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Sombra
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is using knowledge from outside of the roleplay.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is not giving a choice when severely injuring another player.
    Status: Accepted

  I was born in 1516. I was raised in the Village of Kaz'Ulrah. Where I was raised by a sorcerer after my parents died when I was 7. My parents where murdered by humans which sent me on the path of great anger. Though I was in a sad and angry state when I was taken in by the sorcerer, I found happiness in magic. During my childhood I always tried to stay happy and friendly. As I became an adult I started to accept the anger and use it to my advantage.

    I loved the sorcerer with all my heart and he loved me back. The sorcerer taught me many subjects like math history and science. I would plant roses for the sorcerer and pick flowers with him. He taught me everything I knew so I loved him very much. Then I became an adult and left the nest. When I left I started looking for a teacher in magic. Though I didn't find one I still searched up until I was 110. Once I was 110 I started wanting to find a female elf. I wanted to start a family  but it didn't happen. At that point I just didn't look for anything. All I did was live  my life and let it play out as it may. I am going to search for a teacher because I got interested in magic from my father the sorcerer.

 

 


Character Name: Sombra Umbram
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 180
Physical Description: I am 5"11" with hair that is white, with silver highlights. My skin is grey with a hint of blue and grey. I am 150lbs and I have violet eyes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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  1. You biography is good, but it could use a little bit of help, there isnt really any lore that I can find, Axios is not a village, so I would request you look back at the lore and add to your biography. Also you cannot start out with magic on the server so I might edit that part and change it slightly. If you need any help here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord:  https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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