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Celeste_The_Noble

By Celeste_The_Noble

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is using informationg from the real world in rp as help
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is overusing a characters abilities and skills, to an unrealistic standard
    Status: Accepted

 

(Update From the user! Thank you for kindly letting me know what was wrong and how to fix it! Hope this'll do!)

 

Before her journey:

Celeste started off as any normal elf-ling, charming, grinning through everything life passed onto her. Unfortunately, that wasn't long lasting whatsoever for Celeste. Celeste had always had a passion for the art of fire and heat, often using lighting branches and small matches for small party tricks. One day, whilst trying to impress her step brother and dear friend on a play-date, she began a fire that engulfed her house, and thus, only her friend made it out. She lived with her friend ever since, labeled as a problem child, and hoping one day she will prove herself to be more than what the nobles think of her.

 

A Mischievous Teenage Elf

In her teen years, Celeste had began studying other things, instead of flame. She tried archery, attempting the lifestyle of a monk, hell, even tried delivery systems. In the end, all she could possibly work on was card and party tricks. In her free time, she doe often try protection style fighting but she tries her best to stay away from any and all types of fire. Of course, Celeste had her rebellious moments. At times, she slept under the stars, on her adopted families rooftops as her friend sat next to her, grinning like an idiot at the fact they managed to steal some of their parents rum. Despite everything, her parents were kind, and loved both of them unconditionally, there was often nothing the parents wouldn't do for them. Celeste did eventually move out, and thus began her journey

 

Now.

Nowadays, Celeste is often house-hunting, and unable to stay in one place for long. Her and her friend have separated, but keep in touch through letters and such. Celeste isn't interested in love, nor lust. she just would like a partner, maybe a pet, even. Her sense of humor never dries, and shes often the one to crack a joke right before a huge moment. She doesn't have her moments of seriousness. She pushes through everything she has to, and stiffens up when she must.

Character Name: Celeste Bennette
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 68
Physical Description: Celeste has burn scars that range from her ankle to her lower chin. Her dark brown, almost black hair fades to a soft white. Her eyes are grey-blue
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Your application has been placed on…

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You reference her being a druid and having illusion magic, she can have neither on the start of her journey on lotc and if you like you can attain them both or separately through the requisite roleplay and such. But for now, please remove them and replace them with stuff more 'plain'

 

 

If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI

 

Being placed on Pending means that your application was solid, though there are still some issues present that need a bit of tweaking. You’ve got 24 hours to make them using the [Edit] feature of the forum. Whenever you make any changes, contact me and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your app will either be Accepted or Denied

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If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!


 

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Your application has been:

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On behalf of the Application Team, and LoTC as a whole, I’d like to welcome you to our community!

You will be implemented shortly, during this brief wait I implore you to visit our WIKI and continue reading up on server lore.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

 

Can’t wait to see you roleplaying!

 

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