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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: feraxis
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Don't do things that you realistically shouldn't be able to do. Make sure you don't try to control anything out of your own premise and do not try to force actions onto another person. No characters are perfect and everyone has downsides including you.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Learnings things through out of roleplay means that your character would have no way of knowing otherwise. It's unfair to everyone and gives you information that you shouldn't have. An example; If your friend is being attacked and tells you that in voice call, you can't rush to their aide in help them, that's unfair to everyone.
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Xavier Barclay
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: 6'1 ft male weighing 90 KG, Dark brown hair and dark green eyes. Doesn't like to wear super fancy or extreme outfits if not in his armour.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

He stood wary of her. No visual threat. He drew in a deep breath; the unpleasant odours hit his nose. It wasn’t the first time he had been in the slums, and it probably wouldn’t be the last.

He shifted his weight, crouching down to a lower level in an attempt to make himself comfier. After a pause, he opened his mouth to speak.

“Nothing unusual in my story. I come from a loving family who are still back at home, still eating meals, still living ordinary but decent lives. My father was away quite a lot doing god-knows what. My father’s brother, my uncle Henryk, he was someone I was close to and respected. He always carried me on his shoulders when we were outside the house exploring together. Henryk decided it would be a good idea to teach me how to arm myself properly—the basics of swordplay. He taught me well until I was fourteen. By then, I knew I wouldn’t improve anymore. That’s when I decided to journey away from the warmth of my family and enter the real world. Traveling from town to town, road to road, I kept learning with each new place I reached.”

He stopped, realizing he’d rambled more than he ever wanted to. He felt no ill intentions or malice, only the strange compulsion forcing him to bare his story to a hag he’d never met.

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Hiya! Although your definitions and backstory is good, there's one nuanced thing to quickly pick up: Speaking not in first person. When emoting (interacting with the whole not through dialogue, I.e. John swings at Bob) you should speak in third person. For instance:

I stood wary of her. No visual threat. I drew in a deep breath; the unpleasant odours hitting my nose. It wasn't the first time I had been in the slums and it probably wouldn't be the last.

 

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He stood wary of her. No visual threat. He drew in a deep breath; the unpleasant odours hitting his nose. It wasn't the first time he had been in the slums, and it probably wouldn't be the last.

 

If you could go over your backstory and make those adjustments- I'll be happy to accept you!
 

You have 48 hours to make these changes otherwise I will unfortunately have to deny your application. When you have finished please message me on the forums or contact me on Discord @itsjustmemorgan to let me know so I can review it!

 

You are free to ask me any question regarding your application or LotC in general, additionally if you wish to speak to those in the community take yourself towards:

Our LotC Discord: Discord

 

As well as this if you still need help:

Check the wiki! WIKI

And our New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hiya! Consider yourself accepted onto the server! Well done for completing your application, and one great big welcome to Lord of the Craft!

I'm glad you've managed to go over the emotes in third person! Remember that going forward that when speaking out of character, you should speak in that third person!
 

To get started, The server IP is mc.lotc.co The server is version 1.21.1

I suggest going to tutorial island or do;  /creq Can someone come assist me?

 

Here are some links to help you start out!

Settlement Guides

Nations & Major Settlements

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord @itsjustmemorgan.  Additionally, on the server you can do /creq <message> with your question and someone will help you right away or you can also use the LotC Discord here!: Discord 

 

Linked below is the new player hub and a new player guide, look over it if you have a chance. 

New player hub

Another New Player Guide 

Have fun role playing!

 

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