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Frann
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming happens when a player uses OOC(out of character) knowledge IC (in character) for example out of character I know that a person betrayed me and I use this knowledge in character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming happens when a player gives overpowered boosts to its character for example being a God or that he can regen mortal wounds instantly for example :"I'm the son of the God of the Sun, I can grow my limbs in fire"
    Status: Accepted

Fran was a darkelf child of 6 years old and lived in the Citadel, a city of the continent of Skjoldier. Here the life was peaceful, there were no shortage of water nor food. Until one day her father got enlisted to go to battle in the middle band of the continent. After her father departed a group of four bandits kidnapped Fran and her mother in the city meanwhile they were in one of the isolated alley. No one tried to protect them by the bandits and so Fran and her mother ended up being slaves, that’s the last time Fran ever met her mother.

 In the store of the slave seller Fran stood out from the others since most of the children were humans and she was one of the few dark elves being sold, a man with  appearences of a noble reached one of the slave seller and pointed his finger to her. That noble was a baron and wanted to add Fran his collection of slaves. After being sold Fran saw the nature of the noble, a corrupted individual that rejoices at the others misfortunes. Fran’s permanence was of 6 years in that mansion, here she was used as an object by the baron to vent his anger on like the other many maid. After all of these 6 years of abuse one day the baronet was assassinated by a group of assassins, that day he was beating Fran when they entered.

Fran after seeing these people having the power of killing someone that oppressed her for 6 years she begged the assassins to take her, but an assassin said to her :”We can’t take you with us, but if you want to join us reach the Aljava’s tavern and tell the bartender that the bee wants to enter the alvear”. After saying this the assassins fled and Fran remained stunned for a moment, until she gets up and starts running away from the mansion to reach the tavern. During her escape she saw the various corpses of the guards killed. After running for 10 minutes she felt already tired, so she continued to reach the tavern with a fast walk, when she reached the place told from the assassin she reached for the bartender, the bartender seeing her he says:”This place isn’t for children like you”. Fran nonetheless hearing this she continued walking towards him and whispers:”The bee wants to enter the alvear”. Hearing this the bartender looks at Fran and says :”so young still you want to choose this path, I won’t stop you”. After saying this he takes Fran to a room behind the counter and pushes a secret lever, a part of the wall opens showing a staircase going down. The bartender looks at Fran and says “After reaching the bottom of the staircase go to the counter on your left and tell the person standing there that you want to join”. After hearing this, she starts going towards the stairs. After passing through the part of wall that moved the bartender pulls the lever again restoring it at the original state, Fran seeing that the entrance was sealed off she panicked, but after a while she mustered her courage and continued going down through the staircase.

When she was reaching the end, she started hearing some people chearing, when she entered the secret tavern like room, she went as fast as she could to the counter on her left, upon reaching it she saw an old man with white hair and white beard. The man watching Fran says :”I never saw you here” while touching his beard then continued saying “you must be new around here, so did you come here to join the organization?”. Fran nodded and the old man said “Good, then I need you to choose between starting doing assassination right now or training with the instructor of issued by the organization the latter will cost you  money”. hearing this Fran asked :”Do I have to pay in this moment?” the man answered saying “No, but if you don’t pay we’ll take a sum of money from your contracts in the future until you pay off all your debt”. “I’ll choose the latter” said Fran looking with hope the old man, the hope to become strong enough to find again her mother.

After choosing this path Fran got trained for 10 years in how to use various assassination techniques that ranged from the teaching of all plants that can be used to either heal herself like the Frost Vine or to poison her targets like the Drilltongue, how to use various weapons, she got instructed in general history of the Atlas and Arca’s realm and noble manners like reading and talking. making her reach an high level of undercover ability in case she needed to infiltrate. After reaching 22 years she started taking assassination contracts that could help her find her mother. After 2 years during one of these contracts, she and her randomly assembled team by the organization, found out the bandits that kidnapped both her and her mother and Fran after killing three of them she tortured the last one until she found out what happened after that day. Her mother ended up being abused by the group of bandits and that they could do these kind of things because they made an agreement with a noble house. After hearing this she killed the bandit.

Two days after that event some nobles made a rally and started attacking everyone in the hidden tavern. Fran luckily could escape, but most of the assassin didn’t and the organization had to disband. Here she saw once again how dirty were the nobles saying :”All the nobles are scum and the royals are the worst to let them remain like this” . After running away she reached the portual part of the city taking a ship to reach Sutica a city of the Arcas’s realm to start gaining power to revolt against the nobles.


Character Name: Fran
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Fran is a 5'24'' dark elf with heterochromia black and red eye and silver wavy hair, has a trained body with long legs and a moderate chest size.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

- Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are correct, yet if you could perhaps add an example for metagaming then that would be amazing! ❤️

- The places ‘Virika’, ‘Malia’, ‘Arcon’ and ‘Taras’ don’t seem to exist,, Please fix this ❤️

- It doesn’t really make much sense that your character was able to singlehandedly kill a large group of bandits, or sneak into a heavily guarded manor and kill ‘all of the guards she came across’, even if she is an assassin.. Please do edit this ❤️

- It would be extremely unlikely for your character to have had links with and assassinated someone with relations to a royal family,, Please change this ❤️

- The clothing on your skin doesn’t seem to fit the theme of the server,, you may want to edit this a bit. ❤️

- Your bio seems to only contain one lore reference, that being the name of the city Sutica. Please edit this to add in at least one more, whether that is an event, another city name, etc. ❤️

 

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