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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When somebody IC has and uses OOC knowledge For example knowing another character even though its your first time meeting them
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Breaking the interactions of players mostly seen fighting For example forcing a direct hit even though defender clearly blocked the attack
    Status: Accepted

Kayn parents lived in the Golf Isles which they soon decided to move into a city which they believe is the safest place to conceive and raise a child. Soon came, Kayn who was born during an era where the constant raids from bandits regularly occur primarily in the City of Belvitz, so his parents entrusted a Highlander to take care of him and teach him how to survive. The Highlander taught kayn all things like how to hunt, intermediate smithing,  and how to hold a sword correctly. The Highlander passed him on to the farfolk where he learned reading, writing, and cooking. While Kayne was living with far folk there was a dojo where he the basics martial arts, but was kicked due to him not showing up to all the lessons. At the age of 26, Kayn plans to leave in search of work and a place where he can call home.

 


Character Name: Kayn
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: 5'7 Asian male, with short dark hair, skin is a light brown and small brown eyes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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  • Your definitions of Metagaming and Powergaming are both incorrect. Please correct these and make sure not to plagiarize.
  • Your biography has a few issues with it – First of all, you need to include at least two pieces of lore. You can refer to the wiki for help on this. Secondly, you may not start off begin skilled in martial arts, swordfighting, etc. I would adjust this to rather say that you’re interested or have had small amounts of practice. Third, there’s no such thing as Wing Chung though you can still do martial arts. Fourth, specify which foreign nation, countries don’t exist rather they are referred to as nations. Lastly, which your character being the age of 26, you’ve always been on Atlas, atop of that, you cannot leave the Isles of Atlas. Correct these issues please, you may refer to the wiki for most of these issues.
  • Your interesting facts must include one negative trait. 

If you need help or made the listed changes, please contact me on Discord (You already have it!)

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Hello! Your application is better but there is still one more thing you need to correct..

  • Your biography must contain at least two pieces of server lore, you currently have one. Please correct this.

Please contact me once again on Discord when you have corrected this issue.

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I’d like to be the first one to say CONGRATULATIONS! This is just the first step to an amazing and magical journey. 

 

You have my Discord if you need me.

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