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Erebis

By Erebis

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: having your character know something outside of his/her knowledge like using redstone even thought your characer may not understand what redstone is.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: forcing someone else to do an action like losing their head when you really cant control that and must give them an option to be beheaded or not.
    Status: Accepted

Born in a cave far far away, parents were killed by a pack of wolves and a humble farmer saved Erebis and brought him to the Carolustadt just at the end of the bandit war in 1668. Erebis was raised by this farmer who never told his name. He instructed Erebis to only call him “sire”. When Erebis was only 17 years of age, the farmer kicked him out onto the streets and left town never to be seen again. Confused and lost, Erebis left town wandering in the wild to find a Wizard fighting off guards from a keep he wasn't familiar with. That was when he found his calling, he wanted to learn how to be a wizard. He returned back to Carolustadt and continued on to learning more about the arcane arts. Erebis got a job as a farmers hand and lived in the loft provided to him until he had enough to buy his own land. His next conquest is to build his own home and finally train to become the wizard he is destined to be.

Character Name: Erebis
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: Dark hair, Dark eyes, slightly light skin, wants to be a wizard, medium build.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Cornivore

Changed Status to Under Review

1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but you can use a little help.

  1. Your personas biography is way too short, and it actually has no lore, I would request you take a look back at the wiki or forums and read some lore to add onto your biography and make it atleast a paragraph long.  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  2. Your interesting facts could use a little bit of help, currently they are not really long, I would request you please put them into a sentence format and make them look a little nice add some details.

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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Erebis

I don't understand what is wrong with my interesting facts. who is meant to see this info other than staff? to be honest I just wanna play. I will adjust things as much as I can but I just wanna be in the world and play and have fun like everyone else. 

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