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Cheruscan
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Cheruscan#9879
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Check bio
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Check bio
    Status: Accepted

The sound of tides crashing against the docks, seamen cursing and merchants trying to pass off their goods filled the air. That is to say, those sounds filled the parts of the air that were not yet occupied by the monstrous smell of fish. Pickled, salted, fresh, rotten, it did not matter. The homogenous mix of acidic stenches forced itself up Yis’akhár's nose, causing him great discomfort. How disgusting he found the animals, how uncommon they were where he was from. As he tried to get used to this large city, one he had never visited before, an Urbanite stepped up to him, hoping to usurp his attention.

“Welcome!” He began. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?” the words stung in the Kalamite's ears. He was not at all used to hearing the Common Tongue in this accent. In his nine years as a mercenary, he'd been taught to speak it by his comrades, but to hear a posh Heartlander speak posh words in his posh accent... Needless to say, you wouldn't find that in any Qalasheen companies.

Instinctively, Yis’akhár placed his hand upon Khopesh. The immigrants, tourists and merchants had wasted their afternoons staring across the seas, watching as the ship Yis’akhár was on got ever nearer to the city. Thinking himself too highly to watch over some blue lines at a city that would not go anywhere, the follower of Bahyweh had sharpened his sword, inspected his arrows and prepared his bow. These city types were not to be trusted, much like just about anyone on this godforsaken continent, so the man thought. 

He let out a deep sigh, streams of air loudly brushing along his beard. His face was stern, his eyes peered at the man before him. He expected an answer, no doubt. As the both of them stood there, Yis’akhár simply stared the man down, embracing the momentary, quite honestly awkward silence that surrounded them. After five whole seconds or so, he opened his mouth, saying:

”I have no goal, no direction. Bahyweh is my shepard.” before the man opposite him could say a word, he seized the moment, saying: “And I have no bloody coin, either. If you're here to sell me useless trinkets, find another fool to bother.”

Tactlessly, Yis’akhár would place his left hand upon the man, shoving him aside savagely. The Rheshish would then occupy the space where the city-dweller once stood, treading the path to the city centre without giving him a second thought.


Character Name: Yis'akhár Ish-Har'Yalach
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Dark green eyes | Olive skin tone | Thick brown beard | Shaven head | Hajmesh featuring tan, blue and cyan | Temet worn at all times | 6ft | 140lbs
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Character Biography states that your persona is from the Al-Barafra desert and traveled with the Tribe of Hiram, however I can not find such on the wiki. Please note that any lore reference must be on the wiki. If it is on the wiki, or anywhere on the forums, then please let me know!

  •  Please refrain from making up own places, languages, kingdoms, etc. Use the ones of our lore, provided in the wiki instead. 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message snoopie12! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at snoopie12#8195

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

To get started, I suggest doing; /creq Please can a CT monk come assist me starting out?

 

Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! :

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ snoopie12#8195]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message snoopie12 to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/ 

Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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