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Bloody Zairos
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: a player's character makes use of knowledge that a player knows, but the character does not
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Forcing an action against another player
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Seth Flanagan
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: An extremely smart, yet clumsy character who is very good with technology and crops.
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Your application is solid however I have some pointers I need to address, first with your biography the most iffy part of it was when you mentioned bloodlust. This has been carried down from an orc curse when they get angry. If you could describe this in a different fashion it'll be perfect. 

Also it's inclined to not put 'interested in dark magic', as it puts a bad name upon your head. Remove this and just have it set as a secret ambition. 

 

You have 24 hours to complete any changes, PM me when you have finished for a quicker review or if you need some assistance.

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Welcome to the server of Atlas, I do hope to company on several of your journeys and hear from you time to time with having an enjoyable time. If you ever feel the need to ask some questions you can head over to the new player discord found here: https://discord.gg/uCwe7rv

or message me directly on the forums or discord here: ttwesten#9293

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