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Bloody Zairos

By Bloody Zairos

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: a player's character makes use of knowledge that a player knows, but the character does not
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcing an action against another player
    Status: Accepted

He is an young white male, with white hair. He is not very tall, and not the skinniest character. You never get to see his hair because he chooses to cover it up because it used to be green. He is from the kingdom of Renatus. He does not follow any of the religions that most of the human race follows. His mother (Chasadie) was a farmer and his father (William) was an engineer with great skill. He spent most of his childhood inventing high tech machinery, and working in the fields. He lost his parents in the night when a group of Dark Elves attacked his home for his father's inventions, but while he watched his parents get killed he went insane. Now whenever he hears his parents name or sees a Dark Elf, he goes into a state of panic which is usually described to be a hunger to destroy those who caused this to happen. He now only uses his technology to protect himself and farm.

Character Name: Seth Flanagan
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: An extremely smart, yet clumsy character who is very good with technology and crops.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application is solid however I have some pointers I need to address, first with your biography the most iffy part of it was when you mentioned bloodlust. This has been carried down from an orc curse when they get angry. If you could describe this in a different fashion it'll be perfect. 

Also it's inclined to not put 'interested in dark magic', as it puts a bad name upon your head. Remove this and just have it set as a secret ambition. 

 

You have 24 hours to complete any changes, PM me when you have finished for a quicker review or if you need some assistance.

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Welcome to the server of Atlas, I do hope to company on several of your journeys and hear from you time to time with having an enjoyable time. If you ever feel the need to ask some questions you can head over to the new player discord found here: https://discord.gg/uCwe7rv

or message me directly on the forums or discord here: ttwesten#9293

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