: bb0930
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Do not make godly or unrealistic actions, for excemple, doing a fight against 20 person alone and winning, which is an impossible action
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It give one advantage in a roleplay argument, like getting infomation unknown to the charater in discord or voice call, and using such info to benefits their roleplaying
    Status: Accepted

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

 

''don't think that is of your concern" Diagon replied with a huff, but then a sense of guilt flow through his mind, swallowing his pride, he started to talk "well...."  

 

Diagon's story begins in the woods, sneaking around from tree to tree, with a dagger on hand. Crouching while slowly walking on a person from behind. A sound ~Crack~, and before he realized it, he had stepped on a twig, the man turned, "WHO'S THERE" he smattered, "Me..." Diagon replied with a dark voice , as he plunged the dagger into the man's throat. The man falls as he screm, "PLEASE, SPEARE ME..." the man pleads. Diagon pulls out the dagger, and stabs into the man's Stomach multiple times, the screm got louder as the dagger plunged into the man each time, then finally, Diagon plunge the dagger into the man's heart, then the screm stop. After the bloody struggle, Blood covers the whole of Diagon's coat. Diagon showed no remorse and no feeling for killing the man, with only a straight and dark look on his face. From the dead body, he retrieved his stolen item, his silver, and a small flower bracelet. The Flower Bracelet was his most prized possession, made out of roses with little green leaves around it. looking at the retrieved bracelet, he reminisces of its origin.

As a Child, Diagon was born into a happy family, with a Brave Father, and a loving mother. In a Dark time of war and destruction, they showed their survivability as a family of three. When Diagon was just 5, he was taught to fight by his father, who once served as a soldier before retiring to be a humble merchant. Even though the Training with his father was tough, as his father was very strict in his lessons, Diagon respected it. Soon at the age of 10, Diagon was able to excel in his attacking and especially defensive combat with and without a Sword. While his father taught him Combat, Diagon was taught about the wonderful world by his mother, who was a scholar herself.

it was a happy family for them, till one day, everything changed. At the age of 12, Diagon had one of the most horrible day of all. One dark night, Raiders of unknown origin emerge from the darkness and set fire to the house, Diagon and his father who were returning from a huge hunting trip for some sheap, after seeing the fire engulfing the house, Diagon's father ran towards the house before turning around shouting "RUN....". Diagon was afraid and did what was told. By the time of sunrise, the fire had died out, and when Diagon returned, two burned body was found in the rubble. Diagon looks at what was her mother's burned body, finding what she was holding when she died, a box intended for Diagon to find. When opened, he only found a flower bracelet in it.


This event changed Diagon, From that day on, only dark and anger can be found in his face, blaming himself for the death of his parents, vowing vengeance to whoever did this to his family


Character Name: Diagon
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Have Dark Black hair, Blueish eyes, and wears a red flower coat. Stand around 5'8. Pull in a dark look on his face, which screams dan
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✿You’re on the right track!  just a few things you need to change!

✿ Your Powergaming method, seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 

 

✿ Your Metagaming reasoning,  seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 

 

✿This item isnt within Lotc lore “ two Hellsbloom flowers “

 

✿Please make sure to include at least six sentences in Roleplay scenario ! Its a great start! Make sure you are emoting in third person “ He said/she said/ they moved.”  The roleplay scenario most be both action as well as diaolouge.  You Must answer the hag, you may keep your prio backstory in the page. You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

 

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