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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: meta gaming is like raiding a so called "random" house but really you already know whats inside because somebody told you.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: instead of using "tried to ______" you use "killed", and you won the fight in a single blow
    Status: Accepted

Zyktrix Quivalur- not the most common name for an high elf. But she isn't the most common high elf either.  Being born during a solar eclipse twilight her still druid family always treated her as an outsider, saying her birth was ill-omen-ed. She grew up on the bare essentials, having her family not wanting be the sponsor of a villainess. No matter, it only made her stronger, made her independent of everything and everyone. She kept quiet ‘till her adulthood finally came, and she was free of her family. Being free she no longer suppressed her true colors and downed black dresses and a veil, clothes mocking the death of her weaker years. Her time is mostly spent in the Eternal Library, researching ancient tomes of magic, awaiting an era of slow progress for her to lead as a great Maehr'sae.


Character Name: Zyktrix Quivalur
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 50
Physical Description: Blinding white skin, deep purple eyes, metallic hair, unusual black clothing with red outlines, sharpened nails, and sharp bone structure.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been placed on…

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Your powergaming definition could use some refining, please feel free to reference our wiki page on power emoting, and maybe consider using an exxample.

The weakness to UV light would not exist irp, and I don't know quite what you mean by she can quell her bloodloost, but that would be best to remove as well.

I am not quite sure what you mean by 'bones sharp enough to cut cheese' but I do advise changing it, the description is meant to be a brief physical description.

She is allowed to research the magic, that is fine, just note that she can not actually practice it until the necessary rp and applications happen on the server.

 

If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI

 

Being placed on Pending means that your application was solid, though there are still some issues present that need a bit of tweaking. You’ve got 24 hours to make them using the [Edit] feature of the forum. Whenever you make any changes, contact me and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your app will either be Accepted or Denied. If Denial is the case, you will need to wait 3 hours before making another application.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command.


 

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Your application has been:

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On behalf of the Application Team, and LoTC as a whole, I’d like to welcome you to our community!

You will be implemented shortly, during this brief wait I implore you to visit our WIKI and continue reading up on server lore.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command.

 

Can’t wait to see you roleplaying!

 

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