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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Telling an information we learned at Roleplay to outside Roleplay.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing impossible things in Roleplay.
    Status: Accepted

She was born near Curon, in a house in the forests. Her father was a lumberjack and a hunter. Her mother was a house wife. However, her father wanted her to be a lumberjack. Luna wanted to be an archer so she started training in the woods. She grew up very fast and learned a few tricks. She was en efficient hunter now, she hunted deers, boars and all kinds of animals. One day when she was out hunting near Haense some loud noises were heard close to her, a bandit party near the roads! She ran back to her home to see that it was burning, her father gone and her mother killed... She now looked around for the bandits but she couldnt see any of them around! That day she swore to kill those bandits and take revenge. She has since decided to join an army to use her archery skills for the good of mankind... Nowadays, she is still engaged in archery and she is burning with revenge fire.


Character Name: Luna
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: She has white hair and blue eyes. She cares about her clothes. Pretty attractive.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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Ø  Honestly, aside from your biography your application is perfect, please however do the following changes to your biography before we can accept you on the server.

  • Add a second lore reference to your biography this could range from the name of city you were born into, referencing the for example emperor of man in Atlas or even a event such the september prince, however go into detail about these, more than just mentioning them.

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  • Please add more content, as in length to your biography, bringing its size up to around mid size paragraph (10 good sentences sentence).

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  • Some pages to review can be Renatus, Haense, Adria or even Curon. Some threads of the Human's Sub forum could help.

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide Link will also help you

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

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On behalf of the server and Community Team members, I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /creq if there’s any issues with whitelisting or similar.

 

Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our New Player Discord, which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our various staff teams, meet other server players, and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The new player discord is a great help in getting you situated into our server and our New Player Guide!

  

I hope you enjoy your time on the server, and if you ever have any questions or need help please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044), or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game.

 

 Happy roleplaying

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