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EdenNoble


EdenNoble
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using Non-Rp to benefit Rp. For example; Messaging friends on skype to come save you during an RP event.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using Rp to give yourself an unfair advantage over others. For example; Writing that you punched someone and knocked them out, this is unfair to the opponent as he may not want to be knocked out. I know what it means, sorry if my explanation is lacklustre
    Status: Accepted

Eden grew up on a farm outside of Santegia with his Mother and younger brother. Eden lived a simple life, helping around the farm and hanging out with his brother. Eden's father went missing a few years after his younger brother was born and his mother will not explain to him why. Eden is determined to find out why and has been reading about the history of Santegia. Eden has recently found his father's secret chest, within it he has learnt more about his fathers past. His father in his younger days was a guard and had a book filled with stories about his time as a guard, filled with events such as the Kings Kidnapping, etc. Eden and his brother are avid hunters, unfortunately Eden's brother recently passed away due to a tragic hunting accident.  Eden never speaks of this as he was extremely close to his brother. Eden now works on the farm alone, Eden's mother has decided she will be selling the farm soon. As a result, she has sent Eden to the city to look for a job,  and this is where the story begins...


Character Name: Eden Jones Noble
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Hair- Short and Dark Brown
Facial Hair - Stubble, Dark Brown
Eyes - Dark Brown
Skin- White
Build - Tall, Athletic, Strong.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello! Welcome to Lord of the Craft! After carefully reviewing your application, I must say, you have done a fantastic job with the application. It's rare for me to actually get to accept an application on the first attempt, so great work, mate! The only thing I would say is keep in mind your fault, isn't the best fault. Honesty can definitely work against a character, but it's not as if you're going to find yourself at a severe disadvantage over it, often. I would work maybe one more fault into the character, but that's my suggestion. Either way, welcome to the server. Below you will find the necessary Discord links to help you find your place on the server:

 

LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

LotC Public Discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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