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ColourOfSong
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you use a chatting platform to communicate with others ooc, and use them for guidance, aid, etc
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when you force actions onto other roleplayers. An example is *Jimmy decapitates Nalu with his axe, leaving Nalu dead* instead you could use *Jimmy aims to decapitate Nalu, in the midst of their combat* leaving Nalu with a decision, instead
    Status: Accepted

S’avii was born in Atlas, specifically the Jade Peaks, in 1635, and raised by another Kha’Pantera, whom S’avii referred to as her Munna. S’avii’s birth Munna gave her to this Kha’Pantera, as their family had lived in poverty, and she wanted better for her child. While growing up the Kha’Pantera, Ko’linn, she was told extravagant stories of how Ko’liin would rescue lost Kha. By the age of 9, Ko’liin decided to start training S’avii. S’avii is not the best at combat and attempts to outwit her enemies.  When Ko’liin turned 70 (S’avii was 16) she let S’avii out into the world, as she was not in the right to take care of her anymore. S’avii has been out in the world for two years, trying to survive, alone.


Character Name: S'avii
Character Race: KHARAJYR
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: S’avii has small, dark eyebrows, and fur covers her head. Her chest area is quite fluffy. She has dark blue clothing, with golden accents.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

Application Pending!

 

There are a few changes that need to me made before we can whitelist you upon our server, failure to do so within the given 24 hours will result in an automatic denial:

 

-You must include at least one piece of server lore within your character's biography, this could be where she was born. So a place that currently exists upon our server.

 

Your application was very well written and I love the persona of your character, if you need any help or guidance please message me on the forums or my discord: Torky#3015

 

We also encourage new players to join our discord where our lovely application team and helpers can answer any questions or concerns.

 

Discord: https://discord.gg/y6wbeAq

 

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21 minutes ago, TorkoalTom said:

Ah okay! I fixed it, and added S'avii's birthplace.

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21 minutes ago, TorkoalTom said:

Changed Status to Under Review

Application Pending!

 

There are a few changes that need to me made before we can whitelist you upon our server, failure to do so within the given 24 hours will result in an automatic denial:

 

-You must include at least one piece of server lore within your character's biography, this could be where she was born. So a place that currently exists upon our server.

 

Your application was very well written and I love the persona of your character, if you need any help or guidance please message me on the forums or my discord: Torky#3015

 

We also encourage new players to join our discord where our lovely application team and helpers can answer any questions or concerns.

 

Discord: https://discord.gg/y6wbeAq

 

Have a Pupper

Image result for cute pupper gif

 

 

 

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Our current map is Atlas, Anthos was five years ago and therefore your character whom is eighteen wouldn't fit the time period.

 

You also need to specify where about in Atlas they live as saying just 'atlas' is too brief.

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10 hours ago, TorkoalTom said:

Our current map is Atlas, Anthos was five years ago and therefore your character whom is eighteen wouldn't fit the time period.

 

You also need to specify where about in Atlas they live as saying just 'atlas' is too brief.

Ah sorry! I added more lore, aswell as fixed some timeline issues.

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